Strategies to improve junior high school students' language expression ability: It is true that those who get a composition in Chinese exams win the world. However, the current junior high school students' language expression ability is not optimistic, which is mainly manifested in the boring language, lack of charm and boring reading. In teaching, the author guides and inspires students by letting them appreciate excellent senior high school entrance examination compositions, so as to improve their language expression ability. ?

First, the integration of the whole and dispersion, the length of each other, and the beauty of strewn at random

The whole sentence has a distinct rhythm, catchy and strong language potential; There are many kinds of loose sentences, which are patchwork and flexible in form. The meaning of long sentences is rigorous, precise and meticulous; The meaning of short sentences is concise, vivid and powerful. The flexible collocation and alternate use of whole sentences and scattered sentences, long sentences and short sentences will make the language changeable, cadence and cadence, and produce a special beauty of patchwork.

Example 1 (fragment of excellent composition "I am proud to live in Jiangnan" in the senior high school entrance examination) misty rain, swaying willows, shaded by green roofs; Small broken sun, curling smoke, calling for the late arrival of Wu Peng's boat; The bluestone road by the river leisurely leads to the high stone arch bridge in the distance. The boat is walking leisurely in the sky, and people are walking gently on the ground, just like in the painting …

This is a beautiful and talented Jiangnan hymn. The "bridge" of the article is flexible in sentence structure, fluent and natural to read, full of intricate beauty and rhythmic beauty.

Example 2 (My perception of happiness, excellent composition for senior high school entrance examination) Where is happiness? Having youth is happiness. Sixteen years old, the same age as Hua. Young and vigorous, I have enough time, enthusiasm and energy to study, struggle and create. With youth, I can think freely. With youth, I can be full of hope for the future. In the season of youth, we are unwilling to be lonely, with shyness, persistence, turmoil, efforts and self-respect. I will sow the seeds of happiness in the season of youth ...

The questions at the beginning of the article always start with the full text, and then in the form of alternating long and short sentences, showing a symmetrical aesthetic feeling in the melody of the free board, with distinct rhythm, harmony and fluency, directly pointing out the answer that "unremitting pursuit is the happiest", which is very infectious and convincing.

Second, use rhetoric skillfully, exert imagination and seek the beauty of images.

Rhetoric is an effective means to use language artistically and express thoughts and feelings appropriately. If we can exert our imagination and skillfully use rhetoric to create an image beauty, we can make the language expression appropriate and vivid, thus avoiding shallowness, clumsiness and even vulgarity.

Example 3 (from the excellent composition of the senior high school entrance examination "Appreciating Chinese with Numbers") 1 is an Optimus Prime, upright and indomitable backbone. Thus, we have the lofty righteousness of "who has not died in life since ancient times, keeping the heart of Dan in the history of history"; With the courage and fearlessness of "I laugh at the sky with a horizontal knife and leave two Kunlun mountains"; With the heroic spirit of "intentional killing thieves, powerless to return to heaven, dying a fair death, fast and fast". "2" is a beautiful swan, impeccably beautiful. So, we have a small rendering of "an apricot out of the wall"; After the rain, there is a begonia that "knows what it is, knows what it is, should be green and fat, should be red and thin"; It has an idyllic scenery of "flowers wither, red apricots are small, and when swallows fly, green water surrounds people" ...

I believe that everyone who reads this article will applaud the author's profound knowledge of ancient Chinese and wonderful thoughts! The author's imagination is strange, his conception is ingenious, and he skillfully uses common rhetorical methods such as metaphor, personification and parallelism to show the aesthetic feeling of the image to readers perfectly, which has strong visual impact and cultural appeal.

Example 4 (Fragment of "Scenery in Familiar Places", an excellent composition in the senior high school entrance examination) Gradually, I seem to be a tree. I opened my arms to let it live in, and it chatted with me on the branch. It said that the rain wet its wings, and its wings could not open and fly; It said that the strong wind tried to send it far when it was slow, but it didn't want to, so it soared against the wind; It says that lightning is jealous of its power and wants to knock it down, so it despises lightning and gallops in the air battlefield. It has no war horse, but it has infinite power. Although petite, but indomitable ... I admire its heroic posture and praise it. I long for its strength, so I hold its hand and feel its softness and strength. This made me familiar with the bus station, which became the place where we met and knew each other. ...

The author described his experience of dancing with sparrows at the bus station, imagined himself as a tree to accompany this poor little life, listened to the sparrow's voice, and expressed his awe and concern for life in rich imagination and association, and in wonderful contrast and contrast. The beauty of this scene-blending image is refreshing and moving.

Third, pay attention to details, elaborate and seek emotional beauty.

Writer Lee Joon said: "Without details, there can be no works of art ... The real description of details is an important means to shape characters and achieve typicality." The composition of the senior high school entrance examination is nothing more than this!

Example 5 (excellent composition fragment of the senior high school entrance examination "Can you still dream?" In my dream, you still wore a simple suit and apron and kicked me out of the kitchen: "Don't worry, don't worry, the food isn't ready yet!" Rough palms, stained with oil stains, and greasy touch still remain on my skin ... In my dream, you are still sitting in that sunny room, with your back to the sun, wearing reading glasses, leaning back on the couch, your gray hair shining with crystal colors in the sun, and an ordinary cookbook. You always turn it over every day and mutter, "My little daughter is developing, I have to get her something delicious." The old radio sang tin opera on the mahogany bedside table, and the picture was fixed in my dream. ...

This is a touching masterpiece in the examination room. The success of the article lies in the truth and touching details. Through a few details in my dream, the little author recalls grandma's meticulous care for herself-cooking, looking up recipes, feeding soup and comforting, full of rich life breath and deep yearning for her.

Example 6 (The story happened in Grade Three, an excellent composition for the senior high school entrance examination) The teacher's behavior is fixed, patterned and integrated. Holding a stack of papers into the classroom, and holding a stack of papers out of the classroom. The math teacher just left, followed by the English teacher. Of course, the physics teacher thinks it's appropriate. Day after day, every one of us keeps writing every day, every hour and every class-just because of the war in June. Then I didn't understand the question, and I was busy "asking for help" from the teacher and correcting the test paper ... nervousness was the only constant tone. As a result, our life is full of tension, and tension becomes everything we have. School, canteen, dormitory 3. 1 is a constant course; Tight, tight ... just to squeeze out more time to study ...

The author is also good at describing details when reviewing the whole junior high school study career. For example, the behavior of teachers in various subjects racing against time, the boring life of "three points and one line" on the eve of the senior high school entrance examination, and the description of the hurried scene of eating and walking are all very rich, vivid and vivid details, which are full of fun and make people laugh.

Fourth, accumulate culture, enrich connotation and seek the beauty of implication.

The lack of materials, dry and boring language and the desolation of spiritual home should be problems that need to be addressed and solved urgently. Therefore, accumulating rich cultural background, enriching the connotation of composition and pursuing the implicit beauty of composition are the magic weapons we need to master.

Example 7 (the excellent composition of the senior high school entrance examination "Boredom"-"Door" = "Heart") Please take a look at the mountains and rivers crossing between Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi; Please take a look at the sincere feelings of Guan Yiwu and Uncle Bao. Please take a look at the friendship of mutual respect and trust between Liu Huangshu and Zhuge Liang ... Why not follow Mr. Tao Yuanming's example of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely". By then, we will be able to "build a house under human conditions, but there are no chariots and horses" and "ask what you can do, your heart is far from partial" ... why not read Li Bai's "We are both lofty to the distant thoughts, who wants to go to heaven to embrace the bright moon"; Why don't you read Du Fu's "Although the country is broken and the mountains and rivers last forever, the vegetation is spring"; Why not read Su Shi's "I wish people a long time and a thousand miles of good scenery"; Why not walk into Notre Dame de Paris and appreciate the truth, goodness and beauty of human nature? Why not walk into Jane Eyre's life and experience her arrogant personality strength? ...

The most wonderful part of this article is the rich cultural background. The author fully mobilized his usual reading accumulation, widely quoted classics, such as historical allusions such as Running Water in the Mountains and Picking Chrysanthemums in Dongli, literary classics such as Notre Dame de Paris, Jane Eyre, and classic poems such as "Wish a long time, a thousand miles * * * *", all of which are freely used and endowed with articles.

Example 8 (For Your Dreams, an excellent composition in the senior high school entrance examination) "Everything is smashed into mud and ground into dust, and only fragrance remains." The past is scattered and turned into dust, but the lingering fragrance between flowers will not fade, just as people have their own beauty and fragrance when they are frustrated ... "Falling red is not heartless, but turning into spring mud will protect flowers." Even the smallest life has its meaning of existence-falling into the dark soil and giving birth to new life. This is a dream of falling red. Like me, depressed and low-key, but doing something. I don't want to be a beautiful flower forever. But go deep into the soil to explore the new world, make nutrients and become beautiful ... "I dare not speak loudly for fear of scaring people." Li Bai created countless classic works in his half-drunk and half-awake life. He doesn't want high officials and high salaries, he just wants to play songs under the moon. ...

The characteristic of this paper lies not only in its rich cultural implication, but also in giving innovative connotation to classical poetry, so as to make the past serve the present and come down in one continuous line. For example, the phrase "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud can protect flowers more" leads to your own dreams with falling red dreams, which is also "going deep into the soil to open up a new world"; "I dare not speak loudly, for fear of disturbing people" encourages me to seize my dream and forge ahead bravely in the indifference to fame and wealth and tranquility. In this way, every classic quoted by the author shows the origin of poetry, the ancients, and the dream of "I", and the free thinking for thousands of years, which shows the author's profound cultural heritage and extraordinary ability to control words.