It rained in a spring rain all afternoon, and the leaves of small trees outside the window were washed more green.
I was lying on the windowsill, staring at the alley where my father came home. Dad came back, pushed the door and said loudly, "eldest daughter, go with dad to buy your favorite bread."
I flew into his arms like a bird. We talked and laughed on the way, and soon we came to the bakery.
The waiter's aunt said with a big smile, "Welcome." I nodded with a smile and looked around eagerly. I saw all kinds of bread on the glass counter, which dazzled me.
just as I was fascinated, an aunt gently handed me a shopping tray. The chubby little fat man is called "earthquake", the long-flowing one is called "caterpillar", and even my favorite bread is "jubilant" ... In a short time, the bread in the tray will pile up like a mountain.
I am happy to say to my father, "OK, OK, don't buy too much, it's enough." Dad said to me like a soldier, "yes, eldest daughter, I obey your orders completely!" " Walking out of the bakery, I said to my father, "Let's each have one!" After that, I took one to my father first as if to please him.
"smart card, greedy cat!" Dad put out his finger and scraped my little nose. I picked a big one and took a hard bite.
I look at my father. Oh, my God, he has eaten all the bread. I asked my father curiously, "Why do you eat faster than me every time?" Dad approached me mysteriously: "Do you know what dad belongs to?" "What do you belong to?" "I am a pig, of course I eat faster than you."
I laughed so hard that I almost didn't lie down. Look, my dad, not only came home full of bread, but also made me laugh all the way. 2. composition extension manager Luo buys bread
it rained in the spring rain all afternoon, and the leaves of the young trees outside the window were washed more green. I lay on the windowsill, staring at the alley where my father came home.
When Dad came back, he opened the door and said loudly, "Eldest daughter, go with Dad to buy your favorite bread." I flew into his arms like a bird. We talked and laughed on the way, and soon we came to the bakery. The waiter's aunt said with a big smile, "Welcome." I nodded with a smile and looked around eagerly. I saw all kinds of bread on the glass counter, which dazzled me. Just as I was fascinated, an aunt gently handed me a shopping tray. The chubby little fat man is called "earthquake", the long-flowing one is called "caterpillar", and even my favorite bread is "jubilant" ... In a short time, the bread in the tray will pile up like a mountain. I said happily to my father, "OK, OK, don't buy too much, there is enough to eat." Dad said to me like a soldier, "yes, eldest daughter, I obey your orders completely!" "
When I walked out of the bakery, I said to my father, "Let's each have one!" After that, I took one to my father first as if to please him. "Smart card, little greedy cat!" Dad put out his finger and scraped my little nose. I picked a big one and took a hard bite. I look at my father. Oh, my God, he has eaten all the bread. I asked my father curiously, "Why do you eat faster than me every time?" Dad approached me mysteriously: "Do you know what dad belongs to?" "What do you belong to?" "I am a pig, of course I eat faster than you." I laughed and almost didn't lie on the ground.
Look, my dad, not only came home full of bread, but also made me laugh all the way. 3. exercises for expanding the writing materials for primary school students
Material 1:
Once upon a time, there was a stupid rich man who saw other rich people living in a beautiful three-story building and wanted to live there, so he called a craftsman and said, "Build me a three-story building." After the craftsmen started construction, the rich man saw that they were all laying bricks on the ground and scolded angrily, "I want the third floor, not the one below!" " ?
Requirements: According to the materials, reasonably imagine and supplement it, and expand it into a narrative with coherent words and complete stories with the topic of "A Stupid Rich Man", with about 25 words.
material 2:?
A tiger, seeing the buffalo that had defeated him being yelled at by farmers to cultivate the land, asked the cow why she was afraid of farmers. The cow said that it was because people had "wisdom". The tiger asked the farmer to see his "wisdom". The farmer said that he had left his "wisdom" at home, so he could get it, but he had to tie up the tiger first, so as not to eat the cow after he left. The tiger listened. The farmer went back to the village to call the villagers, put the tiger in an iron cage and said to the tiger, this is "wisdom."
requirements: expand the above materials into an article of not less than 5 words-
① self-made topic.
② narrative is the main method. Reasonably imagine and appropriately enrich the plot. Pay attention to the use of appearance, language, psychology, environment and details.
③ end with a brief discussion. ?
Material 3:
There lives a female bear in the forest. She has two children. When the bears grow up, they have to find happiness alone. The mother bear wants them to love each other and beware of bad guys. They walked to the plain for a long time and ate up all the food. Brother cries, brother is hungry. Later, I picked up a big cake and wanted to share it. There was a quarrel. At this time, a fox came running and gave them pie, deliberately breaking the pie into a big one and a small one, and the two bears quarreled again. The fox divided them again and took a bite of the big one, which turned out to be smaller than the original small one. Two little bears scrambled for the bigger one. The fox took another bite of the big one, so he bit it again and again. In the end, both pieces were very small. The fox handed these two small cakes to two little bears and slipped away ...
Requirements: the materials on them should be expanded to about 5 words. Requirements: ① Self-made topics. The article should be divided into paragraphs. (3) when expanding, we can describe the movements, dialogues, appearances, demeanor and psychological activities of the characters around the center of the original text, making the characters more concrete and vivid.
material 4:
time: one morning.
location: in front of the catering service company.
main person: manager Luo.
Event: When Manager Luo was waiting in line to buy bread, he saw that the line was long and the customers were anxious, so he walked into the catering service company with a basket. People thought he didn't wait in line to open the back door, so they talked angrily. Soon, Manager Luo and several waiters in the company brought a lot of bread out and opened a place to sell bread, so that everyone bought bread quickly.
Requirements: The above materials should be expanded to about 5 words-
① The topic is self-drawn.
② Give full play to your imagination according to the materials provided in terms of time, place, people, events, etc., and describe it in detail to make it concrete and complete.
③ The center is clear, the organization is clear, the sentences are fluent, and the writing is neat. Be careful not to write typos, and you will use the punctuation you have learned. 4. composition about being sensible
"Fei Fei, buy a bottle of vinegar and help me buy a bag of bread!" My mother told me.
I took the money from my mother and ran out of the house quickly. After buying vinegar, I ran into the bakery, where many people were waiting in line, and I quietly stood at the end of the line.
after a while, many adults came in one after another, all behind me.
Suddenly, the aunt in the back patted me on the shoulder. I turned my head and looked at her up and down: she was in her thirties, with gentle curly hair and a very kind look. She whispered to me, "Little friend, can we change places?" "Why?" I asked doubtfully. She said to me calmly, "I bought it for my son. Look, he's waiting outside. Oh, by the way, who did you buy it for? "
I replied naturally and easily, "I bought it for my mother! What's wrong? " She suddenly froze and said slowly, "Nothing, little friend." She never mentioned the change of position again, but took a half step back with a smile.
I suddenly found that I have become the focus of the whole store. A waiter aunt said to me in a sweet voice, "little friend, you are the first person to buy bread for your mother today!" "
I couldn't help but be surprised that several adults in front started to make way for me. Someone reminded me behind my back: "hurry up, son!" Everyone let you buy it first! " When the adults in the shop heard that I was buying bread for my mother, they all smiled approvingly.
I said, "No, I should queue up to buy bread for my mother."
I am also from Beiguan-5. Composition written by Karry
Composition by Karry My most admired teacher
I have a most admired teacher. Guess who he is? His eyebrows are thick, his hair is a little white, and he looks a little old, but he is always absorbed and very serious in his lectures. He is our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu.
Teacher Liu often attends classes with illness. I remember in mid-November, Mr. Liu said that he went to Nanchang on business and would not come back for a week, but the math teacher said that Mr. Liu was not on business, but went to see a doctor. In order not to worry us, Mr. Liu lied. Within four days, Mr. Liu came back because he was worried that our Chinese class would fall behind. In class, Mr. Liu can't help coughing a few times. When it is serious, he secretly hides in the corridor and coughs. We were worried, so we asked him to rest for a few days, but he insisted on attending class in spite of illness. What is this for? To impart knowledge to us. He can rest at home for a few days or even weeks, and the leader will still pay him. It can be seen that Mr. Liu is very responsible for his work.
Mr. Liu is not only responsible for his work, but also cares for his students. Once, it was a Chinese exam. Before the exam, I was crazy and sweaty. I took off my cotton-padded jacket during the exam. Teacher Liu was afraid that I would catch cold, so she immediately ran over and put on my clothes and said, "It's cold, so you will catch cold!" Teacher Liu cares so much about me, but I haven't done very well in school recently, and I feel very sorry for Teacher Liu.
Mr. Liu has done too much for us, and we have nothing to repay, so we can only repay it with excellent grades and good performance. Miss Liu, you are the teacher I admire most. 6. Expand an essay about 6 words according to the material. The school organized a spring outing. JASON ZHANG asked his mother to buy a cake. < P > On Sunday morning, I got up early. Seeing that my mother was still asleep, I decided to be a small housewife for one day.
what should I do for breakfast? I thought about it, opened the refrigerator and immediately had an idea: drink soybean milk and eat cake. So I took out a small pot, rinsed it, then poured the soybean milk into the pot, and then covered the lid. After a while, the soybean milk boiled. I quickly turned off the fire, and then held the pot handle with a wet cloth and poured the soybean milk into two small bowls. I took the peanut chocolate cake out of the refrigerator, cut it and put it neatly on the table. I gasped, mission accomplished! When I was about to wake my mother up for breakfast, she was attracted by the thick smell of soybean milk. She smiled at me and said, "My son is great!" " My heart is full of joy. I feel very happy eating my own breakfast.
How time flies! It's time for lunch. I arranged to eat jiaozi at noon. I took out two bags of "Wan Chai Wharf" dumplings from the refrigerator and put them aside. Then I took out a big pot from the cupboard, took half a pot of water, put it on the gas stove and lit it. When the water boils, I put the dumplings in the pot one by one. I learned how my mother usually cooks dumplings, stirred them and added water several times. After jiaozi cooked them, I fished jiaozi on the plate with a spoon. Only then did I find out that there were some broken pieces in two sets of jiaozi, so I quickly put the broken jiaozi into my bowl, and called my mother to eat. Mother saw the broken jiaozi in my bowl and said with a smile, "My son is really sensible!" It smells good to eat jiaozi cooked by yourself. 7. The book with Zhu Yuansi was expanded to 6 words. The book with Zhu Yuansi was expanded to Fuchunjiang River, which was known as the "Little Three Gorges". I have been longing for this place for a long time, and today I finally have the honor to come here and witness the wonderful scenery here with my own eyes.
The morning sunshine is not so dazzling, but it makes people feel warm. If the wind has color, if the smoke has light, maybe they are bright and clean, like the light of day falling back in the wind. The sky is connected with the distant green hills and then presents the same color. I sat leisurely in the boat and let it drift freely with the river, east or west, fast or slow, and I watched the scenery wherever I wanted. On the more than 1-mile water road between Fuyang and Tonglu, I met such a wonderful sight: the mountains are far-reaching; Water is clear and deep. It is really a unique and wonderful scene in the world!
I leaned down, put my hand into the river and let it kiss my fingers. I carefully looked at the bottom of the river, which was blue and white, clean and bright, so that people could observe the stones of different sizes, strange shapes and various shapes at the bottom of the river without any obstacles, as well as groups of cute little fish swimming and playing between the stones. The current is not as lovely as the fish. It is very fast, and it is almost faster than the speed of an arrow. The fierce waves are like a galloping horse. So I retracted my hand, stood up and walked to the bow, and looked up to enjoy the scenery by the river. The mountains on both sides of Jiajiang River are covered with lush trees, perhaps because the trees are too lush, so that the sun does not shine under the trees, but people feel a chill. The mountains along the river are separated by mountains, and the mountains are adjacent to each other. They all rely on the high terrain. You fight for me and dare to go straight up into the sky. They are all vying to stretch to the heights and the distance. It seems that they will not give up regardless of the competition.
seeing the mountains and looking at the water is enough, so I went back to the boat. As soon as I closed my eyes and planned to have a good rest, I heard
"Lingling" voices in my ears. What's that noise? I looked inside, oh, it was the sound of thousands of feet of spring water flowing down from the mountain and hitting the stone. "Hey, hey ..." What is this? Its voice is sometimes high and sometimes low, sometimes long and sometimes short. In this landscape, such a beautiful voice is only available to beautiful birds who are born with beautiful voices. And the low twirling, which is cicada singing and ape singing. They have been tirelessly calling, and this sound seems to never disappear.
after watching, listening and thinking, I suddenly feel that if people who strive for fame and fortune at all costs like eagles flying to the sky come here and see the lush mountains and dense forests on both sides, their hearts in pursuing fame and fortune will calm down; And those who devote themselves to political affairs, if they catch a glimpse of this quiet and beautiful valley, will definitely fall in love with it and will linger. I looked up again and once again surrounded the beautiful and wonderful scenery around me. At this time, I found that the branches were hidden above my head. Although it was during the day, there was a feeling of evening. Sparse branches cover each other, and the sun can only be seen occasionally. 8. Interview with the composition of the cake maker
With the strong atmosphere of the Mid-Autumn Festival, our small reporter interview group visited Tianfu cake shop.
as soon as I entered the door, the aroma of cake jumped.