Today, our school sports meeting. The students entered the stadium and sat in the stands. The news that the men's and women's Group A 60-meter race is about to start came from the radio. Two other students and I were busy at the designated place and reported at eight o'clock. The teacher took us to the runway. My heart is like a rabbit, and my slow breathing has become urgent at the moment. I keep comforting myself: don't be nervous and relax. Even so, I still feel as if there are thousands of pairs of eyes staring at me, and I feel uncomfortable all over. It will be our group's turn to run soon. We strode to the starting line. The teacher shouted: Take your positions, everyone, get down, put your hands on the ground and keep your eyes on the front. Hearing the preparation, I tilted my hips slightly. Lean forward. Iāng rang with a bang, and the players rushed out like an arrow. It was a little slow at first, but then it ran like hell. At this time, I can't hear any sound, and I only think of two words in my heart: run! I finally caught up with my classmates next to me. Suddenly, my foot slipped and a shoe flew out with a swish. My in the mind a surprised, my god, shoes! How can you make such a big joke at this time? What should I do? Run? No running? Running socks beads on cinders tastes bad. How can I explain to my teachers and classmates if I don't run? At this time, I heard the shouts of my classmates: persistence is victory. If you persist in the right way, you must persist in the end! In this way, I kept running with one foot high and one foot low. Through a thin layer of socks, I feel small cinders running under my feet. 10m, 5m, 3m Finally, I crossed the finish line with one foot. I was relieved and slowed down slowly to stop. I raised my right foot, looked at the black socks and took a long breath. At this time, there was a warm applause in my ear. With the autumn wind, we ushered in the annual autumn sports meeting. The sports meeting began on a sunny day. This sports meeting is different from previous sports meetings for me. This sports meeting is the last sports meeting of my primary school career. I waited at the gate of the sports ground for a long time, looking forward to it for a long time, and finally saw the school team. Many students came to the sports ground. Very spectacular. I looked around [Note: Zhang: Look. Describe looking around. ], only to see the team in our class, and then plugged in. In the stadium, you are greeted by the green lawn in the center of the stadium runway. After a while, the game began. The first race is the 60-meter race. Huang Yushan from our class took part, so Qin Zheng and I went down with Huang Yushan and cheered for her when she started running. There was only one whistle on the red plastic runway, and the athletes ran forward like arrows. At this time, the students on both sides of the runway surrounded by thick human walls, and everyone kept shouting: Come on! Come on! In the cheers, the athletes rushed forward for fear of falling behind. ], you chase after me, and in a short time, the field entered a white-hot stage. I saw Huang Yushan in our class galloping forward like a sword. Huang Yushan, come on! Huang Yushan, come on! I shouted myself hoarse. Fortunately, she didn't let me down. She won the second place and entered the final. She also achieved good results in the final, adding luster to our class. In the afternoon, it's my turn to play. I took part in the rice competition, and soon it was our group's turn to run. I can't help but get nervous and sweat for myself. I am absorbed [note: absorbed: absorbed]. Concentrate on one thing. Describe a high concentration. ], eyes staring at the front, hold your breath, as if waiting for the enemy. ] soldiers. I just heard the referee say, take your positions and get ready to run! I am like a runaway wild horse, like an arrow that leaves the string, rushing forward quickly. I heard someone shouting: Zeng, come on! Zeng Zhilin, come on! Hearing this, I rushed forward even harder. I was in the lead, but when I slowed down at the end, a girl in yellow next to me rushed over. She won the first place, and I only came second. Now that I think about it, I feel a little sorry. However, I made it to the final. There is a lawn edge at the starting point of the meter, waiting for the final. We are very happy on the lawn. Jing Ya, Qi Yi, lin li and CoCo Lee all came to accompany me and cheer me on, which made me full of confidence in the final. As a result, I only ranked third from the bottom, which is fifth. I didn't surprise them, and I was a little disappointed in myself. Maybe I don't exercise often, so I can't catch up with others. However, they encouraged me to continue my efforts. They told me that it doesn't matter the result of the game, what is important is to gain experience from the game. I am proud to have such a friend! Although I feel a little sorry, the last sports meeting in this primary school, like a root, was deeply rooted in my mind and I will never forget it. Girl, don't forget, there is no limit to learning, and you can build a boat happily. Life has a long way to go. If you don't reach your goal, you will be exhausted. Then the door of Peking University Tsinghua is open, and you are missing. What a pity! Good writing, good knowledge, discerning in reading history, and knowledgeable in making arguments. This boy can make him work hard and make great achievements. The future is great, twelve-year-old children are precious, and another masterpiece has come out! Being able to speak this language means that there is no one in the motherland. Careful description of inner activities and clever care before and after prove that you have mastered certain writing skills. From your article, I seem to see Ba Jin in 2 1 century! I understand your emotional pain very well. Thankfully, you are a strong child, a sensible child, because you have written such a touching masterpiece. I'm glad to have a student like you. As long as you grasp today, your future will be beautiful and happy. An ugly duckling flew into my jungle. I sympathize with her inferiority and delicacy. I admire her honesty and frankness. I cherish and comfort her wet wings. Can you believe it? Such an ugly duckling will really become a proud white swan in the dense jungle. There are many elves in nature. As long as you observe them carefully, they will give you rich associations and beneficial enlightenment. Some people observe bees and praise their selfless dedication; Some people observe ants and admire their industrious character. You observe the little crab and like its stubbornness. Look, these elves really give us a lot of inspiration. As you said, it's cute for crabs to walk sideways, and it's annoying for people to walk sideways. You found this, and adults have to admire it. Words are human faces. The progress in writing this composition is obvious, and your face is much brighter. However, the typos you have always hated always follow you and cast a shadow over your composition. I'll give you a good prescription: look up the words you can't write in the dictionary, and ask the teacher or classmates after writing the composition. would you like to have a try？ Zhang Ming used to be at the starting line with you, but now, people have won three consecutive excellent compositions, and you still have 12 typos and 15 sick sentences, which is tragic enough! You, you. I am not incompetent, but I have no ambition. I'm sorry for those adults. I wonder if this sincere apology can comfort your twisted mind. I can imagine your anxiety when waiting for the bus; The pain of being left behind by a car; The embarrassment of being crowded in the car. I can understand your resentment. But I also want to tell you frankly that the teacher is so crowded, and the teacher wants to tell you that just as you will grow up to be a handsome young man in the future, our society will be beautiful, because there are shadows in the sun, but more sunshine. Home should be warm and happy, but your situation is a little bad now. The teacher is sympathetic to this, but you should face up to the reality: on the one hand, bad environment can temper your will, and I believe you will succeed; On the other hand, we should try to change the environment. You can boldly do uncle's ideological work and persuade them to play less or not. Although this is not good, you should try everything. Let's work together! Li Jian, you dare to reveal your true thoughts in your composition. The teacher admires you for this, but the views in your composition are wrong and one-sided. Although this classmate has such shortcomings, it is by no means all he has. We should learn to fully and correctly understand the things around us (including people). In fact, students also have many bright spots, such as he runs fast and works hard. We should see this and try our best to help him. The beginning of life is good. As long as we sincerely help him, he will definitely change and become a good student, don't you think? Classmate, do you know? The teacher is really happy for your progress! I hope you will make persistent efforts and recommend a famous saying by Ostrovschi. People should control their habits, but never let them control themselves. It is worthless for a person to get rid of bad habits. Knowing that Xiao Chang and literary talent are flying, this sophisticated language skill is unmatched by many candidates. If there were no whimsy, childhood would not be colorful. It is not only a pleasure, but also a good thing to experience the prestige of commanding others from another angle and the taste of hard work in another way. The language and actions of commanders and soldiers in the article are both military and childish. The two children are serious, and it seems that the commander is really a soldier, which makes people laugh and admire the liveliness described by the author. Cooking alone for the first time is inevitable. According to the order of cooking, the author wrote the whole process of rice washing, cooking and cooking. Due to lack of experience, we must be extra careful; The more careful, the more panic. Fortunately, the little author is very smart, and he can use his quick wits at the critical moment to turn the corner. The author grasps the characteristics of cooking for the first time, and there are not many words; But it was written in wavelet. Although the author is in a hurry when cooking, the article can be written very orderly. Zhou Zhiying, a child, is very lucky. She can have a moon doll. She likes this doll very much, so she observes it carefully. She observed and described it in the following order: blue sky, stars, moon, little boy and little girl, lovely Xiaohua Mall. It is easier to write still life, but it is not so easy to write still life vividly and concretely. Zhou Zhiying did just that: she not only wrote the colors and filial piety of all parts of this still life, but also wrote the clothes and gestures of a little boy and a little girl, and finally wrote her own association, revealing her love for her father's gift between the lines. In this letter to my aunt, Shen Si described a great event that happened at home. Grandpa found her a new grandmother. She knows that this should be a happy thing, but she can't be happy because she loves her grandmother too much. Shen Si, don't you love grandpa very much, too? Don't you also want grandpa to be happy in his later years? Then please leave a place for your new grandmother in your heart and love her as your own grandmother! Quanxin has sincere feelings, fluent and appropriate language and correct format. It is very good for beginners to write letters so well. You observed it carefully during your autumn outing! Beauty in your eyes is like a painting! It would be great if you wrote down your happy mood at that time. The food you fried for your parents is really delicious. Does the teacher have a chance to have a good meal? Your article awakens the sleeping earth like spring thunder and adds new green to a new day. The teacher once told you that as long as you do one thing with your heart, you will succeed. Isn't it? Now you can write a good hand and dare to speak in class because you are quiet and timid. You are happy for your progressive teacher. Carry forward the advantages of being polite and loving labor in the future, study hard and write carefully, then you will achieve better results, and I believe you will do it! The teacher is really proud of you when you give your masterpiece and a beautiful painting to the teacher for appreciation. Your mother must be as excited as the teacher! It took you a lot of effort to create this painting, didn't it? I tell you, studying is just like painting. As long as we are willing to work hard, we will gain more. You compare the long rope in tug-of-war to a child who can't make up his mind. How apt! Although the competition failed, your composition was a success! It would be better if the end of the composition turned my disappointment into several short revelations! You are such a sentimental child! How good you are at feeling the feelings in life. Although you are a little timid about writing, you have grasped the true meaning of writing. As long as you write your true feelings, the teacher must like you very much. You are a clever and sensitive child. You once had a happy family and you loved your family. But don't you love when something unpleasant happens in your family? Call your family harmony and happiness with your intelligence and your love! How beautiful autumn you write! From your composition, the teacher saw the high blue sky, golden rice fields, flying geese in the south and falling yellow leaves, all of which made me feel the beauty and magic of autumn. How I want to say to autumn: autumn! Turning decay into magical autumn, how beautiful your students' compositions are! When the teacher opens your composition book, he can always hear a burst of crying. It turned out to be punctuation, because you paid too little attention to it. Think about it, the teacher despises your composition just as you despise punctuation. Don't you cry? Your composition can describe the autumn fields in detail, which shows that you are an observant child. But what a beautiful season autumn is. Autumn is a harvest season, and autumn is a colorful season. The teacher really hopes to feel that beautiful and poetic autumn in your article! Through psychological description and action description, the author truly and meticulously showed his nervous and scared psychology at that time. Nice cut. The pen and ink are concentrated and meticulous. The language is concise and general. Positive theme, concise beginning and powerful ending. In addition, suspense is well used to make the plot twists and turns attractive. Typical materials. Wu Regret, a theorist of modern opera in China, once said: Everyone has his own scene, which volatilizes from himself. Sorrow and joy have a master, and crying has a root. Zhang San is Chu Jun, and Li can't wear it. Therefore, when writing a composition, you must pay attention to what characters you write and what characters you must turn yourself into. We must appreciate, ponder and enter the role from the identity, gender, age and personality of that role, and we must never use our student accent to set others' words. Horace, an ancient Roman poet, said: You have to laugh before others can laugh. Similarly, you have to cry yourself to cause a crying reaction in other people's faces. When writing a composition, please think carefully and let the characters enter the role. The title of this composition is well-conceived, the content is true and concrete, and the description of the characters in particular is successful. No matter the description of feelings, psychology or actions, it conforms to the age characteristics of the characters and the specific situation at that time. In addition, the first few environmental descriptions are not idle, but pave the way for the development of the plot. Pointing out the theme at the end is a warning to young readers. This article is about true feelings. Very full, very specific, in addition, the use of narrative and lyrical writing, can arouse the reader's * * * sound, has a tear-jerking effect. Good grasp of details. Select a life segment. Spoken language, full of deep affection for mother with straightforward and simple narration, is touching to read. The materials selected in this paper are true, typical and representative. Several words that imitate sounds are used very accurately. This narrative only writes one thing, and I don't feel thin after reading it, because it is typical and can fully express the theme of the article. It can be seen that young writers will choose materials. By setting suspense and profile, the author successfully created the image of a contemporary outstanding soldier. This kind of writing is worth learning. Rigorous structure. Seeing the truth in simplicity is a remarkable feature of this language. Good title. Empty boxes give people a sense of mystery and have a strong suspense effect. At the same time, as can be seen from the title, this article is also very novel. The idea is also very clever. Using flashback technique, I pulled out memories of the past from the box in front of me, and there was remorse between the lines, which also reflected my mother's good intentions in educating me. The details are appropriate. At the beginning of this article, directly get to the point; The middle part grasps the characteristics of Yali pear, and describes its flowers and fruits respectively, with flowers briefly described and fruits detailed; The ending is concise and closely related to the theme. Vivid language and delicate description. The author described the shape, color and taste of Yali pear in detail, among which the words "pudgy", "Huang Chengcheng" and "My Sweetie" were used properly. This paper is ingenious in conception and profound in connotation. On the surface, the little author writes about squeezing mud by hand, but after careful tasting, he creates a brand-new campus with sincere childlike innocence, expressing children's expectations for the development prospect of the school, and the theme is positive. The language is lively and full of childlike interest. The topic is the eyes of the article, and it takes some time before writing. The language of the characters in the article is true, especially a passage from my mother, which is original. This article wrote a very common thing about giving up your seat. Although the selection of materials is a bit trite, the writing method of comparison is still very appropriate: the description of characters is concise and vivid. The description of the portrait of middle-aged women is only a dozen words, but it captures the characteristics. The two descriptions of Mr. Pang are also very successful, which fully shows the author's disgust and contempt for him. Ending with a question leaves readers room to think. The ending sticks to the theme and expresses the author's complicated feelings. That's right. Start with crying, end with laughing, and end with roundness, which effectively expresses the theme. Today, it is the third day of the opening of the 29th Sports Meeting in our school and the last morning of the Games. After running the 60-meter and 60-meter races in all grades, it was the moment I had been waiting for for for a long time-the mixed relay race for boys and girls in grade six. However, I just want to hum a tune while eating milk and bread, and leisurely lean against the tree to cheer for our athletes. Who knows, Qiang Qiang flew to my side and said, don't eat, lest you run around in the future. I was taken aback and almost choked and asked, what? I didn't run again. Why should I run? . Qiang Qiang replied: Fat man didn't come today and asked you to be a substitute. I said excitedly: alas, the hero is finally useful! After that, I threw away my things and reported to Teacher Xie. The game is about to start. Line up first, men left and women right, ready to fight. Yangmei is the best, but she has been playing cool there-playing with sticks. As the next best thing, I have been urging him to say: Stop playing. How can you play when you finish running and win the first place? He hung his head in shame. At this time, everyone is full of confidence in victory. Bang. One. The athletes of Class Three all flew out. Oh, no, Yang persisted for a second, which is excusable. However, when the girl over there took the stick, she actually lost it. We missed another big step. What shall we do? We are not discouraged. For the sake of that big hole, the people behind us ran hard, but class one also lost a stick. Our three classes are simply driving side by side, and the cheers of our class are one after another. At the last minute, Liao Tao, the main force of Class Three, rushed to the finish line. Class three is better than other classes and won the first place, while our class won the second place. We, the second place, have a little regret, but we left our laughter and Hanshui on the sports field forever. Autumn in October, sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance. In this crisp autumn season, we ushered in the 35th track and field meeting of Pingdu Primary School. There were many wonderful scenes on the field, but what impressed me the most was the last scene of the third-grade women's rice sprint. Start with the weather, briefly introduce the relevant situation, and then turn to the specific description. ) The game is about to start. The athletes stood on the runway early, some were rubbing their hands, some were exercising their muscles, and some were asking their teachers for tips on winning! Look at their mental outlook. They all look full of energy, confidence and fighting spirit, and it seems that they can all win the championship. And we, the audience, are waiting by the runway with anticipation, anxiously waiting for the starting gun of the game. (Rendering the tense atmosphere before the game) Suddenly everything around suddenly became quiet. I was afraid of missing the wonderful moment, so I quickly pushed the crowd away and crowded into the front row to watch. I saw the teacher raise the black starting gun and shout "Ready". Eight athletes each occupy a runway, bend down, kneel on their left legs, bend their right legs, and hold their hands on the ground, just like soldiers who charge, holding their breath and waiting for orders. The cheerleaders standing by are also thinking: Who can win the first prize? (Described the athletes' pre-competition state in detail) Only one shot was heard, and the athletes rushed forward like bullets just out of the chamber. Xiao Qian, a classmate in our class, showed his skill and went forward bravely; Athletes on several other runways followed closely. The cheerleaders shouted "Come on, come on" desperately. I saw Xiaoqian like a chariot with full horsepower. The more he runs, the stronger he runs and the faster he runs. He was the first to reach the finish line like a whirlwind before the other runners caught up. The process of the 100-meter sprint is vivid, with many metaphors. ) At the finish line, two students have already pulled the white sprint line. Finally, Xiaoqian in our class won the championship! After the cheerleaders broke through the sprint line, they held her in their arms and quickly handed over the drinks. We spectators cheered excitedly, and the cheers echoed in the sky ... (After the game, the state ended) Today is the third day of the opening of the 29th Sports Meeting in our school, and it is also the last morning of the Sports Meeting. After running the 60-meter and 60-meter races in all grades, it was the moment I had been waiting for for for a long time-the mixed relay race for boys and girls in grade six. However, I just want to hum a tune while eating milk and bread, and leisurely lean against the tree to cheer for our athletes. Who knows, Qiang Qiang flew to my side and said, don't eat, lest you run around in the future. I was taken aback and almost choked and asked, what? I didn't run again. Why should I run? . Qiang Qiang replied: Fat man didn't come today and asked you to be a substitute. I said excitedly: alas, the hero is finally useful! After that, I threw away my things and reported to Teacher Xie. The game is about to start. Line up first, men left and women right, ready to fight. Yangmei is the best, but she has been playing cool there-playing with sticks. As the next best thing, I have been urging him to say: Stop playing. How can you play when you finish running and win the first place? He hung his head in shame. At this time, everyone is full of confidence in victory. Bang. One. The athletes of Class Three all flew out. Oh, no, Yang persisted for a second, which is excusable. However, when the girl over there took the stick, she actually lost it. We missed another big step. What shall we do? We are not discouraged. For the sake of that big hole, the people behind us ran hard, but class one also lost a stick. Our three classes are simply driving side by side, and the cheers of our class are one after another. At the last minute, Liao Tao, the main force of Class Three, rushed to the finish line. Class three is better than other classes and won the first place, while our class won the second place. We, the second place, have a little regret, but we left our laughter and Hanshui on the sports field forever.