To get the motivation of life, you must have enough courage; To get the motivation of life, we must have a firm belief; To get the motivation of life, you should have persistent patience.

2. "Diving, prepare for success"

Diving can test our will; Diving can save our strength; Diving makes us more prepared; Diving makes us more confident about the future.

[Excellent exercise 1]

Diving and success

Zhou Feng, Sanxia Middle School, Yichang City, Hubei Province

Epiphyllum spent a year quietly brewing, in exchange for a night of charm; It took the insect cicada four years of underground practice to sing loudly everywhere; Penguins try their best to dive, just to get up quickly ... Natural phenomena show us a philosophy: diving is the gestation before glory, diving is the brewing before loudness, and diving is the preparation before takeoff.

In the case of passive disadvantage, latent strategies can often turn passivity into initiative and disadvantage into advantage, thus achieving success. From ancient times to the present, from individuals to countries, countless facts have made a convincing interpretation of this philosophical thought.

Sinking makes people turn defeat into victory. In the Battle of wuyue in 496 BC, Yue was defeated, so Gou Jian surrendered. On the condition of the quality of the King of Yue, Fu Cha promised to withdraw. Gou Jian, like a loyal minister in Fu Cha, allowed Fu Cha to make a phone call in front of the car. Even when Fu Tea is sick, Gou Jian is willing to personally taste Fu Tea feces to match the medicine used by the doctor too much. For three years, Fu Cha was Gou Jian's ". Recruit talents and reuse capable people; Develop production, help the rich and help the poor, and make Yue stronger gradually. Ten years later, it finally "dived to the right depth" like a penguin. In 475 BC, the State of Yue attacked the State of Wu, which was defeated and Fu Cha committed suicide.

The potential is outstanding. Condoleezza rice, this name makes countless people envy. Yes, why is a dark-skinned woman on the throne of the Secretary of State of the United States of America? She was born in Birmingham, Alabama, where racial discrimination is the most serious, but she chose to dive like a penguin instead of giving in or fighting by force. Harsh racial discrimination convinced her that black children can only be equal if they are twice as good as white children. Excellent three times, you can surpass each other. So many years later, with all-round excellent quality, rich knowledge and excellent ability, she reached the top all the way and drew a "perfect" arc of life.

At that time, according to the complicated international situation and the reality and task that China is in the primary stage of socialism, Comrade * * put forward the national development strategy of "keeping a low profile and making a difference", which made China's economy move towards the fast lane of rapid development. As a developing country, we should not be sharp-edged in everything, or even deal with international issues with a "big country mentality." We are keen to play the role of "driver" and "leader" in international affairs, and we want to be ahead of everything, which may cause inevitable and unnecessary confrontation. If we hadn't tried to dive like penguins, would we have achieved such brilliant achievements today?

Diving is not passive waiting, but accumulating nutrients like epiphyllum; Diving is not coveting comfort, but quietly honing self-improvement like a cicada; Diving is not to swallow, but to dive like a penguin. Although it is full of loneliness and pain, it can make nutrition rich, strength strong and the result wonderful.

Take diving as our life strategy! No matter how difficult, passive and bad our present situation is, as long as we have the wisdom of penguins, we will be able to "soar" and reach the seemingly unattainable shore.

[Excellent Exercise 2]

The depth of life determines the height of life.

Qian Hu, Sanxia Middle School, Yichang City, Hubei Province

Tsunamis bursting out of thin air are ready to go in the depths of the sea, lightning that shakes the world is brewing in the depths of clouds, and towering trees are rooted in the depths of the soil. Most of the power of nature comes from the depths of nature, and where does the power of our life come from?

There is no doubt that it comes from the depths of our lives. In other words, the depth of our life gives us the most critical strength, and the key strength determines the height of our life.

The depth of diving comes from perseverance. As the saying goes, "A drop of water wears away a stone, and a rope saws firewood." The power of water droplets comes from their immersion in the long river of diving time, day after day, and finally become a feat of wearing a stone through a yang. The strength of strings comes from the fact that they bind themselves to the wheel of years, and they eventually break wood again and again. In order to draw Pushkin on the Neva River, the famous Russian painter Lie Bin read a lot of relevant historical books and poems, conceived for a long time, and drew hundreds of sketches. He kept drawing and revising, and it took him 20 years to draw an ideal picture. How hard it is to smear for 20 years, but Lie Bin has already sunk. Lie Bin spent 20 years demonstrating the depth of his life's diving.

The depth of diving comes from consistent concentration. Man's life is limited, and so is his energy. Only concentration can bring people's strength into full play. People often say that "there is heaven above and Suzhou and Hangzhou below" and "it is always appropriate to compare the West Lake with the West Lake", but some people are unmoved. Hong Shilu, a famous entomologist, devoted himself to scientific research while working in Hangzhou University and stayed by the West Lake. But I have more things to do. As the ancients said, if you are infatuated with sex, you are determined to win. And Lu used his infatuation with sex to explore the depth of his life, which was enough to eclipse the lake.

The depth of diving comes from the courage not afraid of difficulties. The road of life is tortuous and full of thorns. Only by going forward bravely can we go forward bravely. Cold, dirty and humid laboratories will make instruments fail and harm people's health, but it has never shaken Madame Curie's belief in scientific research. Madame Curie wrote down the room temperature: 6 degrees Celsius in the work diary of1February 6, 899, and then put ten exclamation marks beside it. Marie Curie, a woman, a scientist and a brave woman, expressed her determination to conquer any difficulties. After she overcame one difficulty after another, the depth of life extended in one exclamation point after another.

Without diving into deep water, penguins have no power to break through the water and go ashore, so they have no beautiful longitude; Similarly, without deep diving, a person can only float in the long river of life, never land on his own land, let alone fly in his own sky.

Rome was not built in a day, nor was the Yangtze River built in one river. Our deep diving needs our perseverance, concentration and courage. With these, let time accumulate our energy and let life brew our explosion. Only the moment when we soar in the sky is the moment when we create new heights in life and show the great power of diving.

[Excellent Exercise 3]

Mujibuliu

Chen Xiao, Sanxia Middle School, Yichang City, Hubei Province

Ancient sages, many of whom were ugly and unwise, must be very clever in their actions. For example, in Laozi, it is recorded that "if you are straight, if you are clumsy, if you argue." Really talented people don't always talk about their talents. Their goal is the sky, so they will not be satisfied with swimming on the water. They will let themselves sink deeply, just like

This reminds me of the wooden chicken in Zhuangzi. According to Sheng Da and Zhuangzi, Xunzi was good at training cockfighting. He trained a good chicken and didn't panic when he heard other chickens crow. "It looks like a wooden chicken, and morality is no problem." Wooden chicken looks stupid, but it is actually looking at opportunities. When his opponent shouts and rushes, he will try his best to fight for it.

Wooden chicken's "stupidity" and "stupidity" are different. To give your opponent a fatal blow and defeat him in his contempt and ridicule is to accumulate strength. This is not a despicable trick, but calmness, strategy and wisdom.

In the long river of history, there are countless people who are calm and sophisticated, but those who have the same strategy as Muji are rare, and Gou Jian is one of them.

According to the Family History of King Gou Jian of Yue, in the Spring and Autumn Period, in order to avenge himself, King Gou Jian of Yue "thought hard, dared to sit and let go, dared to sit and lie down, dared to eat and dare to taste." Gou Jian personally drove for Fu Cha, the prince of Wu, and was driven by Fu Cha. He seems to give in, but he secretly accumulates a force in his heart. When this force suddenly broke out and attacked Foca, it was all the same. He pretends to obey, but in fact he accumulates strength, which is his strategy; He seized the opportunity and released the power of his savings just right. This is his wisdom. His words and deeds explained the true meaning of the latecomers, and it was also the fulfillment of the "wooden chicken does not stay".

In fact, aren't we students also living wooden chickens? We have been grinding a sword for twelve years, constantly casting ourselves with knowledge, enriching ourselves and strengthening ourselves. Isn't it a hard blow for the college entrance examination? Just like the penguin in the material, in order to rush out of the water and land on the ice embankment, it will try to sink itself into the water, even if it is deeper, it will save more strength for it to rush out of the water.

A wooden chicken stays on an impetuous person.

You can refer to it, or write it yourself! The college entrance examination is no joke. You should practice your composition seriously now.

I want to get rid of hot summer. 500 words of historical knowledge: pink spring has passed and hot summer has arrived; In summer, the sun is like fire, burning the earth mercilessly, and the usually vibrant trees become listless; Usually lively puppy, but also lazy lying under the big tree, showing red tongue; There are few people on the road. Most people hide in air-conditioned rooms, blow electric fans, drink cold drinks and never go out again. They also have a lot of prickly heat, and they are covered in sweat when they go out to play. The most comfortable thing is to wash them down with a basin of cold water. The dazzling sun and scorching weather make people want to hide in the refrigerator. People with air conditioning are always on at home for 24 hours, so they are not afraid of heat stroke. I want to drive away the hot summer, I don't want to get prickly heat; I want to drive away the hot summer and draw a beautiful face; Because I was afraid of the heat in summer, I couldn't go anywhere, so I stayed at home and held it.

500 words of history, new knowledge, hot August, extremely hot.

On the road, large and small wheels flew by, for fear that the tires would be burnt if they stayed a little longer.

People also walk very fast.

Because the heat on the road makes them feel like they are in a steaming steamer.

The banyan tree on the roadside held its head high and listened impatiently to the cicada singing, which made the dull day more irritable.

The whole world, the air seems to have solidified.

I stood at the window with a cup of tea in my hand, enjoying the coolness brought by the air conditioner.

A harsh voice interrupted my flying thoughts. That is a construction site not far from my home.

They are still working in hot weather.

They are wearing helmets, * * * waist, towels around their necks and shorts.

But they still keep on working.

Transport cement, mix concrete and build walls.

In spite of the hot weather, they still work hard.

I stood upstairs, but I could see their dark bodies shining in the hot sun, and they went to their next job without sweating.

I can't see their faces clearly, but I think their faces are the same, simple, simple and sad.

They are so honest, not afraid of hardship, darkness and heat, because they know that their parents, wife and children are still waiting for their meager income to maintain their lives.

They can't fall.

What about the heat? Isn't it red to be beaten or throw some cold water on your body? At the thought of the child's expectant eyes, the child's performance is excellent, and it is worthwhile to suffer again.

The heat wave is pressing and can't compare with their enthusiasm at work.

Their hearts are always full of warmth.

They continued on the construction site, for themselves, for their families and for the construction of the motherland.

Every time I see the tall buildings born from their hands, their hearts are warm, and their previous hard work has long been forgotten.

The sun continues its heat, the cicada continues its chirping, I look up at the blue sky, and the red sun burns the earth and its creatures unscrupulously.

Watching them work hard, the workers help each other and talk and laugh during the break, I don't care about this hot weather at all.

My heart is moist.

After a sip of tea, the scenery outside the window remains the same.

The road is still busy, coming and going in a hurry, the roadside is still humming, and the construction site is still full of their tireless figures.

August, hot summer ......

Draw a leaf for life. As long as there is faith, there will always be miracles. Although the hope is slim, it will last forever.

American writer Ou; Henry told a story in his novel The Last Leaf: In the ward, a dying patient saw a tree outside the window from his room and fell down one by one in the autumn wind.

The patient looked at the rustling leaves in front of him and his health went from bad to worse.

She said, "When all the leaves are gone, I will die.

"An old painter learned that he drew a green leaf with a crayon and hung it on a branch.

The last leaf never fell.

Because of the green color in life, the patient miraculously survived.

500 words of history, new knowledge, unforgettable summer, unforgettable summer summer gives people a feeling of hot summer, and it is an unforgettable season.

The universe runs in the laws of nature, and each season has different colors, which gives people a special impression, such as the orderly cycle of the four seasons and the orderly operation of spring, summer, autumn and winter. This cannot be changed, only qualified.

The heat in summer is a favorable opportunity to promote the rapid growth of living things. Suppose there were no such good times, what would the world be like and the consequences would be unimaginable.

Let's not complain that summer is not good, summer is not good, this is a program designed by God for us, and no one can violate it, let alone resist it. Only by adapting to it can we live happily.

Otherwise, you will be eliminated by the laws of nature, and there is no room for you in this world.

Summer is the season of Yuan Ye, full of green and full of green. Everywhere is full of vitality, which makes people feel that the world is full of vitality and charm.

In the hot sun, the earth is warm by the blazing sun, as warm as a hot kang in winter. When you are tired, you can hide on the ground at will and feel the warm care of the hot sun and the earth, which is enough to make people intoxicated and ecstatic. I really want to lie in this unique environment and share the special care and care in midsummer.

The abundant rain in midsummer, like tap water that can be turned on at any time, comes at once. Rain full of ocean breath nourishes the earth like mother's milk, and nurtures the happy growth of everything. The whole world is constantly upgrading in the ever-changing realm and moving towards a brand-new realm.

The harvest fruit is conceived in this beautiful season, with infinite dreams and a better life tomorrow for human society ... This is the special charm of summer, and we are not allowed to doubt or doubt.

There are sunshine and precious fresh water resources in this world, which laid a vibrant foundation and gave birth to a brand-new world on this planet.

There is a law in this world, that is, positive and negative contrast, mutual assistance of Yin and Yang, hot and cold exchange, and … countless times of mutual contrast to show the working principle of this world.

Therefore, we don't have to care about the interpretation of those special natural phenomena, share the beauty of what season in what season, try our best to adapt to the operation law of nature, and thus feel the charm of natural scenery.

In the hot summer, the sun is shining and the heat wave is rolling. Although it is a little uncomfortable, it is a season of blooming flowers, full of vitality, birds and flowers, and the beautiful world is so beautiful and warm.

We are integrated into this beautiful world, become a part of this vast world, and roam freely in this green kingdom. How happy and gratified we are, how perfect we are in midsummer, and how grateful we are to God for his warm care and comfort.

Without the warm care of this midsummer, the world would not be so charming and full of vitality. I sincerely thank God for his ingenious arrangement to make this world so colorful and create a suitable living environment for mankind.

Cherish the precious time of each season, live every day well, let a cheerful mood accompany us to move forward happily and stride towards a better future, and tomorrow will be better.

Unforgettable early summer history, new knowledge, early spring afternoon is always so cool and quiet, a breeze blowing, naughty to stir my hair.

In this quiet afternoon, I always like to meditate quietly, suddenly remembering that when I was at home, my father always liked to gently touch my head with his big hand.

My father is an introvert and doesn't like to talk much, but he always laughs when he is with me.

When I was a child, my father always accompanied me to watch cartoons, from the cartoon city after 5 o'clock to the windmill after 6 o'clock. We see them on time every day.

When I am happy, my father will laugh with me.

At that time, my father was young. Now when he smiles, there are always three vivid wrinkles on his forehead.

At that time, I still couldn't figure out why people as old as my father liked watching cartoons.

When I grow up, I finally understand that if I like someone, I like whatever he likes.

This is the way my father loves me ... My relationship with my father is like friends, like teachers and students.

He not only played with me, but also taught me a lot about being a man.

I remember one time, I didn't finish my homework, and the teacher called me dad.

When I got home at night, I was too nervous to walk, even slower, but I finally reached the door.

I opened the door with a nervous heart.

"Come to my room.

"My father's words are lukewarm, so I can't decide whether my father is angry or not.

My heart is hanging in my throat, as if I were about to jump out accidentally.

When I entered the room, my father didn't scold me as I expected, but stared at me calmly. Under my father's gaze, all my shame and regret welled up in my heart.

Tears can no longer be controlled and keep running down my cheeks.

At this moment, my father came over and patted me on the head. Although I didn't look up at his face, I could feel him looking at me with gentle eyes.

He didn't say anything criticizing me that day, but told me that he believed I was a good boy.

That night, I made up my unfinished homework.

Father didn't punish me, but his expression can make a child correct his mistake on his own initiative more than punishment.

I was still very moved until I went to bed at night.

The next morning, I passed my father's room

My father looked at me and smiled. The sun shone on his face. She smiled so kindly and gently at me that he suddenly felt a warm current coming to his heart.

..

The warmest thing is the 600-word historical knowledge. As long as I can remember, I have a lot to say to my mother, but I have been unable to say it because I am embarrassed.

Take this opportunity to write a composition today, let me get it off my chest! I want to say to my mother, "I love you, mom." In the depths of my memory, I have always cherished that warm-hearted thing. "

"I remember it was a spring Sunday, and there were no clouds in Wan Li. I got up listlessly, and my mother was busy bringing me a balanced breakfast.

I ate a little and then went to do my homework. It was written that the sour water in my mouth kept pouring out, and I held back. After a while, I couldn't help it any longer. "Wow ..." I opened my mouth and spit out all my breakfast.

When my mother heard the noise, she cleaned up the stolen goods on my mouth, hands and clothes with a rag, and then cleaned up a pool of stolen goods on the ground with a plastic dustpan. After she was busy, she let me sleep.

In order to make my stomach feel better, I kept rubbing it.

"Once, twice, three times, four times, five times ..." Counting, I entered a sweet dream.

When I woke up, it was three or four o'clock in the afternoon.

Mother's beautiful big eyes are full of blood.

Look at me and say softly, "mom will take you out to play for a while."

One is to give you some air, and the other is to relax you, okay? "I nodded, because I haven't gone out to fly a kite for a long time.

Dressed, I took a kite and ran out of the house to breathe fresh air like a bird just coming out of a cage.

As soon as I got out of the stairs, I seemed to get well at once, which was very comfortable.

Busy flying a kite, ready to let it fly in the sky, "Hoo ..." The wind came, and I was busy seizing this opportunity to run. Kites are flying in the sky, and I'm a little carried away. I ran straight ahead and accidentally tripped over a big stone, even bleeding, and I cried. My mother quickly bought a band-aid to stop the bleeding, and I watched it flow involuntarily.

Mom, I want to say to you: "Mom, thank you. I will study hard to repay you. Please believe me. "

I love you.

"

Is there any hot topic composition? Summer is coming! Summer is coming and the weather is getting hotter and hotter.

These days, the weather is very hot, even if I stay indoors, I keep sweating.

Many people have turned on the air conditioner.

Some people don't like summer, saying it's too hot.

But I like summer best.

In summer, we can catch fish and shrimp in the stream with our father, or catch cicadas in the Woods.

I also like cold drinks shops in summer, because there are all kinds of cold drinks I like to drink, and there are many delicious ice creams. It's really cool! I like summer vacation best. Children can have fun and travel with their parents.

1. Introduction Postgraduate dissertations are the main basis for measuring whether the academic level of graduate students meets the standard of degree awarded.

The review of graduate dissertations is an evaluation of whether the dissertations have reached the corresponding level.

Although the comment is short, it is very important, and it involves whether you can graduate, get the corresponding degree, or get the corresponding degree with excellent evaluation.

Therefore, it is the bounden sacred duty of every paper reviewer to write comments objectively and accurately and make proper evaluation on the work of graduate degree thesis.

2. Evaluation According to the comments of the dissertation, it is necessary to evaluate the papers submitted for review. The assessment is mainly based on the Regulations on Academic Degrees in People's Republic of China (PRC) (adopted at the 13th meeting of the Standing Committee of the Fifth NPC on February 1980). Because graduate degrees are divided into master's degrees and doctor's degrees, the requirements for papers are different in principle.

To apply for a master's degree thesis, the main examination contents are: (1) mastering the solid basic theory and systematic professional knowledge of this subject; (2) have the ability to engage in scientific research or independently undertake professional and technical work.

For applying for doctoral thesis, the main assessment is: (1) mastering the solid and extensive basic theory and systematic and in-depth professional knowledge of this discipline; (2) Having the ability to engage in scientific research independently; (3) making creative achievements in science or specialized technology.

3. Under the guidance of the tutor, the graduate students at the evaluation level have completed the research and writing of their dissertations, and generally need the following evaluation: (1) the evaluation of the tutor; (2) Peer expert review; (3) the defense Committee defends the defense; (4) Review by the Academic Degrees Committee.

The first three links require written comments.

Due to different angles and different orientations, comments are written in different ways.

Especially the conclusion of the review, the author will explain it in detail later.

Generally speaking, the reviewer of master's degree thesis should be an expert with the title of associate higher vocational college or above, and generally should be a master's tutor; The reviewers of doctoral dissertations should be experts in higher vocational colleges and above, and generally should be doctoral supervisors.

Comments on graduate dissertations require accurate wording and objective evaluation. Whether it is positive or negative, it must be well-founded and convincing.

A good evaluation can't add one more word, nor can it lose one word.

4. Evaluation content Generally speaking, the evaluation of a dissertation includes the following aspects: (1) The topic selection of the dissertation mainly depends on whether it belongs to the forefront of this discipline and whether the research work has theoretical significance and practical value.

In China, most of the projects listed in the National 973 Project Plan, the 863 Project, the National Natural Science Foundation and the National Key Scientific and Technological Projects are at the forefront of scientific development, because they have been demonstrated by peer experts in the process of project establishment, which is the focus or focus of peer attention.

(2) Literature review mainly depends on whether we have mastered the latest trends and progress of related research work in this discipline.

Literature review has two aspects: quantity and quality. In terms of quantity, it mainly depends on whether the main documents related to this subject field are basically covered around the theme of the paper, and in terms of quality, it mainly depends on whether the representative papers and influential main documents in this subject field are summarized.

For example, the literature of influential academic journals and conferences in this discipline and the works of influential scholars should be reflected in the literature review.

More importantly, the dissertation review needs to be summarized by the author's literature review to see if it summarizes the overall trend, law and problems to be solved in this discipline and research direction.

(3) Main work and innovation, academic significance and value, which are the core contents of dissertation evaluation.

For doctoral dissertations, the research work should be innovative and systematic.

Comments should not only list, summarize and summarize the main work and innovations of the submitted review papers, but also point out their academic value.

In the writing of dissertation comments, a prominent problem is that in the reviewed graduate dissertations, the general author has summarized the main work and innovations of the dissertations, and the reviewers of the dissertations should summarize and evaluate the work and innovations of the dissertations from a higher height and a broader perspective.

(4) Thesis writing Thesis writing is an important aspect of dissertation evaluation.

It mainly examines whether the writing of the paper is clear and coherent, whether the experimental data can be used, and whether the inference is scientific and correct.

Through the writing of the paper, we can also see whether the author has a meticulous work style, and the orderliness and systematicness of the paper are also the embodiment of whether the research work is systematic.

(5) Problems and Suggestions Any research work, whether high-level or low-level, will inevitably have problems, which is beyond reproach and is well known.

But generally speaking, for quite some time before, domestic academic circles did not dare to point out that too sharp problems would affect the overall evaluation of the paper, so they only made a positive evaluation and did not point out the problems existing in the research work.

In recent years, in the evaluation of dissertations in some key universities, special columns with problems have been set up, and many experts have truthfully pointed out that they have played a very good role.

In fact, objectively speaking, the relationship between the achievements and the existing problems of the paper should be analyzed in detail, and it cannot be generalized.

The fact that there are many or big problems does not necessarily mean that there are no creative results or the results are of little value.

(6) Opinions and conclusions Through the review of doctoral dissertations, opinions and conclusions should include or imply the following contents: a. Does the dissertation reflect the author's solid and extensive basic theory and systematic and in-depth professional knowledge in this discipline; B. Whether the research work of dissertation can reflect the author's ability to engage in scientific research independently; C whether the research work of the paper has achieved creative results in science or special technology.

The final comment conclusion is related to the identity of the commentator.

In my opinion, if you are a doctoral supervisor, the final accurate conclusion is that the thesis meets the requirements of doctoral thesis and agrees to be reviewed by peer experts.

If it is a peer review expert, it is agreed (or suggested) to organize a thesis defense committee to arrange defense if the thesis submitted meets the requirements of doctoral thesis.

In the case of the thesis defense Committee, it is planned to be: by secret ballot of the defense Committee, ...

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