It was a hot afternoon, and my mother and I went to the vegetable market to buy tomatoes. "How much is a catty of tomatoes?" "Four yuan a catty." "cheaper." "Sister, my tomatoes are fresh, big and red." A young voice came from the side. I glanced at her and thought: You are only seven or eight years old at most, so you will learn to sell melons and brag. I bought a catty and looked at her carefully: neat short hair, big eyes, wearing a dress sewn with rags and a pair of broken sandals. I sneer at myself, what a hillbilly.
Because it is summer, the little girl's head is sweaty and her back is soaked. She looked up at the sky, as if she wanted to pack up and go home, but she counted a few bills in her hand and gritted her teeth and persisted. My heart aches, and I sympathize with her. I walked up to her, took out 20 yuan and handed it to her, and said, "Little sister, go and buy an popsicle. It's too hot, hurry home. " She was filled with joy and was about to take the money when her hand suddenly shrank back in mid-air. She pondered for a while, shook her head firmly and said to me, "Sister, I appreciate your kindness, but I have to earn money by my own labor, and I can't get it for nothing." I was shocked at once. On the way home, I was still thinking. Although the little girl is not buying food there now, I see precious dignity in her.
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When the author of this article went shopping with his mother on a hot afternoon, he gave her money because he sympathized with a little sister who sold vegetables, but when she was rejected by her little sister, he learned the value of human dignity. The language of the article is simple and the narrative is clear.
At that time, when I saw dignity at the school gate, there were always such a group of people-with long hair and worn-out clothes, and their hair looked unwashed for n years, and it was very solid. There is some money in the small jar in front of me, and I keep kowtowing to pedestrians. They are negative teaching materials given to their children by parents of primary and secondary school students, but they are not angry. In their words, "We are all kneeling here, what face do we need?" They speak calmly, and they have an official name-beggar. But I met such an admirable beggar.
He is an old man in his seventies, wearing a white military uniform. Knock on the homemade simple drum set-several plastic cups for sleeping. Sing: "The heart is there, and the dream is there. Just start all over again! " He was intoxicated, but the song had flown to the North Pole. A large group of people are welcome to watch. At this moment, a middle school student in a strange dress squeezed in and shouted, "Hey, old man, kowtow to me and I'll give you a dime." He ignored him, but raised his voice higher.
Middle school students ignored him and broke the old man's cup. He said, "Old deathlessly, I'm talking to you."
The old man was furious, stood up, slapped him hard and kicked him to the ground. Take out a dollar and throw it in his face: "This is for you!" " "
I can't help asking here: What's wrong with beggars? They also don't like to be judged; They also have dignity; They also cry. They are not negative textbooks tailored for primary and secondary school students. What they need is not a dime, but a piece of broken corn. A smile and encouragement from you can bring them the warmth of spring. Why not do it?
I saw dignity in him.
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The old man was furious, stood up, slapped him hard and kicked him to the ground. Take out a dollar and throw it in his face: "This is for you!" " "In this shot, I seem to see the scene of Lutai playing Kansai Town, which is thrilling and thought-provoking.
Defending Dignity In the long history of China, our ancestors have defended the motherland and their own dignity, not to mention the ancient Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, let's take our modern strong events as an example.
Countless revolutionary martyrs gave their lives for the unity and independence of the country and the nation. When some foreigners predicted that China could not live without foreign oil, China workers like Iron Man threw China's "oil-poor" hat into the Pacific Ocean. When the relentless flood rushed to our homeland, ordinary soldiers built an unbreakable levee with their flesh and blood. When the five-star red flag was raised at the Beijing Olympic Games, many people in China could not conceal their inner excitement. Writing here, I can't hide my inner excitement and passion. I am thinking of our ancestors, Yan Zi, who was good at rhetoric in Qi State, and Lin Xiangru, who lived up to his mission in Zhao State.
Sixty years ago, our martyrs defended the dignity of the motherland and spread their enthusiasm to the north and south of the motherland. Today, as middle school students, we should strengthen the feelings of loving the motherland and the sense of responsibility for rejuvenating the motherland, establish national self-esteem and self-confidence, hold high the banner of patriotism, safeguard national unity, promote harmony, strive hard, and truly turn patriotism into a trip to serve the country.
Study hard today to revitalize the motherland and make contributions to creating a better future for the motherland tomorrow. Inject patriotism into the hearts of every Chinese descendant, let every Chinese descendant care about the motherland, always think about the motherland, put the interests of the motherland first, truly regard the motherland as his mother, and make the motherland an indispensable part of his life.
Let the eternal famous sentence "Who has never died since ancient times, keep the original heart and shine on history" be deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
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The article uses several groups of parallelism sentences, which are magnificent, rhythmic, and full of patriotic passion and pride as descendants of China. The article is ambitious and full of emotion. "Let everyone in China care about the motherland, always think about the motherland, put the interests of the motherland first, truly regard the motherland as their mother, and make the motherland an indispensable part of their lives."
Dignity Life is in a hurry. Like running water. But it's just a matter of time, and the years have passed.
In fact, people are also divided into high and low. People are thoughtful, and there are high and low levels of purity and kindness. If you look closely, you can find the differences in life. For example, when walking, someone accidentally stepped on your foot, and he quickly said he was sorry, and then you said it didn't matter. Or he says he's sorry and you scold him. Thus, true nobility and meanness.
Everything in life can reflect a person's accomplishment. The purity of his thoughts is related to his moral quality. You can't just look at appearances. Some people are happy ever after, and some people are not outstanding in appearance, but their hearts are not bent for five buckets of rice. The nobleness of the soul is the true nobleness. Isn't Einstein the best example? What can fill our souls can only be found in books.
Thought is quality and spirit is dignity. A boy should be calm and generous, learn to be a gentleman, not break the law, and not fight over trifles. A girl doesn't swear all day, and she doesn't dress too carefully or too unrestrained. This seriously reflects a person's inner cultivation. However, few people do it. However, the most important thing in this life is dignity. A soul without dignity, no matter how noble you are in the eyes of the world, is just a walking corpse. Dignity is not fighting back if you lose, but a fair challenge. Dignity even exceeds life. It is not only self-esteem, but also a kind of backbone. I'm afraid this perfect temperament can also be seen in * * *. In fact, as long as you don't violate the principles of yourself and the country, you can feel at ease.
Not everyone is born with good qualities. You don't just look at flowers in the fog, you can have a good accomplishment at a glance. It's all from life. Friend, this is my most sincere words.
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The title of this article is "Dignity", so the article should be centered on "Dignity". Although this paper selects events with certain narrative value in life, due to the incomplete analysis and excavation, it cannot deeply reflect the hidden truth of events.
Dignity is like fire. Dignity is like fire. It can burn all the inferiority complex. If a person loses his dignity, it is like a tree losing its root and a river losing its source. Even if they live in the world, their souls are already dead.
Dignity is as precious as money, power and even life. People have dignity to have confidence, and confidence to succeed. Dignity is the foundation of success and the source of faith. Only with dignity can you succeed. I don't want to deny that losing my dignity is bound to fail. But I think that sacrificing dignity for success, when "success" and "loss of dignity" are equated, then this kind of success is not worth mentioning.
When we turn to history again, history tells us the value of dignity. Although Su Wu has been herding sheep in Beihai 19 years, he has never given up the belief of returning to China. Whether it's Tao Yuanming, who's "five buckets of rice don't bend his back", or Li Bai, who's "Oh, how can I solemnly bow and scrape to high officials?" Whether it is Chen Sheng, who "knows the ambition of a swan", or Wen Tianxiang, who "keeps a pure heart and shines on history"; Both Lin Zexu, who burned opium angrily, and Gu Weijun, who held his head high and refused to give in at the Paris Peace Conference, defended justice with dignity and wrote history.
A person should not only defend his own dignity, but also defend the dignity of the country and the nation. When the first shot was fired at the Lugou Bridge, the Japanese invaders invaded China. I wonder how many Chinese sons and daughters rose up at that time. The people of China have proved their dignity with history. Until today, people who fought bloody battles for national dignity are destined to go down in history forever and be admired by future generations.
Nowadays, many people have lost their direction, dignity and interest in their growth. Money blinds the eyes and power blinds the mind. I think only when I get my dignity back can I see the future.
What is dignity? Dignity is a noble personality, a kind of values, a spirit of self-improvement, self-reliance and struggle. Dignity is like fire, because dignity makes life more colorful.
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This paper is concise in language and rich in examples, and it is very infectious to analyze and discuss around dignity. Dignity is a noble personality, a kind of values, a spirit of self-improvement, self-reliance and struggle. However, the metaphor of "dignity is like fire" is not appropriate, which leads to half the effort.
How much is dignity worth? In people's minds today, money, interests and rights are the most important. In their minds, as long as there are these three methods, everything is not a problem. People often say that some people lose face, so where is your dignity? How much is dignity worth?
I have seen a famous example. There is a colorful ice cream on the shoes. I cried when I saw a young man drinking coffee. Hey, help me wipe the ice cream off my shoes. The young man gave her a dull look and said politely; "Miss, why should I help you?" The star said with a smile. I can sign it for you. The young man said angrily; Miss, can the dignity of others be bought and sold?' Say that finish and left. Yes, nowadays people often joke about the dignity of others. Don't others need dignity? Dignity is a healthy mental state. Everyone has dignity, and we can't deprive others of their dignity. We can't insult others just because we are better than others. In fact, you are no better than others. Don't take yourself too seriously
I want to tell you that dignity is priceless. This is our second life. No matter who deprives it of its rights, no matter how tempting the outside world is, remember that this is our life. We have the right to maintain our dignity. If we can't even maintain our dignity, then life is meaningless.
Everyone has dignity, and we should safeguard our dignity and the dignity of others at the same time. No matter how humble or noble, everyone has inalienable dignity. As long as it is aboveboard, it deserves respect.
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Starting with "people's thoughts today", the article introduces the topic of "dignity". It also proves the truth that "dignity can be bought and sold" with examples of celebrities humiliating others, and puts forward hope at the end; The full text can stick to the material and highlight the center. It would be better if the arguments were more sufficient.
On the weekend afternoon, I couldn't wait to turn on the computer and found Mr. Yu Dan's lecture. Accompanied by my parents, I watched Mr. Yu Dan's wonderful speech and benefited a lot.
Teacher Yu Dan asked us from the beginning, are our students happy? I feel unhappy because we don't have time to play, because we have endless homework, because the school doesn't organize practical activities ... At this time, I feel very unhappy, but I heard an ancient quote from teacher Yu Dan: "Knowing is not as good as being kind, and being kind is not as good as being happy." I feel unhappy because my attitude is wrong, because I don't regard learning as a hobby, and I don't study and travel in the ocean of knowledge. Teacher Yu Dan also told us that learning knowledge is not the most important thing in a person's life, but also how to survive, how to work, how to be grateful, how to communicate with others, how to be self-reliant and so on. In some survey reports, we are not as good as American primary school students in these aspects.
Teacher Yu Dan told a fable: "One day, a student of Confucius asked,' What is filial piety?' Confucius said:' color is difficult'. "But what is' color difficulty'? In other words, it is difficult for the younger generation to be filial to the elders, but it is also difficult for the younger generation to give the elders a good look. When I think of myself, I always feel that my parents should pay for themselves. If I feel a little unhappy, I will contradict my parents and yell at them. Thinking about this, I feel that I am not filial to my parents and my face is red. Filial piety to parents in the future must be "difficult" first. "
Through Mr. Yu Dan's speech, I understand how to be an excellent pupil at school, how to be a filial child at home and how to be a law-abiding citizen in society.
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The language is dull, unable to describe, and the details are inappropriate.
China's Dignity In the long history of China, our ancestors defended the motherland and their dignity, not to mention the ancient Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. Let's take our modern heroic events as an example.
Countless revolutionary martyrs gave their lives for the unity and independence of the country and the nation. When some foreigners predicted that China could not live without foreign oil, China workers like Iron Man threw China's "oil-poor" hat into the Pacific Ocean. When the relentless flood rushed to our homeland, ordinary soldiers built an unbreakable levee with their flesh and blood. When the five-star red flag was raised at the Beijing Olympic Games, many people in China could not conceal their inner excitement. Writing here, I can't hide my inner excitement and passion. I am thinking of our ancestors, Yan Zi, who was good at rhetoric in Qi State, and Lin Xiangru, who lived up to his mission in Zhao State.
Sixty years ago, our martyrs defended the dignity of the motherland and spilled their blood to the north and south of the motherland. Today, as middle school students, we should strengthen the feelings of loving the motherland and the sense of responsibility for rejuvenating the motherland, establish national self-esteem and self-confidence, hold high the banner of patriotism, safeguard national unity, promote harmony, strive hard, and truly turn patriotism into a trip to serve the country.
Study hard today to revitalize the motherland and make contributions to creating a better future for the motherland tomorrow. Inject patriotism into the hearts of every Chinese descendant, let every Chinese descendant care about the motherland, always think about the motherland, put the interests of the motherland first, truly regard the motherland as his mother, and make the motherland an indispensable part of his life.
Let the eternal famous sentence "Who has never died since ancient times, keep the original heart and shine on history" be deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
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The language is plain, the title is inconsistent and the expression is inaccurate.
The arrival of that dignified summer is the time when mosquitoes are born. A large number of mosquitoes have just been born, and they are so hungry that they buzz from time to time, which makes people uncomfortable. The buzzing of mosquitoes seems to mean that if you want to find food, ...
Mosquitoes are lazy, greedy and selfish. Every day, they only look for food when they are hungry, and when they get food, they don't pay any price. Anyway, it seems that only mosquito food exists forever in the world and can be obtained without labor. But whenever mosquitoes enjoy sweets, they will forget some of them, and they still want to eat. Even if they are full, they still want to eat and keep eating. In the end, there is only one way, and there are many ways to go this way. When someone finds out, it's a little. I'm too full to fly. I crawled slowly on the ground and was trampled by my feet. Crushed by heavy objects ... alas, it didn't end the same way, but it took a different road.
Of course, there are people in our lives who don't want to go to work and want to have money to eat, drink and be merry. If you can't wait and can't control your emotions, you will want to do bad things and get money by hook or by crook. People should be lazy. Once they start, they can't stop immediately. Slowly, slowly, they became addicted. It's harder to stop now than to ascend to heaven. In the end, it is different from mosquitoes. It has been prepared for a long time, and it is the same road. Of course, there may be different ways, but the final result is the same.
When people live in the world, they must be upright and have the principle of being a man. To be a dignified person, you can't abandon your dignity and lose yourself at any time like a mosquito.
Although everyone's dignity is different, don't think of it regretfully after you get lost, because it's too late.
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The argument (quantity, content) is improper, and the discussion language is not infectious.
Thought! Dignity! ! Life is in a hurry Like running water. But it's just a matter of time, and the years have passed.
In fact, people are also divided into high and low. People are thoughtful, and there are high and low levels of purity and kindness. If you look closely, you can find the differences in life. For example, when walking, someone accidentally stepped on your foot, and he quickly said he was sorry, and then you said it didn't matter. Or he says he's sorry and you scold him. Thus, true nobility and meanness.
Everything in life can reflect a person's accomplishment. The purity of his thoughts is related to his moral quality. You can't just look at appearances. Some people are happy ever after, and some people are not outstanding in appearance, but their hearts are not bent for five buckets of rice. The nobleness of the soul is the true nobleness. Isn't Einstein the best example? What can fill our souls can only be found in books.
Thought is quality and spirit is dignity. A boy should be calm and generous, learn to be a gentleman, not break the law, and not fight over trifles. A girl doesn't swear all day, and she doesn't dress too carefully or too unrestrained. This seriously reflects a person's inner cultivation. However, few people do it. However, the most important thing in this life is dignity. A soul without dignity, no matter how noble you are in the eyes of the world, is just a walking corpse. Dignity is not fighting back if you lose, but a fair challenge. Dignity even exceeds life. It is not only self-esteem, but also a kind of backbone. I'm afraid this perfect temperament can also be seen in * * *. In fact, as long as you don't violate the principles of yourself and the country, you can feel at ease.
Not everyone is born with good qualities. You don't just look at flowers in the fog, you can have a good accomplishment at a glance. It's all from life. Friend, this is my most sincere words.
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Inappropriate concept