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This article applies to: the fifth grade of primary school.

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This article is a 500-word article about the fifth grade of primary school. The topic is: Chongqing, a spicy land. Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Chongqing is the hometown of spicy food, because Chongqing is a mountain city, which is very humid and the air is not very good. Father said: "If you don't eat spicy food in Chongqing, you will get sick. It's no use eating Chili. You must eat Chili." Why? I don't understand. Chongqing is also the capital of food, the most famous ones are: spicy crab, spicy fish, hot pot ... Chongqing's hot pot civilization is from China, and there are countless hot pot restaurants in Chongqing with various varieties and styles. It is not surprising that the usual spicy taste is hard to fade in the throat, but strangely, Chongqing peppers are very spicy in the mouth. If you take a few sips, the spicy taste will gradually disappear ... naked spicy crab is delicious; The spicy chicken by the river will sneeze when it smells; The spicy fish in delicious fish restaurant is fragrant and tender ... welcome to the spicy land and the capital of food!

Teacher's comment: The author introduced to us why Chongqing people love spicy food, Chongqing cuisine, the spicy characteristics of Chongqing hot pot and countless varieties. People can't help but have the idea of going to Chongqing to taste delicious food. The article has a prominent center, distinct levels and vivid language. If the content is more detailed, describing the specific plot of "I" eating delicious food and hot pot will definitely make readers gasp in admiration. Some sentences need to be revised: "There are countless hot pot restaurants in Chongqing with all kinds of varieties and styles, and the condiments are not surprising" should be changed to "There are countless hot pot restaurants in Chongqing with all kinds of varieties and styles, and all the condiments are amazing", "Just drink a few mouthfuls" should be changed to "Eat several kinds of food, and Little Swan hot pot is different" should be changed to "Eat a variety of food: Little Swan hot pot" (Xue Le China)