The lyrics of "Baiyun Mountain is full of beautiful scenery, the red stone canyon is full of clear springs, and you can't get enough of the scenery outside the Great Wall ..." are praising my hometown-Yulin. Yulin is my native place, who can not love his hometown.

If you are a guest from afar, I will show you the irreplaceable beauty of Yulin and let you know Yulin, a city with different styles. It is an ancient city, known as the first scenic spot of the Great Wall in Wan Li, where the red rocks of Hongshixia face each other and the willows are shaded. Here, you can enjoy the grotto art in the Song and Yuan Dynasties and the cliff stone carvings of literati throughout the ages. Zhenbeitai, located in the north of Yulin City, is known as "the first Great Wall in Wan Li" and the largest military observation platform on the Great Wall of Ming Dynasty, with a history of nearly 4 years. Look at the spectacular Tongwan City again. You seem to have seen the once tall castle, and that mystery and grandeur will always haunt you. Yulin seems to be a quiet and beautiful town. The quaint pavilions, intact quadrangles, bell tower, drum tower, ten thousand Buddha tower and Xinminglou on the street are all so calm and beautiful that it is worth stopping and watching carefully. Yulin is also like a passionate metropolis. The high-rise buildings in the high-tech zone have sprung up like mushrooms after rain. The paradise full of laughter and laughter is the best place to go. The Ferris wheel goes straight into the sky and you can have a bird's eye view of the whole city. The roller coaster is exciting and interesting, which makes people's hearts hang up. The beautiful Yuxi River is a good place for after dinner.

If the beautiful scenery can make you memorable, then the delicious food will make you forget to go home. All kinds of cakes in Yulin are unique: the sugar chess pieces are soft, waxy and sweet, and the taste is warm and moist; It's intoxicating just to smell the smell of fixed-edge boiler buns; Zizhou jujube stuffing is crisp, sweet and fragrant; The dry stove in Zhenchuan is creamy, salty, yellow, dry and fragrant, crisp inside and outside ... Not only cakes, but also the three fresh dishes, braised dishes, chop suey and chop suey in Yulin are delicious that you can't taste elsewhere. The hearty eating of mutton stew and drinking in a big bowl make you taste the heroism of Yulin people!

with all the beautiful scenery and delicious food, how can we lose the beauty of people's hearts? We are all enthusiastic, happy and hardworking Yulin people. We will spread happiness. When you come, you will be infected by our happiness! Yulin is a "little Beijing" that makes you linger. How can you not fall in love with her when you come to Yulin?

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