If there is a just visiting, let me meet Su Shi, I would like to choose-in autumn.
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Sunset in the western hills, dusk, autumn wind cool, diffuse in the air. I stood outside the door where he had to pass, watching the outline of the tower dilute in the autumn frost. Looking from a distance, at the western end of the ancient road, a figure is walking alone and stumbling through the fallen leaves. Behind him, every leaf tells his bumpy life and wonderful chapter.
As he approached, his face gradually became clear, and his tired face and bright eyes were the gray and messy beard fluttering in the autumn wind. I waited calmly, waiting for his question.
"Why did you choose to meet me in autumn?"
"The four seasons cycle, autumn is the most special season, and it has crossed the prosperity of summer. Facing the approach of winter, I can't help but hesitate, so autumn is the best season for meditation, summing up the past and establishing confidence beyond winter. Just like a short life depends on youth before and old age after, so people are not confused and know their own destiny, and many unexpected gains will be presented in front of them ... "
"Well said!" Su Shi brushed away his beard slightly and nodded with a smile, but there was a lingering sadness in his brow. "So, I should be glad that I have entered the autumn of my life. However, I have always been positive and optimistic about life, but I always have no place to live. What kind of position has fate given me? "
I smiled. As an ancient person, how can you compare with today's people's thoughts? Looking at modern times, talented people came forth in large numbers, great scholars, knowledgeable and versatile, and enjoyed a long-standing reputation. Why worry about a bad career?
"Once involved in politics, involved in this turbid torrent, it is difficult for thoughtful people to gain a foothold. Retirement is a wonderful method, and scholars are not uncommon. It's rare that you have an empty ambition, but your career is not smooth. What you admire is that you still have a clear and heroic heart in this wandering, chanting' When will the bright moon be' on the Mid-Autumn Festival night, chanting' Thinking of Gong Jin's past' on the bank of Chibi, and chanting' Youth' in the forest of Michigan. From a modern point of view, your life is full and profound. I admire you even more, regardless of gains and losses, and enjoy the bright moon in the mountains and the breeze on the river endowed by nature. What kind of mentality is this? Looks like you have no regrets. Don't you have a prominent position among poets and essayists? "
There are wild geese returning home in the sky, and the leaves are still floating in the air, making the final flight beautiful. Everything on Christmas Eve touches my heart. Everything has its own unique way of life, even if it is not perfect. How can we face life profoundly and Su Shi's confusion?
Su Shi, on the other hand, kept smoothing his beard and slightly locked his brow. For a long time, he raised his head and his brow widened a lot: "A drop in the ocean, send the ephemera to the ground!"
I looked up, the night was getting deeper and deeper, and there was a vast sky overhead, so deep and unfathomable. On the sky, the milky way is vast, and occasionally meteors flash by. I was suddenly enlightened, facing the vast universe, how small people are! Why confuse the ups and downs of life? The sky will tell you everything.
Looking back, I looked at Su Shi. From his eyes, I read a distant self-confidence. This is the exchange of hearts, transcending time and space and spanning the times. The contract between modern people and the ancients is so simple and extraordinary. We all laughed into the sky, and laughter pierced the night sky, waking up countless night birds.
2. Write Su Shi's composition Jiangxi Volume "Face"
[example]
face
( 1)
The rain came so suddenly and unexpectedly. It was just a sunny day, but now it's dark. Rain hits trees and rocks, and the world immediately falls into a fog. ...
The squirrels jumping in the bushes just now have disappeared, and the birds that were noisy in the Woods just now have stopped calling. The rest are noisy voices ... They are walking in the rain, and some lift their skirts to wipe the rain that keeps hitting them; Some are cautious, for fear of soiling shoes that are already covered with mud; Some strode and suddenly fell to the ground, splashing mud and causing a scream. ...
Su Shi was slightly tipsy, and his face was ruddy and moist in the slight cold in early spring. The rain slipped down this face, flowed to the corners of the mouth, swirled in the dimples of laughter and fell to the ground.
What face is this! He smiled, laughing at other people's embarrassment and laughing at his own "madness".
(2)
The rain came so suddenly and unexpectedly. It was just a sunny day, but now it's dark. Rain hit the eaves and stone steps, and the world immediately fell into a fog. ...
The friend who was talking and laughing in the hall just now is gone, and so is the child who was noisy under the eaves just now. All that was left was the noise ... they drank his name, caught him and pushed him into the prison car.
His eyes opened slightly, his mouth twitched because of physical pain, and his messy hair ran about his face. After a night of abuse and torture, insults and slander, his face is always marked with rain.
Outside Wutai's cell, it's still raining. There are many people in the street, and someone should come to see him-Su Shi, who won the second place in high school, was greatly appreciated by the emperor and was proud of the spring breeze. On the wide and flat road in the capital of song dynasty, a prison car was walking, tears streaming down her face. ...
(3)
The rain gradually weakened. He looked at the straw sandals under his feet and the bamboo sticks in his hand. At this moment, he suddenly felt that they were more valuable than boots and official seals.
Day used to be night, first sunny, then stormy. No matter how you hide or dodge, you will inevitably meet them. Perhaps this is a necessity of life. In this case, raise your face, face the wind and rain, and sigh: "Who is afraid? Let's spend our lives in misty rain! Then, the night used to be the day, and seeing the rainbow after the storm is another necessity of life.
Walking slowly, my mood gradually relaxed and happy, and Xiaoquer hummed unconsciously. The evening breeze blows gently, and before you know it, the clouds have dispersed, and the sunset reveals a Zhang Yanhong's face in the western hills.
He looked back and saw the winding path of Hu Sha Road, and there was another transcendental beauty in the afterglow of the sunset.
[brief comment]
This article is almost exactly the same as the example in the first volume of the country, except for a slight change in individual words (the changed parts are underlined), which will be appropriately transformed into "face". The article adds a short paragraph in the first and second parts to highlight "face". The author knows that everything on the "face" is the expression of "heart", so the addition of these paragraphs seems to be invisible and appropriate.
The title of "face" is very inclusive, because everything outside is an internal expression, which makes many articles can be transformed into "face". The author seized this trick and transplanted his original article "Unexpected Reasons-Ding Fengbo" without moving pen and ink.
Many students get abstract conceptual topics, but they can still hand in an article casually. Once they encounter visual topics, they are immediately imprisoned by images and can't write any in-depth articles around them. Even the conception skills of this article can be used for reference. This is not plagiarism, but "stealing your laziness" and using the accumulation of your usual composition for deep processing. Because of their profound thoughts and mature language, such articles often get better results in the examination room.
Here, critics can also steal one laziness. For other comments on the article, please refer to the brief comment on the article "Unexpected reasons-Ding Fengbo".
3. Ask for a composition about Su Shi, write about Su Shi's life and bring 500 poems written by Su Shi at that time.
"Ten years of life and death, I don't think about it, I am unforgettable, I am thousands of miles away, and there is nowhere to be sad." Su Shi, who has fallen for hundreds of years, slowly came to me from the book, dragging his tired body.
In front of my eyes, there appeared such a lonely figure: Su Shi, dressed in a cloth, wearing a hat and clogs, holding bamboo joints and plowing the fields on the hillside in the east. No wonder he was named Dongpo layman. However, the fate of such a literary man is so bumpy and bleak that I can't help but feel sad when I read Su Shi's poems from childhood to adulthood.
Su Shi is a frustrated person in my eyes. This set of data is enough to explain everything: at the age of 36, he wrote to Zongshen, talked about political gains and losses, angered Wang Anshi and was demoted to Hangzhou. At the age of 39, he was demoted to Michigan. He was demoted to Xuzhou at the age of 42. At the age of 44, he was slandered by traitors and accused of satirizing the imperial court with poetry. He was almost killed and demoted to Huangzhou. This is a place where people are left to fend for themselves-I am really indignant at Su Shi's experience. Is his unparalleled talent the reason for being hurt?
I don't think Su Shi understood why he was exiled to Huangzhou, because he was devoted to the country and the people, so he escaped from reality and expressed his dissatisfaction by climbing mountains near the water and hanging monuments. In fact, how eager he is to "talk and laugh" like Zhou Yu to reverse this unsuccessful life situation. However, even if there were many lofty aspirations at that time, who could he tell? I can only express my feelings in poetry. "Flying rocks are too empty, stormy waves are afraid of the shore, thousands of snow rolls, picturesque mountains and rivers, and there are many heroes at one time." Reading here today, I feel a different kind of sadness and heroism.
Su Shi in my eyes is a sad and lonely person. At the age of 34, his wife, the most trusted person in his life, left him, and his wife's death hit him hard. In the lonely and depressed days when he was demoted to Michigan, he could only see his long-lost wife in his dream, and the only way to see him in his dream was: "caring for each other without words, only tears." Ten years of wind and rain, through hardships, a person fell. No one understood his broken heart. You can imagine how sad Su Shi was at that time. "I hope that people will live for a long time and have a good scenery for thousands of miles." For Su Shi, it can only be a luxury dream.
Su Shi in my eyes is an inexhaustible poet. Perhaps his bumpy experience made his literary greatness. His prose and Ouyang Xiu are called "Ou Su", his poetry and Huang Tingjian are called "Su Huang", and his ci and Xin Qiji are called "Su Xin". I can't imagine what the history of China literature would be like without Su Dongpo, and it would be eclipsed.
We will not be able to read the beautiful sentence "If you want to compare the West Lake with the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate"; We can't appreciate the wise words of "Spring River Plumbing Duck Prophet" and "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain, I am in this mountain" ... what a pity!
After reading, Su Dongpo became a child in my eyes, a child who has not changed his innocence after vicissitudes of life. I think it may be this innocence that made his achievements, which we still deeply remember today and cherish forever.
In my weak tears, I saw his figure drifting away and drifting away. ...
4. How to write the composition of meeting Su Shi?
"When is the bright moon? Ask about Sky Wine. I don't know what year it is tonight. I'm willing to ride the wind to the sky, I'm afraid I can't stand the cold for nine days in a pavilion of fine jade. What does it feel like to dance to understand the shadow on earth? " This fresh and refined lyric comes from Su Dongpo, a famous poet in the Northern Song Dynasty. ; Water regulation >; He yearns for the beautiful dream of heaven, but he can't make up for his loneliness. He can only pin his feelings on the eternal life of the world and promise eternal love.
From the beginning, the image of Su Dongpo has always been a charming, handsome and broad-minded genius in my mind. Most of his poems also express their true feelings, breaking through the feudal boundaries, with heroic style and stirring language.
Su Dongpo is inseparable from us and has a long history. 900 years ago, Su Dongpo was demoted as the satrap of Hangzhou. Su Dongpo, who came to Hangzhou at that time, saw the West Lake irrigation project rebuilt by Bai Juyi in the Tang Dynasty, which was in disrepair for a long time. Not only can he not guarantee the water for rice fields, but even the drinking water for citizens has become a problem. The lake is overgrown with weeds, which has occupied 23/ 10 of the water surface. At this moment, almost the whole West Lake is blocked by silt and aquatic plants, the bottom of the lake rises, the water level becomes shallow, the water pipeline is damaged, and the people have to drink the salty water of Qiantang River tide.
So it took Su Dongpo and migrant workers four months to restore the West Lake to its original appearance. I heard that at that time, many aquatic plants entangled in vines on the West Lake were entangled, which brought many difficulties. So Su Dongpo came to supervise the project as soon as he was free or personally eradicated it, which greatly boosted morale. It is said that Dongpo meat was also a delicious food cooked by people at that time to thank him. Su Dongpo piled weeds and soil dug out of the water in the center of the lake.
Nowadays, tourists can still feel the elegance of this famous poet in the Song Dynasty by walking on the Su Causeway and looking at the clear lake and the blooming lotus flowers.
Under the embankment, the lake is beautiful, green willows and weeping willows are intertwined, and my long hair is immersed in the clear water of the West Lake. There are towering green hills on both sides and leaves at the end. I feel as if I have melted into this vast West Lake.
5. There is an urgent need to write a composition related to Su Shi's poems. Huang Tingjian: People say that Dongpo wrote this article because it is difficult to see coincidence, so he is very skillful.
I don't think so. He was older than the article, so he wrote.
The article is wonderful in the world, and loyalty runs through the sun and the moon. Su Zhe: It exists in people. If it is not as good as fear, it is good to call it fear. If you don't look well, you will be afraid; Do the right thing bravely, no matter how harmful it is.
I am trapped in the world of this number, but I don't hate it. Chao Wuxia: Su Dongpo's ci, people say there are many discordant rhythms.
However, the vulgar words are outstanding, and naturally they can't draw in the song. Zhao Shen: Sincere words and suggestions, a great festival in court, courtiers are second to none.
Huang Jinxiang: "Dongpo is a famous satellite that shines on the world." Liu Chenweng: From Ci to Dongpo, they are all aboveboard. They like poetry, prose and wonders of heaven and earth.
Wang Shizhen: Since the Han and Wei Dynasties, many people have become famous for their poems for more than two thousand years. Only Cao Zijian, Li Taibai and Su Zizhan are immortal.
Wang Guowei: Compared with the Tang poetry, the Song poetry is as white as Dongpo, as rubbing parsley, and as happy as Qiqing, and Fang Hui is as reasonable as ten sons.
6. Write an 800-word composition about Su Shi, Su Shi in my eyes.
You said that he turned his writing into praise with sincere feelings, and you said that he weaved heroic images with ideal style. You said that he let the intrigue in officialdom flow on him, and his attitude towards life, even after too many failures, was put down with a smile ... When I first tasted your poem, I didn't really have much idea, but I just felt that there was nothing between the lines that attracted me.
Today, I was lucky enough to read your When is the Bright Moon? I understand that although you are 465,438+0 years old, you are not proud of politics in a dumb county far from Beijing, but you are full of hope for reality. I can't help snickering: When did you become youthful? The sinister officialdom didn't resist your political ambition (will). Even if the weather is not beautiful, you will. From the poem, I see: you meet coolness in the bright moonlight, and the Mid-Autumn Festival is good on fifteen nights. Why is the moon in the sky round and bright? You nobly raise your glass to the moon, and the faint sadness disappears. Without relatives, you can only drink and dance. The ancient customs you have learned are intertwined, rotated and poured into a loose movement with your worries and feelings. The yard is filled with the mellow smell of wine. You said: I hope to go back to Korea to do great things, but I am afraid of being framed by thieves. When is it time for me to show my ambition? However, when the conversation turned, I couldn't help thinking, how can I see the rainbow without experiencing wind and rain all my life? Nothing in the world is perfect. Although I can't give advice to the royal family, how can I pray for the world? At this time, the sky seems to be clear several times, and the haze in my heart is like a breeze. ...
I can't help but think of that sentence written by the poet, which contains too many emotions, just like Li Bai's I Sing. The moon encourages me and I dance. My shadow is rolling in the back. It's beautiful, but it's not as good as Dancing Out of the Shadow-it sums everything up. Actually, I don't know poetry. I just look for it by feeling. For a long time, I didn't know whether Dongpo pork was also related to Su Shi, but at the moment, I just want to immerse myself in the open-minded feelings of this Mid-Autumn Festival night. Su Shi, I may not see through you, but your love for the motherland and your openness to everything, I think, I will always remember it!
The autumn wind blows everywhere, fascinating poems, happy and moving notes, and everything will be buried deep in the bottom of my heart and spread to the distance. ...
7. Does Su Shi's composition refuse to live in West Western jackdaw? Is it a drinker? I raised my glass and asked the moon. Are you an idiot who has lived and died for ten years? The flowers on the bridge are blooming again.
I finally meet you. I only see green bamboo sticks, green sandals and clothes wet by rain.
Your smile is calm and free, quiet and extraordinary, and your eyes are even more exciting, with clear autumn wind and clear water. I really want to ask you: "Don't you complain about the world?" Are you willing to be demoted? Don't you want to achieve your life? "I have guessed his answer, he would have been calm, not happy for things, not sorry for himself.
Exile the imperial city, hold lanterns in the wind, lead the yellow to clear the warehouse and sigh the hero. In the past, it was very difficult to walk in the scenery of Bianhe River.
It is endless hatred for success or failure. Who is with you for pride? A misty rain lasts a lifetime, and snow flies. Dongpo's life is extremely bumpy: love is frustrated, career is blocked, politics is dragged down, and endless grievances have nowhere to stretch.
He sang "The River Never Returning" on a moonless night, feeling that "life is everywhere, just like Hong Fei stepping on snow mud" is very indifferent. He is not moved by "petty profits and hollow reputation", but only wants to "send the rest of his life to the sea" Heart is like the wind, God is like the wind, and natural life is like the wind.
Come by the wind, go by the wind, leaving an immortal literary talent that shines on the historical stage. In a blink of an eye, a thousand years have passed; In the blink of an eye, you will have white hair.
Let this river of no return be drunk once, sick once and sad once. You are a person like the wind and a heart like the wind. You dance beautifully with the essence of life! Carve your gorgeous dance with a carving knife, let future generations look up to you, and your boldness has become a landscape in the Northern Song Dynasty.
Who says life can't go back to adolescence? The water in front of the door can still flow west, so don't sing yellow chicken with white hair. Su Shi, wonderful! .
8. Write an article according to Su Shi's life profile: "Aesthetic life and official life are two diametrically opposite attitudes towards life. Officialdom life and poet's nature are fundamentally incompatible: one is a masked politician, the other is a poet with pure heart, the other is hypocrisy that desperately needs officialdom entertainment, and the other must be sincere.
Su Shi's life is a typical aesthetic life, that is, it is his pleasure to immerse himself in literature and art and enjoy the hue, order, rhythm and harmony of the life universe. Today, I read the article "Su Shi's Aesthetic Life" written by my teacher, and got a better understanding of Su Shi.
We have been studying Su Shi's poems since primary school. At first, we just thought his poems were bold and uninformed, and we didn't know much about them. But after reading this article, I think there are too many things in it that we admire, his literary talent and his personality.
Below, I only give a brief introduction to Su Shi's poems: (1) Su Shi's life: Su Shi (1037 ~1year), whose word is profound and whose word is harmonious, was born in Meishan, Meizhou, Song Dynasty (now Meizhou, Sichuan). He, his father, Su Xun, and his younger brother, Su Zhe, are both famous literary figures, and they are called "Three Sus" in the world. It is the same as "Cao San and his son" (Cao Cao, Cao Pi, Cao Zhi) at the end of Han Dynasty.
Speaking of him, almost anyone with a little knowledge of literature knows it. His father, Su Xun, was the "Sue" mentioned in The Amethyst at the age of 27.
Su Xun got angry late, but he worked hard. In his later years, Su Shi recalled his childhood experience of studying with his father and felt that he was deeply influenced by his father.
Of course, without Su Xun's hard work, Su Shi would not have been able to get a good tutor since he was a child, let alone "learn the history of general classics, which belongs to thousands of words every day", let alone have a future literary master. In the first year of Jiayou (1056), 20-year-old Su Shi left Sichuan for Beijing for the first time to take the imperial examination.
The following year, he took the examination of the Ministry of Rites and won the appreciation of Ouyang Xiu, the examiner, with an article on punishment and loyalty, and became a scholar in high school. In the sixth year of Jiayou, Su Shi took the Chinese secondary school exam, which is usually called "three-year Beijing Examination", got the third grade, and signed a book for the judge in Dali.
Later, his father died in Bianjing, and Ding returned to his hometown. In the second year of Xining (1069), he returned to the DPRK after his term of office, and he was still appointed.
Su Shi has been away from Beijing for several years, and great changes have taken place in North Korea. After Zongshen ascended the throne, he appointed Wang Anshi to support the political reform.
Many of Su Shi's teachers and friends, including Ouyang Xiu, who admired him at the beginning, were forced to leave Beijing because they disagreed with the new country Wang Anshi's implementation of the new law. The old rain in the ruling and opposition parties faded away, and what Su Shi saw in his eyes was no longer the "peaceful and prosperous times" he saw at the age of twenty.
On his way back to Beijing, Su Shi saw the harm of the new law to ordinary people, so he disagreed with Prime Minister Wang Anshi and thought that the new law could not facilitate the people, so he wrote a letter of opposition. As a result, like his teachers and friends who were forced to leave Beijing, they were not allowed to stay in the court.
So Su Shi asked for his release and was transferred to Hangzhou to serve as a general. Su Shi stayed in Hangzhou for three years. After his term, he was transferred to Mizhou, Xuzhou, Huzhou and other places.
This lasted for about ten years, and Su Shi met the first disaster in his life. At that time, someone deliberately distorted his poems and made a big fuss.
In the second year of Yuanfeng (1079), Su Shi arrived in Huzhou for less than three months, and was arrested and imprisoned for writing poems to satirize the new law, which is known as Wutai Poetry Case. Su Shi was in prison 103 days, almost on the verge of being beheaded.
Su Shi was spared because of the national policy of not killing ministers during Mao's reign in the Northern Song Dynasty. After he was released from prison, Su Shi was demoted to Yong Lian of Huangzhou Regiment (equivalent to the vice captain of modern civil self-defense forces).
This position is quite humble, and at this time, Su Shi has been disheartened after this prison. In his spare time, he leads his family to reclaim wasteland and farms to help make a living. The nickname "Dongpo lay man" was given to him at this moment.
In the seventh year of Yuanfeng in Song Shenzong, Su Shi left Huangzhou for Ruzhou. Due to the long distance and tiring journey, Su Shi's children died unfortunately.
Ruzhou is far away, and all the tolls have been used up. Coupled with the pain of losing his son, Su Shi wrote to the court, requesting not to go to Ruzhou for the time being, and to live in Changzhou first, and then was approved. When he was ready to return to Changzhou, Zongshen passed away.
Zhezong ascended the throne, Wang Anshi's power declined, and Sima Guang was re-enabled as the phase. Su Shi was recalled to North Korea on 1920.
After that, in a short period of one or two years, Su Shi was promoted from the governor of Dengzhou to the bachelor of Hanlin and became the minister of the highest etiquette department. As the saying goes, "Beijing officials are not easy to be."
Su Shi saw the emerging forces desperately suppressing the figures of Wang Anshi Group and abolishing the new law. He thought that they were just birds of a feather with the so-called "Wang Dang" and once again offered advice and suggestions to the emperor. At this point, Su Shi could neither tolerate the new party nor forgive the old party, so he asked for another transfer.
As a bachelor of Longtuge, he went to Hangzhou as a prefect again after a long absence of 16 years. Su Shi's only achievement in Hangzhou is to build a major water conservancy project and a dam beside the West Lake, which is the famous "Su Causeway".
Su Shi lived happily in Hangzhou and compared himself to Bai Juyi in the Tang Dynasty. But not long after, Wang Anshi came to power again and he was recalled to North Korea.
But he was soon released to Yingzhou because of political disagreement. After that, Su Shi went to the DPRK several times, demoted officials, demoted officials, entered the DPRK ... and suffered the ups and downs of the official sea.
He was banished to Huizhou and Danzhou (now Hainan Island), and when Yuan Dynasty (11kloc-0/) was recalled to Beijing again, he died in Changzhou at the age of 66. Judging from Su Shi's resume, he was not successful as an official. His main advantage lies in his literary creation.
He was one of the eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties and one of the four great calligraphers in Song Dynasty (Su, Huang, Mi and Cai). As far as the existing works of Su Shi are concerned, he is proficient in all kinds of poems and songs. In the talented Song Dynasty, he was a poet, a poet and a writer.
(2) Su Shi's outlook on life and aesthetics: Su Shi's diverse outlook on life and rich and complicated thoughts have had various influences on his literature. In recent years, researchers hold different views on this. For example, Pu Youjun's Beyond the Predicament: Su Shi in Hainan (Journal of Sichuan Normal University, No.3, 1992) holds that Su Shi's optimistic and open-minded lifestyle and aesthetic attitude enabled him to overcome all kinds of persecution and hardships in the remote and poor Danzhou, Hainan, and embark on the road of poetry creation and literary thought.
9. Write an article "Meeting with Su Shi" 1, and write about the social state at that time. (It can be worse or exaggerated)
2. How do you know Su Shi? Imagine for yourself. Just imagine.
Narrating a few things, secretly pointing out Su Shi's family background, personality, talent, humor and his shortcomings.
In these things, you can write about your struggle with Su Shi.
As far as his "shortcomings" are concerned, write down a few things that he did "wrong" (not too big a mistake, otherwise you can't rewind the pen)
In fact, it is only necessary to secretly point out that he is forced to do so. To think that he is "wrong" is just that the eyes of the world are low.
Turn around again, turn his shortcomings in adversity into advantages (think for yourself), do great things, do anything for the people, for the people.
Finally, to summarize. Send out your feelings
You can be used as a marker in an event. Write "You" high or low (but not higher than Su Shi)
You can exaggerate your personality and compare it with Su Shi.
But it's good to have a contrast between light and dark, which attracts readers and makes sentences humorous.