One is magnanimous and innocent. Since it is written casually, it is best not to make it up or paint it. Write a photo, express your true feelings, and frankly express your understanding and opinions. Although it may not be complete and profound, it has its own vitality because it comes from life and from the heart. For example, Xu's "Looking for a Doctor" wrote about her experience of hanging up in the emergency room. Who hasn't experienced seeing a doctor? What is there to write about? However, the author does not think so. Perhaps this experience has been deeply embedded in her memory. So although she wrote casually, she compared her illness, her parents' concern and the indifference of medical staff. Through a series of details, her writing is true and credible, which moves readers to call for "medical ethics" to be with her. You can say that her writing is too shallow, and you can also say that she is practical and does not reveal a broader social background, but I think that a middle school student's work is true and touching enough. With such a narrative basis, it is not difficult to improve it in the future. On the other hand, in order to please teachers, parents or editors, it is sad and terrible to invent, fabricate, copy and piece together things before they are clearly written, and learn the "cheating" and "cheating" of adults first. We should start with the authenticity of the composition and resist and reverse the unhealthy trend of cheating in the composition.

The second is to attract people to be good. Does writing a composition truthfully mean that everything can be written and everything is "truthfully reflected"? Not exactly. Life is rich and complicated. What we experience, see and hear every day is good and bad; Some are meaningful, enlightening, enlightening, some are boring, trivial and even ugly. To write, to reflect, what should our eyes reflect? Where should our interests be? Of course, we should also pay attention to the mainstream and confidently praise positive and beautiful things. Even if we want to reflect on negative things, we should have a correct view and attitude and distinguish right from wrong, good from evil. Right and wrong, eliminating evil and promoting good should be the habits we must develop. Take the melody from the heart written by Zhan Yingjue as an example. In the face of a group of children in orphanages, most people are sympathetic, but of course a few people despise or even hate them. On the other hand, our author tries to get close to them, tell them stories and play games with them. Because she "opened the children's closed hearts with the most sincere love in the world", she also "really felt the power of love". Perhaps this is the value of this exercise! Very valuable. Like this little author, we should be kind to others, attract people to be kind, don't dance school, don't evade tactfully, and don't be biased and stubborn, so that prose can be written well.

Third, give people a sense of beauty. Prose is a kind of prose. After all, it belongs to literary works and should not be isolated from beauty. There is no shortage of beauty in life, but discovery. When we are writing prose, if we can find and dig out the pleasant aesthetic feeling from the life that ordinary people don't care about, and reflect it with beautiful writing, it is not only the success of our works, but also the exercise of our ability. At this point, Qing Chuan's The New Owner of the Old House will enlighten us. He wrote about the old house where he lived for many years, narrow and deep alleys, creaking stairs, no bathroom and only a wooden toilet ... but I read it anyway, just like the author, because he also wrote about people who lived here and grandparents who were kind to him. How beautiful it is, it is meaningful. This is much more valuable than those works that vent casually and moan without illness, and it is by no means comparable to those works that are artificial, obscure and pretentious.

In short, as long as we sincerely work towards the goal of truth, goodness and beauty, we will be able to write a good article one day.

Fan Wen:

Essay: Try to change your mood.

Born in the world and existing in the universe, you are no more than others, and you are no less than others. With the scorching sun, you have a beautiful Yue Hui, and you are not short of brains and hearts. Only you have the courage to show yourself in the development of the times. In life, there are always many unfair and unbalanced things. As the saying goes, there are no unjust fools in any temple, but everyone is equal in good times and bad, whether facing leaders or ordinary people. In this vast world, there is no humbleness, but there is meanness. There is no nobility in the world, but there is a noble figure.

In life, people are often disheartened, at a loss, and hit a wall everywhere, which leads to slander others and hurt themselves. Sometimes the mood is that the face of the moon keeps turning and changing secretly. Occasionally, the stars are happy to hold the moon. Occasionally, the time of sadness and joy is always fleeting, but the time of sadness is always long. I advise my friends not to bother themselves in this situation. Life is like this.

If you are a girl, go shopping and pick out a favorite dress and get a good-looking hairstyle; Make an appointment to chat with girlfriends, tell their own sufferings, talk about life and talk about the future. It's as simple as that, and it will be a clear sky.

If you are a boy, you might as well invite a few buddies to play ball games, play chess and ride a bike to the suburbs to design your own bright future. How cool it is to be accompanied by the wind! The mood will also change.

Life is like this. Pain is followed by happiness. Perhaps no one has the heart to taste the loss, but some people have deliberately tasted the happiness. Everyone has the right to love and be loved. Friends love themselves! Only when you know how to love yourself can you love society and life.

Try to change your mood, life is no longer rainy.