In our daily study, work and life, we all often see the figure of the essay, right? Through the essay, we can put those scattered thoughts, gathered in one piece. When you write an essay, you always have nothing to write? The following is my carefully organized detail description essay 5, welcome to learn and reference, I hope to help you.

Detailed Description Essay Part 1

Teaching Objectives:

Knowledge and Skills: through the appreciation of some wonderful detailed description fragments in the example, learning and imitation of detailed description, and used in writing, feel the benefits of detailed description.

Process and method: Appreciate the interesting details of the description, describe some details of the action.

Emotional Attitude and Values: Cultivate the ability to observe, guide students to observe and discover the details of life, the formation of a positive attitude towards life.

Focus: Learning the detail description, appreciate its role.

Difficulties: Utilizing detailed description and being able to apply it to writing.

Arrangement of lesson time:

Two hours

The teaching process:

I. Introduction

Detailed description is the flower in the article, to make the flower beautiful, we need to carry out detailed description. We have to use our good eyes to capture the details of life. If we use our eyes, and then with our love to feel life, the flowers of our life back to the same more brilliant. Such as the following text: the sky that a bend of the crescent moon issued a faint light, quietly sprinkled on the balcony. Under the hazy moonlight, those beautiful flowers in the daytime, verdant leaves, all seem much darker. At this time, a few freshly blossomed blossoms are ice-clear, emitting a wisp of fragrance, refreshing the heart. Ah! There is also a bud that is budding, will it open? I scrutinized for a while, suddenly, the bud moved finally, the tip of the bud unconsciously cracked open a small hole, then, the small hole slowly opened, and then the petals piece by piece gradually unfolded. That piece of petal like a crystal carved, even a vein can be seen clearly; the heart of the flower is white and tender, the edge of the flower through a layer of goose yellow. The author made a detailed description of the flowers, the texture of the flowers, smell, color, texture, the whole process of the buds open, so that people as if they were there, written in a delicate and vivid. Technically speaking, detailed description is the first step in narrative writing, but also an important way to beautify the language of narrative writing.

Two, how to describe the details.

(a) choose the best point of detail description

1, comprehensive fine description, the first step is to choose the point.

Selection of the point of this point should be the center of the role of the point, only a little bit in place, so as not to run away from the topic and off-topic. For example, mother's love as a topic, we choose the point can be the mother to add a coat to their own action point, can be the mother to watch the state of their own appearance point, can be to tell themselves how to behave in the language of the point, etc., in fact, this point in a sense and the selection of material related, but no matter which point to choose, should be the expression of mother's love of the theme. Of course, can not correctly select the point, we will not be able to expand the description, of course, also face the possibility of running and off-topic. Because the skin does not exist, the hair will not be attached?

And the most expressive of the theme of the point is exactly what we need to write close-up and to be heavily inked and colorful rendering.

This is the point where we need to focus and color in our writing, so what kind of point is the best for detailing?

Lao She said: the most difficult place to describe the character is to make the character can stand up. We all know that the use of occupation, class, ethnicity and other characteristics, to help form a unique personality; but these things do not necessarily make the character active. We must always show him in action. By showing him clearly and powerfully in every action, he becomes more and more alive and more real. In this way, the character's sensibility can be deep and vast.

The meaning of this passage is that only the successful description of the character's movements, in order to make the reader really feel that the author is a vivid character, his spiritual world to be able to fully display, the image can really stand up. See the wonderful action description for the important role of showing the character image.

Action description is one of the important methods of characterization. Every action of the character is subject to the constraints of his own thoughts and character. The successful description of the character's characteristic actions can explain the identity and status of the character, can reflect the process of the character's psychological activities, can show the character traits of the character, and sometimes can also promote the development of the plot.

From this, we believe that in the narrative essay should choose the most expressive of the theme of the action point, to action detail description, supplemented by portrait detail description, language detail description, psychological detail description and environmental detail description, etc. for a comprehensive description.

Choose the most important point of action in the process of things to describe, supplemented by other methods of description, other angles, in order to focus the power of the language to one place, to maximize the power of the word. If the action occurred before, during, after the end of the situation and so on all the original record, the article has no focus, we can only know what the characters do at each step; and easy to form a running account, lengthy, ink and ink evenly divided, boring and bland. This is the students in the recounting of things, the most likely to appear the problem. Action in the process must have a wonderful highlights, grasp the highlights of the specific description, not only can highlight the key part of the matter, showing the character traits, inner activities, attitude, quality of thought, etc., but also to the reader to leave a strong and deep impression.

2, selected examples and comments

Clip a

That day, we had a geography class, a student and the teacher backtalk. The matter somehow reached the class teacher's ears, only to see her pacing into the classroom, scanning everyone and asking: who did it? Stand up! It can be sentenced to a lighter punishment. There were only four sounds in the classroom: the teacher's footsteps, our breathing, our heartbeats, and the ticking of the clock. Stand up quickly! Don't delay everyone! Since it's the end of class, everyone's floored. It is! The class responded in agreement. He stood up, his face red. The teacher first praised him for his honesty and then took him calmly to the office.

Comment: This clip picks a common point in the school classroom, something small but very real and concrete. There are the actions and words of the class teacher, the actions and reactions of the class, as well as his actions and performance. It can be seen that when choosing the point of comprehensive and detailed description, it is not necessary to choose those shocking and big points, as long as it is in line with the theme, can play a small to see the effect of the big. And write a real person, true feelings and true feelings. And such points, in our life is not abound? The world is clear all the article ah.

Clip two

Go for it! Go for it! The students are desperately cheering for Isamu on the bar, he is about to do the 12th pull-up, which is the current record of our class so far no one has broken. Just see his body swung back and forth, as if in the accumulation of strength, just when the body once again forward leisurely, he violently shouted hi! Immediately, his whole body was tensed up, his arms pulled upward with force, and his body shivered as he slowly moved upward. His eyes were tightly closed and sweat was pouring down his reddened cheeks. The muscles on his arms gradually bulged like balloons being inflated, and the veins on his small arms bulged like a green earthworm. The bar also seemed to be straining to pull Isamu up. Xiaoyong insisted, insisted, in the shouts of the students, his head slowly close to the bar, over the bar! Success! The students cheered!

comment: the author did not do the preparatory activities, how to climb the bar, how to do pull-ups, how to complete the last action, how to get off the bar and so on, but chose to do the pull-ups the most arduous of a shot, the action point to make a good choice to read as if witnessed the tenacity of the small brave and hard work. The author observed very carefully, in turn, saw the action of Yong swinging pulling moving taut close to over the bar and so on; heard his shouts Hi! ; observed his demeanor eyes closed, face red, sweat down; noticed his whole body is taut, the body is shivering slowly move upward, the muscles gradually bulge, small arm veins also bulge; through these detailed description, the author of the small brave to complete the last pull-ups after vividly presented to the reader. At the same time, the author also noted the state of the bar and the surrounding classmates, thus setting off Isamu's efforts.

3, the selection of points should pay attention to the problem

(1) choose the center of the role of the point. Selection of the point of its comprehensive description, not for the fine description of the fine description, there must be a clear center as a guide to express a certain emotion. The center is the theme of the article, the main idea, is the author through writing or remembering, painting scenery or things to express the feelings, explain the reasoning. Different centers, the choice of fine description of the point should be different. In the selection of points, the first principle is to choose those who play a role in the center of the point, that is, the most expressive of the center of the point.

For example, a student once wrote a more successful exercise, the choice of material is tug-of-war, through the tug-of-war to show the center is to stick to the end is victory. He is very clever, not from beginning to end of the narrative tug of war process, but chose the tug of war when he felt the most difficult a point of fine description, describing their own side of the students bent legs, tense muscles, stubborn eyes, trying to posture for a time is really to stick to the perseverance and the spirit of that indomitable reproduced in the end to the end is the victory. Later, to write another article, he copied the text of his high score. However, it got a very low score. Why? Because the center of the essay had changed. The latter exercise the event is still tug-of-war, but the center of the article is to write the class teacher's generous smile gave him great encouragement and warmth, so that a lot of space in the tug-of-war on the description is obviously not the center, at least inappropriate detail or deviation from the center of the article. That is to say, the center of the article to show the power of the teacher's smile, choose to describe the place should be the teacher's smile, around this generous, kind smile to start the details of the description of the charm of this smile colorful rendering in order to show the center of the article in the best way.

So, before the comprehensive description, we must first choose the center according to the center of the role of the center of the point, not simply for the description of the description, otherwise there will be a suspicion of running away.

(2) Select the real specific point. After choosing a good point, in fact, is also a good choice of material for writing, through the synthesis of a fine description of a point reflecting the face of the whole event, if you can not be exact to a clear and specific point, it will flow into the face of the narrative. Through the point of reflecting the face, so that readers know the effect of a glimpse of the comprehensive can not be achieved. Therefore, the choice of point must be specific. In addition to the specific requirements of the selection of points, but also real. The so-called real, refers to the art of real, not necessarily real people and real things but must be consistent with life, logical reality. Excessive exaggeration or contrary to the logic of the point is to deviate from the article to write a real thing, express true feelings, reach the true meaning of the `basic requirements.

In summary, we find that the choice of the center of the role and have a real, specific, vivid point, is the basis for a comprehensive description of the foundation, without this point, the detailed description of the root of no attachment. Select the point that best reflects the center of the article, and its fine description of the words, in fact, can be closely around the center of the line, the center of the performance of the place to start the fine description is actually writing; and other places do not start is writing. This is the first time that I've ever seen a person who has been in the same situation as me.

At the same time, the choice of the point of fine description, but also solved the problem of choosing materials, because the point of fine description itself is the material of the article. If you can develop a comprehensive description of any point, big or small, or famous or micro, then it means that every bit of life can be written into our article. In this way, when choosing material, for students who have not accumulated enough material, there is no need to be stretched to the limit. Just the point to develop a specific, vivid synthesis of fine description can be.

And the article detail problem and the choice of material problems, exactly is a lot of secondary school students can not control the place, therefore, learn to choose the center of the article play a role in the point is very important.

Then, after choosing a good point, how to develop the point in detail and make it vivid, image, infectious, expressive? This is related to the comprehensive fine description of the angle of the problem.

Detailed description of the essay 2

Grandma bent down, put the washing basin under the faucet, unscrew the faucet, the water flowed down. Half a basin of water, grandma put the dirty clothes into the basin, rubbing with both hands, clothes all soaked. At this time, Grandma end of a small stool to sit down, the body downward tilt, left hand picked up a white shirt, two hands to pull the collar of the clothes flat, the left hand to hold the clothes under the collar, the right hand picked up a piece of yellow soap, in the collar on the left and right back and forth to rub. Grandma put down the soap, one hand grasped the left corner of the collar, one hand grasped the right corner of the collar, both hands, one on the top, has been in the bottom, back and forth constantly rubbing. She stops for a while, looks at it with her eyes wide open, and rubs it again. Put into the water to shake, and then look carefully, clean, wash the cuffs.

Detailed Description Essay Part 3

Objectives:

(a) Knowledge and Skills

1, understand the concept of detailed description and classification

2, learn to arrange the details of description in writing to write the essay to be true and vivid.

(B) Process and Method

1, mobilize students' reading experience, speculate on the role of detailed description in the work.

2. Sense of detail Encourage students to communicate and analyze the details of the description.

(C) Emotions, attitudes and values

Let students develop the habit of observation, pay attention to life, the beauty of the details of life, and thus love life. strong> Teaching process:

I. Introduce the topic

Play the song "The Most Romantic Thing" before class to introduce. Slide show: pay attention to life, pay attention to the details, believe in yourself. As the saying goes: "details determine success or failure", "see the spirit in the smallest place" This shows the importance of details. In our writing, if we can properly arrange the details of the description, you can make their own composition to add color, today this class, we will study the details of the description.

Please read the following paragraphs aloud and tell us which ones you like. Tell me the reasons for your favorites. (Large screen display)

Q: detail description?

Detailed description of detailed description refers to the work of some artistic expression of the small things, character character, portrait, psychology, action and the environment and some of the subtle and typical meaning of the plot of the delicate, specific description.

Detailed description of the classification (see class)

Two, speculate on the details of the description of the wonderful

1, the world men's 110-meter hurdles competition is about to begin, nervous squatting at the starting line athletes are like a full-bowed arrows, with the "bang! "A gunshot, Liu Xiang this string of arrows darting forward, only to see him waving his powerful arms to raise his legs over a fence, body as light as a swallow, beautiful posture, and soon left behind the opponent, lightning-like sprinted across the finish line ------

2, a school in the north of the door of a classroom. At noon, some students in the classroom to sleep, some students in the classroom to write homework, in order to not let the wind with sand blowing into the classroom, had to plug the door. However, there were still students who wanted to enter the classroom and knocked on the door, making the students inside the classroom unable to sleep or do their homework. Over and over in the class because of the door of the storm, and later, simply do not plug the door, let the wind blowing dust all over the room. The next day, the door problem solved, because someone in the door frame nailed a piece of black rubber, it increases the friction between the door and the door frame, no longer insert the door, the door will not easily be blown open by the wind. The author of the detailed description of the method of writing: "a square inch size of the black rubber firmly on the door frame, it fills the gap between the door and the door frame ...... a lot of students in the opening of the door to the surprise of the eyes to the black, ordinary, with three small nailed rubber.

This highlights the role of the black vinyl, but also increase the article's infectious, so that the reader can be with the students in the article, to thank the person who did this good thing.

3. In the summer, when she went to bed, she stretched out her feet and hands in the middle of the bed to form a "big" word, squeezing me to turn over, long slept on a corner of the mat, and baked so hot, pushed her not to move; called her not to hear.

-- Lu Xun, "A Chang and the Classic of Mountains and Seas"

4. In the summer, when I sleep, she stretches out her legs and hands in the middle of the bed to form a "big" word, which squeezes me and makes me turn over in the corner of the mattress, where I sleep for a long time, and it is baked so hot that she does not move; and she does not hear me when I call her. I was so happy to see you, and I was so happy to see you, and I was so happy to see you.

Think: What is the author's intention in arranging the details of sleeping in summer?

The author's dislike of "Ah Chang" is indicated by the word "crowded", which corresponds to "she was born yellow, fat and short", and this paragraph is consistent with the text's use of the writing style of repression followed by praise.

Teachers explain: its appearance of the person from the first of her all kinds of "hate", "hate" A long for to buy back the long-desired "Classic of the Mountains and the Sea" finally produced a heartfelt respect and nostalgia for the details of the characters to vividly bring up and make people unforgettable

Three, the bull's-eye: you yourself and then list a paragraph of character detailing examples, and read to everyone.

1. A detailed description of a particular teacher from the classroom door into the classroom to the official class the process of a series of actions shown.

2. According to your usual observation (or experience), change the following paragraph into a specific descriptive paragraph, about 100 words.

Yesterday, the language test of ancient poetry, I wanted to take out the book several times to see, because the teacher watched tightly, were unsuccessful, the last time to drum up the courage, but still by the teacher found out, I feel very embarrassed.

Let me summarize:

1, how to make the detail description specific and vivid?

Careful observation and perception

Careful refinement of words

Skillful use of rhetoric

2, the use of detailed description should pay attention to ?

To conform to life

Novelty should be representative

Selective for the center of the service

It can be seen that the use of good description can draw the finishing touch to the role of deepening the theme of the article vivid, imagery to make the article rich in force to the readers to leave an impression

Fourth, the writing practice

Requirements.

1, to complete the title, such as mom, the cat at home, the hometown of the river.

2. Choose the style you can handle best and write what you know best. The memory should be complete, specific, and have real feelings.

3, the article should have at least one character detail description, take a red pen and outline it with a curve.

4, not less than 600 words.

Detailed Description Essay Part 4

He grew a set of big eyes with a great deal of energy , a big mouth in the face part of the extra striking. He is tall, the human body solid, a pair of big feet plug-in able to run like an arrow off the string. We are the staff of the basketball club, in the tournament he let me understand: true friends are which.

It was a clear and sunny Thursday, the two of us met to play blue ball, rushed to the basketball court, but see the wide field leaching stand a few people, leisurely stroll around. At this moment, the teacher came, counted the total, said: everyone now play the big game. You, you and you hit them!

On the field of play, the two of us became enemies I defended him. But see his majestic shadow shaking on the field, everyone finally just scored 2 goals, but they have long scored seven or eight. I was unreasonable, saw who had the ball, and rushed up frantically, regardless of the cost to try to get the ball back.

But the other side obviously saw my role, the ball as far as possible to his hands. Ultimately, he was their team's great god, and they naturally relied on his energy to score. I went after him, trying to grab the ball, but he dodged left and right, and not only did he not let me get the ball to him, but he scored another one instead. I some angry, just a good friend it, really not enough, do not give the slightest affection!

Therefore, I chased him with all my might to grab his ball. But he also never give way, also left flash right dodge. I was anxious, so I rushed towards him. But I can't think of an empty, just want to control the body, but he is the ball to my side of the transport, I stood up unsteadily, all of a sudden he was knocked to the ground, and bawling to see him in advance to prepare to shoot an empty basket

Can't think of, he immediately discarded the hands of the basketball game, walked back to me to help me, the mouth can't say: I'm sorry! I'm sorry, I've knocked you off your feet. I'm sorry, I knocked you off.

Looking at his worried look, I felt a warm current in my heart. Why do you say that he is not good enough, this is not a true friend?

He is my best friend Shen Han Yang.

Detailed description of the essay Part 5

Mom, six years of elementary school, every bit of progress I have wisps of gray hair, my inseparable from your heart and soul. Look at the wrinkles on the corners of the eyes and the strands of white hair through the strands of white silk, my eyes can not help but once again moist. In the rain, I seem to see you again that measured wet dress and the eyes of the pair of anxious to find.

Remember my fifth grade one afternoon, sunny, windy and beautiful. Who knows, the ensuing thing is unexpected, the big tree a moment before the silence, to the clattering sway, and then to the violent shaking, only a few seconds. In a few moments it was raining heavily. I wasn't prepared for it, and after school, I just put the folder in my hand casually against my head and ran in the direction of home. In front of my eyes appeared your quickening steps and familiar figure. In the cold wind, you look very haggard and pale, messy hair hit my heart, I was crying and jumped into your arms, but you use the rough big hand lovingly stroked me, eyes gentle. On the way home, the two of us to the sound of the wind as a companion, to the raindrops as a friend, dragging a long shadow, and your body was wet most of the way, I pushed your side of the umbrella handle, and you are "relentless" push over. The mother was an umbrella at that time, for me to hold up the sky that is not polluted.

Another time, it was in the KFC fast-food restaurant, I relished gnawing on fried chicken wings, while you look at me with a smile, you never moved, I looked up, looking up at your eyes: "Mom, you're not hungry?" Embarrassed your answer was also surprisingly simple. I thought you really weren't hungry, but afterward I learned that you had only eaten some bread and a bowl of porridge in the morning. This is not so simple anymore.

Mother's love is still the voice of advice. Before going to school, you are always uneasy, "be careful when you cross the street." This is my routine, it is with these warm instructions, I realized the priceless love of mother.

Yes, mother's love is selfless, but only in the details. A celebrity said: "The loss of a loving mother is like a flower stuck in a bottle, although colored and fragrant, but lost the root." Mom, if I leave your nurturing and care, can I grow up healthy, happy and strong?