In my opinion, the advantages and disadvantages of this article are obvious.

The good thing is that as an article on criminal investigation and solving cases, criminal cases are interlocking and constantly superimposed, which is very attractive. Like a magnet, it tightly attracts the eyes and the heart, so that people who stop to do other things in the process of reading the article can basically finish reading it non-stop, which is still OK in terms of visibility and wonderful degree.

Hong kong style is also a type I have never seen before. A large number of Cantonese words are used in the article, and the dialogue between the characters is full of Hong Kong flavor, as if being in the scene of TVB classic Hong Kong drama. This is a novel and familiar experience.

However, as far as the emotional lines of the two protagonists are concerned, Li Chengrui and Lin Yi, a just policeman and a talented young killer, should be particularly interesting, but I think the author is a little overexertion (personal opinion).

As I said before, I am afraid that my feelings will progress too fast, and it is easy to play. I feel violated and it is easy to abandon the article. The emotional rhythm of the original essay is very important to me. I will feel very comfortable if the author writes the emotional line between attack and acceptance delicately and appropriately.

Although the author has repeatedly stressed that Li Chengrui fell in love with Lin Yi at first sight, fell in love at first sight and fell in love at first sight, but a man in his late thirties, with his girlfriend who has been in steady contact for many years, is still a people's policeman with integrity and a sense of justice. In fact, he has already moved his heart to a victim's student (later proved to be the teacher he framed) and a little boy who is only seventeen or eighteen years old and still in high school. He has nothing to do with it. He's even crazy. The author proved that Li Chengrui fell in love with Lin Yi with a long confession and Li Chengrui's self-report full of sweet and greasy taste. Almost all describe emotions positively. I think it's very direct and concentrated, but it's also very abrupt.

On the other hand, the pair of Li Chengrui's eldest brother and the police's good brothers, because they are vice CP, didn't write much, in a few words, just right, but more real, actually let me taste a lot of sweetness.

Another thing that makes me uncomfortable is that the author is used to writing in the way of "reasoning", "telling inner monologues" and "commenting", and he can't wait to dump all his thoughts and conclusions. It easily makes me impatient. For me, the author is involved too much. In fact, many times, readers' feelings about emotional lines and understanding of plots can be "combed" by the author's various shaping and guidance of himself. For example, if I want to have fun in cooking, I can study the menu by myself, or ask the chef for guidance, instead of letting you directly serve me the cooked dishes.

So these four stars are mainly for plot and writing. I think the emotional line of attack and defense can be more natural. Otherwise, looking at the long and strong inner monologue and emotional analysis will make me feel that Li Chengrui is like a middle-aged strange uncle who is a little greasy and hungry ... (Personal opinion)

Friends who like Hong Kong style and criminal investigation are still worth reading!