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Words: 450 words composition
This article is suitable for: the fifth grade of primary school.
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This composition is about 450 words in the fifth grade of primary school. The title is "Hard-working Grandma". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I have a diligent and studious grandmother. Every day is very busy: one day, I came home from school and went into the study to do my homework. What I saw surprised me. The stained walls and desktop were polished as bright as new, and even my shadow could be clearly seen on the table. Needless to say, my grandmother must have helped me clean it!
One night, I happened to get up at night, and suddenly I saw the light in my grandmother's window was still on, so I crept to the door and looked through the gap.
Grandma is sitting at the table reading a book carefully! I looked at the wall clock sleepily, dear!
It's only five in the morning. The newspaper ordered by our family is a must-read for grandma every day, and we also learn to cook new dishes from recipes. I will learn from my grandmother and be a studious student. Teacher's comment: This is an introduction to grandma. The first sentence uses the words "hardworking" and "studious" to express the characteristics of grandma, which makes her image very distinct. The author gave two examples to illustrate his point of view. One is to describe grandma's diligence by polishing furniture, and the other is to describe grandma's eagerness to learn by reading early. Grandma's behavior influenced the author. The author is determined to learn from grandma and be a studious student. This is good!
The composition center is clear, the structure is clear, the levels are clear, and the sentences are fluent, which is commendable!
"I have a hardworking and studious grandmother. Busy every day: "I have a hardworking and studious grandmother who is busy every day." "I happened to get up at night" was changed to "I happened to get up". (Xue Le China Special Teacher: Teacher Xu Yaping) 2010-4-1123:12: 00.