As the saying goes, "a composition is written half well", and whether the topic of the composition can shine is directly related to the score of the composition. A good title can give readers a spiritual shock, and can play a vocal effect. The time for marking the college entrance examination composition is limited, generally less than 90 seconds, and the length is more than one minute. The marking teacher is only skimming an article in such a short time, so the title is particularly important. A good title will be refreshing and will induce the marking teacher to read. A particularly prominent title will surprise the marking staff.
The principle of college entrance examination topic composition is that the topic must be consistent with the content, and at the same time it should be brief and to the point. The characteristics of a good title are: ① deduction, that is, fitting the content, neither wide nor narrow, just right; 2 Jane, that is, concise and highly summarized; 3 new, that is, ingenuity, creating suspense and attracting readers to read; ④ Beauty refers to aesthetic value, literary color and strong appeal. The title of the article should be like a bright flag, flying at the front of the article, which has a strong attraction and profound enlightenment for readers. Specifically, the following three points should be achieved. First of all, we must deduct the topic, which is the most basic, otherwise it will be self-defeating; Secondly, we should consider the literary talent and flavor of the times of the title, and we can learn from ancient poems or newspapers and periodicals; Thirdly, we should pay attention to the comprehensive use of various titles, such as quotations, subheadings and subheadings. , especially the use of subtitles, which will make the article colorful.
So how can we draw up a novel, concise, eye-catching and literary composition topic in the examination room? The author summarizes the topic of full marks in college entrance examination compositions in recent years.
One is to use rhetoric. Such as metaphors, "distant eyes" and "life is not an open bow forever"; Such as exaggeration, "that obstacle shattered me" and "there is a way to heaven"; If you ask, "Who am I?" "Turn around the tree three times, what branches can you rely on? 》; For example, if you ask, "How can you get fruitful results for nothing?"? "One branch and one leaf" is the world? 》; Such as metonymy, "listening to your own heartbeat" (replacing an experience with "heartbeat"), "a head of white hair, green mountains and green rivers"; Such as anthropomorphic "Living in the South of the Yangtze River" and "Sighing of Trees"; For example, "a little blank, a long love" and "a song of red mansions, a thousand sighs" are like shouting: "farewell, my hometown! "and so on.
Second, choose themes from famous works or poems, lyrics and idioms, such as Red and Black, Kong Yiji's Postgraduate Entrance Examination, and A Q's new biography. The grass is far and near, but there is nothing. The scenery should be long and eye-catching. Don't let the clouds cover your eyes, get to know you, be eager, and lift your veil. Nothing is difficult in the world, and three people make it.
Third, some novel and unique methods, which are embodied as follows: ① ingenious cutting-in methods, such as two letters, a perfect solution to life and a report on strengths, lend you a pair of discerning eyes-an experimental report on the strengths of others; Set suspense methods, such as I am fat and I am happy, Youth Begins at Forty, Eternal Epiphyllum, The Last Song of Life, and supplementary methods, such as Grateful Heart (with gratitude as the topic) and Wonderful Don't Miss (with wonderful as the topic); (4) Unique methods, such as "I am Godot", "No writing", "Being alone is also a kind of enjoyment" and "plucking the vines of the soul".
In the following, the author briefly analyzes the beauty of some good titles in college entrance examination compositions in recent years. For example, in the topic of "Honesty" in 200 1, one candidate took "The Book of Two Places" as the topic. The content of the article was his two correspondence with his parents and talked about "Honesty". The topic copied the masterpiece "The Book of Two Places" by the famous modern writer Xu Dishan, which was concise and eye-catching. Another example is that another candidate's topic is "auction integrity", which makes people applaud. Another example is Honest Wandering, which is exquisitely conceived in the form of fable; Pear blossoms in one place give people poetic beauty; "I would like to accompany my life with honesty" borrows fashionable words and buzzwords, which is full of rich flavor of the times; Patient Wu's treatment report borrows professional terms, giving people a heavy sense of life; The famous saying of "cultivating morality with sincerity, cultivating morality with faith" and "cultivating morality with quietness and frugality" has duality and embodies cultural connotation; "7- 1=0" skillfully uses the formula, meaning that seven backpacks will have nothing without honesty, which is shocking to read.
Another example is the topic of "Choice of Mind" in 2002, which has many novel and striking titles. "Love, the first choice in life" and "Life is colorful because of choice" are dazzling and go straight to the point; The application of personification in Footsteps of Sunshine is amazing. Leng Xia put a set of contradictory words "cold" and "summer" together, which makes people curious; Choosing a Cage compares the courage to sacrifice one's life for righteousness and serve the country with Wu's "choosing a cage". The title is unexpected, which makes people want to read it quickly. Choose Confucius? Choose Zhuangzi? Using metonymy, Confucius replaced the spirit of "making progress, knowing that you can't do it" and Zhuangzi replaced the "lonely, carefree and independent ethics". The title is implicit and meaningful; Choice of Dreams, Choice of Honesty and Choice of Responsibility use three subheadings, namely "Kuafu Chasing the Sun", "Qu Yuan Throwing into the River" and "Yue Fei Being Killed" respectively, and the title is one of the top ten famous songs in ancient China, which is simple and vivid. The use of contrastive rhetoric in "Instant Choice, Eternal Coordinates" is alarming. "1+ 1+...= life" cleverly shows that life is the sum of countless choices; 《 1? 100? The title of this article is very striking. According to this article, an international student from China won a presidential scholarship in the United States, but the winning condition was that she had to give up her China nationality. Her mind is faced with the difficult choice of "one hundred benefits" and "one China nationality". Finally, she gave up "100" and chose "1".
Another example is the topic of "Emotion and Cognition of Things" in 2003. Many titles are pleasing to the eye. Emotion, cognition and culture are composed of a group of words closely related to the topic, which are concise and concise; Emotion is a sail, and cognition is a ship, which is composed of metaphors side by side, making abstract things concrete and visual; The use of suspense in Baochai Mingyuan makes the marking teacher eager to read on. "Don't let your feelings blind your cognitive eyes" and "Don't judge right or wrong by intimacy", adopt direct call and go straight to the point; How to win a word "love" is remarkable, according to a sentence in Li Qingzhao's "Slow Voice".
The title is an indispensable part of the whole article, and it is the first important information that reviewers see when reviewing the composition. Some people say that a good title is half the success of writing, which is not unreasonable.
The following contents are selected from 1999 (topic "If memory can be transplanted"), 2000 (topic "The answer is colorful"), 200 1 (topic "Honesty"), 2002 (topic "Choice of soul") /2003 (topic "Emotion and affection for things"
(1), which directly reveals the theme of the article.
Such as: rational judgment, emotional participation (2003)/ public life is bright (2003)/ choice of emotion and reason (2003)/ choice of eternity (2002)/ let love be the master (2002)/ This is my choice (2002)/ lofty spiritual choice-on the beauty of tragedy (2003)
(2) Reflect the main content of the article.
Such as: caring service (2003)/ the most beautiful bird (2003)/ association caused by colored glasses (2003)/ mother, son, aunt and nephew (2003)/ I love Tang suit (2003)/ Those two fish (2002)/ Choice before dawn (2002).
(3) Enhance lyricism or be unconventional through rhetoric.
Such as: Give Feelings a Ruler (2003)/ Blue Pupa Kingdee (2003)/ Road is the mark of the moon (2003)/ Listen to the bell of the soul (2002)/ If the moon is full of affection, the moon will sing a long song (2002)/ The star lights up (2002)/ Walk with honesty (20065433).
(4), give a person with thinking, fascinating.
Such as: Unplug the dark clouds in the sky (2003)/ There is only one truth (2003)/ The height of life (2002)/ The tremor of the soul (2002)/ Where does the soul belong (2002)/ Standards and answers (2000)/ Make way for Han Han (2000)/ Who is it? (2000)/ Who am I (1999)
(5) Show the basic content or plot of the story.
Such as: Maitreya's Law (Beijing Volume 2002)/ The Yellow River needs honesty (200 1)/ Five bright hearts (200 1)/ Watching the ball (2000)/ Sad children (1999)/ Mars rescue operation (/kloc-0).
(6) New stories give people new feelings.
Such as Peacock Flying Southeast (2002)/Zhao Jun's Choice (2002)/Dongpo's Choice (2002)/After a Rainy Night's Choice (2002)/The Death of Red Rabbit (200 1)/ New Gong Yu and Zhi Zhi.
(7) Contradicting or different from common sense.
Such as: choose a cage (2002)/torture the soul (2002)/choose on the edge with your heart (2002)/auction honesty (200 1 year)/seek honesty (200 1 year)/the sun is very lively (2000)/ten minus one equals.