2. Learn to discuss how to write a 400-word composition. I always like to write some sad or lonely words, and I feel at ease in my own world. One day, I suddenly remembered some messy thoughts and wrote such a sunny text. In this midsummer season, light and shadow are everywhere, let me sing a hymn, although I am a natural tone-deaf person.
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Wake up in the morning, the air is fresh, the birds are singing and the flowers are fragrant. A ray of sunshine passes through the high-rise buildings in the city and is projected on the wall opposite the dormitory, depicting many colorful symbols.
The windows of the dormitory have been open since April. Even though the summer in Kunming is far away and the sky is still blue, the temperature of more than 20 degrees and the long-term dryness make us unaccustomed to the humidity here. At night, listening to the "whirring" wind seems to pass by our ears, which has a hearty taste and adds a little sweetness to our dreams.
After physical education class in the afternoon, I went back to the dormitory to freshen up, picked up books and went to the comprehensive building to be on duty. I've always wanted to get busy, so that summer's irritability will pass quickly. Just after I turned on the computer, a text came, and our editor came to type. Just when he was using a computer without internet connection, I sat down safely and boarded 5 1 to see my friends as usual.
At the beginning, the little pig came. She is an alumnus I met in the school newspaper. She is a lively and cheerful girl. She is very generous. She is far away from me. However, this does not prevent me from associating with such girls. I like her omnipotent courage, and I like her courage to do her best for her dreams. She said that the school youth league Committee came to inquire about some news about the entrepreneurial design competition, and after sitting for a while, she was reluctant to leave. Call me and teach her how to blog. I applied for one for her, joined a group I like to go to, and let her chat with a good friend of hers for a while. When she left, I didn't have much time, didn't write an article, and left after a while.
3. How to write classroom questions about outdoor activities in the first grade composition of primary school students? You said I said to discuss outdoor activities 201411654381to cultivate students' cooperative consciousness and oral communication ability.
2. Cultivate students' feelings of loving nature. Teaching focuses on cultivating students' cooperative consciousness and oral communication ability.
Difficulties in teaching cultivate students' cooperative consciousness and oral communication ability. Teaching preparation card courseware teaching process 1. Create situations and stimulate interest.
On the big screen are pictures of autumn leaves and children's outdoor activities. ) teacher: please look at the picture carefully and say, what are the characteristics of autumn? Health 1: It's autumn, and the leaves are yellow, falling one by one.
Health 2: When autumn comes, a flock of geese fly south, forming a word "human" and a word "one" at a time. Health 3: It's autumn and it's getting cold.
Mother prepared a sweater for me. Teacher: The children speak very well. Do you like autumn? Health: I like it! Teacher: Do you want to go outdoors? Student: Yes (writing on the blackboard: outdoor activities) Teacher: What activities should we do? How to do activities? We will discuss it together in this class.
Teacher: The children did a good job. So how do we discuss it? What outdoor activities are we discussing? Please open the book gently, turn to page 67 and read the requirements in the book first.
Second, explore new knowledge (1) and clarify the requirements of this oral communication: 1, please read the requirements and specific contents of this oral communication freely in pinyin. The teacher has requirements.
(1) Read the pronunciation correctly; (2) Read through without adding words or missing words. Teacher: You all read very carefully. Now who can bravely stand up and read to everyone! 2, read by name, everyone thinks; What do you want to discuss in this oral communication? 3. Roll call report: (Teacher's blackboard) When to discuss outdoor activities, what activities to do and what to prepare? Teacher: Your answer is really accurate! Discuss outdoor activities in groups 1. Teacher: What outdoor activities do you like to do, children? Can you talk about your thoughts in the group first? Now start talking! 2. Teacher: The students are really enthusiastic! So who will talk about their favorite activities? Health 1: I like all kinds of leaves on the mountain.
I also like to pick leaves in the mountains. Health 2: I like picking walnuts, hazelnuts and mushrooms in the mountains.
I'm so happy. S3: I like going to school and playing all kinds of games.
3. Group by project: Teacher: Some children like to play games at school; Some children like to go to the mountains to pick fruits; Some like to pick up all kinds of leaves on the hillside. Look, there are three cards in the teacher's pocket. The teacher shows the card and reads it. They say "playing games on campus", "picking leaves in the Woods" and "picking fruits in the mountains". What activities do you like? We happen to be three groups of classmates. We can be divided into three groups. Which group do you like to go to? Sign up quickly! Teacher: Please ask three students to choose the leader of this group. Everyone should listen to the arrangement of the leader! Discuss the plan in four groups.
Teacher: What the children said was really great. Now that we have solved what activities we are going to do, let's discuss it again. When shall we go to the activity and what shall we prepare? Please discuss in the group! Then please report to the team leader. 5 inform the plan and supplement the teacher: the children really study hard! Please welcome the team leader to report. Health 1: Our group is going to pick up leaves on the hillside at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning as a specimen.
We should bring convenience bags, hats, water, etc. Health 2: Our group is going to pick fruit on the mountain at 8 o'clock on Sunday morning, and we should bring small baskets, fruits, drinks, bread and so on.
S3: Our group goes to school to play games on Sunday afternoon. Teacher: It's very nice and thoughtful of everyone. Go to activities during the big week (blackboard writing: big week), bring food and food (blackboard writing: use and food).
Will the teacher remind everyone not to forget to bring pens and paper and write down their new discoveries or feelings? Which student wants to add! Teachers should also remind everyone to pay attention to safety so as not to hurt themselves. (3) Confirmation of implementation: Teacher: Children, after discussion between the teacher and the group leader, we decided on two outdoor activities for safety. One is to play games on campus at 2 pm on Sunday, and the other is to collect leaves and fruits on the mountain at 8 am on Thursday. Do you agree? Would you like to attend? Tell everyone a good news: Teachers and Miss Zhao will also attend. Are you popular? I believe that under the leadership of the two teachers, our activities will definitely make everyone happy. It's bound to succeed.
Third, summary:
How to discuss this matter? I regret bringing it up.
In the process of my growing up, there are many things worth meeting, and one thing is deeply imprinted in my mind, which I will never forget.
It was a fake day. I took the key to Runman's house and put it in my pocket. Because we are good friends, we play a little crazy. When I went home in the afternoon, I found that the key was missing. She came to help me find it and finally found it in my pocket. I blushed and asked her, "Did you steal it?"
"I-you don't even have basic trust in me. I found it on the ground and wanted to return it to you when you went back, but I forgot for a moment. " She's about to cry. I didn't listen to her explanation, so I grabbed the key and turned away immediately.
We haven't seen each other for a week. At this time, I regretted it a little, and a question came to my mind: "Did I really misunderstand her?" "Then I decided to apologize to her.
"I'm sorry!" I found her and said in shame, "I misunderstood you." "It doesn't matter, I was also wrong that day." We all saluted each other to express our apologies. Unexpectedly, we hit our heads with a bang, and the two of us couldn't help laughing knowingly. At this time, I found the God of Friendship floating overhead again.
I will never do anything I regret again.
In my childhood, I had many regrets, some of which I can't remember clearly. But there is only one thing that I still remember and feel guilty about.
commemorate
I was six years old that year. One day, my parents and I went back to our hometown to visit my grandmother. I went to play with the children in the village as soon as I got home. I brought Ma Xiaohu, Dog Leftover and Zhu Tiehe Guangshan. We discuss what to play.
Yao competes. The dog said, "Fight!" Everyone shook their heads. Tiezhu said, "Hide and seek!" "Everyone shook his head again. At this moment, furtive Ma Xiaohu spoke: "Hey, do you want to eat pears? "When they heard about eating pears, they
Several of them suddenly got excited: "Yes!" Ma Xiaohu said quietly, "Today, I saw Uncle Wang, who is guarding the vegetable garden, selling a big pear in a plastic bag, which may be put in the shed of his vegetable garden. We took it out while he was away, alone.
Divide one. "I heard that, they have a few saliva out, agreed to Ma Xiaohu's proposal. So, I started a secret operation of "stealing pears" with them in a daze.
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The children bypassed the pond outside the village and came to Uncle Wang's vegetable garden. The vegetable garden was surrounded by a circle of high earth walls, only a small door made of fence was opened, and an iron lock was hung on the door. This means that Uncle Wang is not here. At this time, Ma Xiaohu.
Led us around the fence of the vegetable garden and stopped at a gap in the fence. Ma Xiaohu said, "Xiao Bin, you and I are fighting on the first line, watching the wind in the mountains and tying dogs to the posts." Everything is arranged, and we will
Let's leave now.
Ma Xiaohu and I pulled open the fence in the gap and sneaked into the vegetable garden. Ma Xiaohu was still clever. He saw two big bamboo baskets with vegetables under the fence. Each of us had a cover on our heads and squatted forward slowly. I'm worried and curious, and I feel like a little scout in the movie.
5. Choose a discussion experience, write a composition, and choose to be strong.
The weather is getting warmer, apricot flowers are blooming and pear flowers are blooming on the branches. Walking out of the house in the afternoon, tall and straight poplars are neatly arranged on both sides of the road, and their straight bodies are like a stubborn role. The grass under the tree also learns the stubbornness of the tree and sticks its head out from under the stone.
When I walked leisurely to the leisure square, I accidentally caught a glimpse of a little red ant. It was injured and one leg was lame for some reason. It desperately wants to do something, but it can't. I gently hold the little ant in my palm, and the criss-crossing palm prints make it lose its way.
The warm sunshine covers the earth, and the warm airflow turns me into that little ant.
When the stinging one-meter sunlight fell on the earth, the little red ant felt warm. It stretched and exercised its muscles and bones all winter, and then opened the stone in the hole with its front foot.
Spring has returned to the earth! The little red ant is destined to be a worker ant from birth, so it never skimps on its own strength. It once brought home everything by itself, such as fragrant rice grains, withered branches and leaves, dead insects and so on. Now it won't enjoy the comfort of the sunshine alone. It and its partners have taken the hard-working nature and started working in groups of three or five.
The little red ant walked forward by the smell left by her friends. At first, this rule was too familiar to it. Without any reason and preparation, it changed its direction when crossing a small stone and inadvertently changed its life trajectory.
When it realized that it was lost, fear made it flustered. It's obviously spring, but I feel the cold in autumn. It suddenly misses every ordinary and ordinary day in the past. It looked at the distance with a little disappointment. Its heart is like a kite with a broken line, and it has been walking blankly for a long time. At the most frustrated time, it was mercilessly attacked by black ants and its limbs were injured.
The past seeped into my mind bit by bit, and the little ant remembered those friends who walked with him but left. Fortunately, with him with me, he is no longer afraid of fields without road signs. On blue days, there are always flowers on the desk, so I believe that the sunshine is always after the storm.
The past is like the wind, and the world is green. I put the little ant gently on the ground. Although scarred, it will not give up looking for its own world. Little ant, did you see that the poplar is still standing, and the grass can find room for development from the skull. Please don't give up this power. Choose strength, choose life. Choose strength, choose life.
Years pass through your fingers, and your mind grows with them. There is a boat, carrying my once gentle heart, floating on the calm or turbulent sea. Maybe it plays and laughs on the high waves, maybe it runs aground on the rocks at low tide, or maybe it grows quietly in the long waves on a night with high clouds and light clouds.
I still remember that I was young and carefree at that time, but I was proud that I couldn't walk into kindergarten alone. My mind has grown. I have learned to be proud of myself and to love myself. You can write about how I left my mother to go to kindergarten when I was a child, as the main content of this paragraph. )
Tears like rain, actually moved by love! At that time, my mind has grown into a heart that appreciates love. (Motherly love, fatherly love, teacher love and classmate love are all acceptable. Motherly love is easier to write. It is good to write about how a mother cares about herself and how she is moved. )
Now I can get up by myself when I fall, and I can even hide my pain. I learned to love others.
A growing mind is like a ship sailing in a rough sea. It understands waves, feels them and finally controls them. I also know and give love in my years. This is the most important growth of the mind and the most perfect growth.
This is just an outline, but at least I guarantee that it is pure and original. ..
7. Learn to discuss the composition, adopt other people's suggestions, and discuss how to modify the article. Ouyang Xiu, a great poet in the Song Dynasty, set a good example for us.
Let's have a look! Don't forget to learn the secret from it! Ouyang Xiu in the Northern Song Dynasty once said: "There are three kinds of literature: reading more, doing more and discussing more." Ouyang Xiu put forward "more discussion" in his writing, which means to learn from like-minded people when writing articles.
The function of "multi-discussion" in learning writing is multifaceted. There is a folk legend that the wise fairy monk asked Ouyang Xiu to take notes on the day when Zuiweng Pavilion was completed.
Ouyang Xiu wrote a poem in the afternoon and copied six copies overnight. The next morning, he ordered people to post it on six gates for polishing and revision. On this day, many people read his article, but no one put forward suggestions for revision.
Until the evening, an old woodcutter who was over 50 years old came to the state hall and said to Ouyang Xiu, "The adult's article is very good, but the beginning is too? Hey. " Ouyang Xiu immediately recited his article: "Chuzhou is surrounded by mountains, with Wulong Mountain Scenic Resort in the east, Dafeng Mountain in the west, Huashan Mountain in the south, Mibai Mountain in the north, its southwest peaks, and You Mei ..." The old woodcutter chimed in: "Here's the problem! What Wulong Mountain Scenic Resort, Dafeng Mountain, Huashan Mountain and Mibai, as long as you stand on the south gate of Wolf Evil Mountain, you will see the mountain as soon as you turn around! " Ouyang Xiu suddenly realized after listening, and immediately rewrote the beginning and said, "Chu is surrounded by mountains."
This legend describes Ouyang Xiu's practice of "discussing more articles" and is discussed with ordinary people. Consultation is an exchange of views.
Because Ouyang Xiu discussed with the old woodcutter, he changed the 25-word sentence about the surrounding mountains into five words: "There are mountains around Chu, and there are mountains in Chu." It is wonderful and just right to savor this change carefully.
We might as well do it. So how to follow suit? First, open your mind.
Writing a composition should be both flexible and conservative. After the birth of the article, in addition to choosing words repeatedly, you should also learn to let others comment on your article.
After all, a person's wisdom is limited, so remember: the flame is high when people pick up talents. Closed thinking, the content of the article will not be rich.
Ouyang Xiu copied six copies of his own articles and posted them on six city gates for the people to touch up and modify. It shows that he is an open-minded person.
Second, be good at discussion. In writing, students may encounter such a problem: they have several materials expressing the same theme and don't know which one is better. Or don't know which word is just right in the process of writing? Or it's hard to determine what rhetoric method can best express what you want to write ... At this moment, isn't it better to open your heart, tell your classmates or friends what you think, discuss with them and make a choice? Finally, actively adopt it.
As long as the conclusion reached through consultation is correct and feasible, we should actively adopt it. Revise it immediately and strive for perfection, otherwise the discussion is meaningless.
Well, when the child is writing a composition, when you are not sure about it or finish writing an article, you might as well show it to your classmates and partners. Don't forget to discuss with them. In this way, your composition will be excellent ... people will admire it.
8. Pupils write a composition about discussing things with others. 1 From school to now, I sit at the same table with many people.
But the closest and best relationship is Sun Chao, who is quick-witted, quick-witted, studies well and loves sports! He is the same age as me. He is a child of the Hui nationality. He has a Zhang Yuanyuan face, a high nose and big ears. A pair of thick eyebrows always seems to convey wisdom and friendly information to you.
Sun Chao's clever and quick response. Every time the teacher asks a question in class, he is always the first to raise his hand and answer it correctly; Every time the teacher asks us to write a composition, he always writes a good article in a very short time; Everyone likes to discuss problems with him after school. We sincerely admire his understanding and mastery of knowledge.
Sun Chao studies very hard. He comes to school on time every day and listens carefully in class.
Sometimes after class, other students go outside to play, and he still sits there reading. Every time he comes home from school, he always finishes the homework assigned by the teacher first, and then previews the lessons for the next day.
If he has time, he will read some extracurricular books. What "Chinese Volume A", "words and sentences" and "excellent composition of primary school students" are all things he has to do and read every day.
In order to expand his knowledge, he also asked his mother to enroll him in off-campus composition classes and Olympic math classes, and often used holidays and sundays to study. Because he studies very hard, he can get good grades in every unit exam, mid-term exam and final exam. He likes physical exercise very much.
He is not only serious about going to physical education class, but also active in his spare time. He likes swimming very much.
Whether it is hot summer or cold winter, he can keep swimming and exercising. On the wall of his small bedroom, more than a dozen awards were posted in the swimming competition alone.
Because he is active, he often "gets into trouble". Once after school, he and several of our classmates played the game of "catching people" in the corridor of the classroom.
We chased each other and had a good time. But accidentally, he bumped into a second-grade little brother, and his little brother's eyes hit him right on the chin.
As a result of overexertion, my little brother's eyes cracked a one-centimeter-long hole, and the blood flowed, which frightened us. At this time, the teacher came, called mom and dad, and sent my little brother to the hospital to "sew".
To this end, teachers and parents severely criticized him, and we also wrote a check to the teacher with him. Because I have a very good relationship with Sun Chao, when we sit together, we often whisper in class, and sometimes we do some little tricks.
Once in the "Sipin" class, our little tricks were discovered by the teacher. After class, the teacher asked us to stay and write a check.
We all regret it. In order to be strict with myself, I took the initiative to find a teacher and asked for a seat adjustment.
We are in a class, a classroom and a seat. We often study, play and play games together.
We care about each other, learn from each other and help each other, and we will always be good friends. There is a classmate in our class. His name is Yao Liwei.
Although his grades are not good, he ranks in the last four, but he is simple and honest. This is famous in our class.
Now let me tell you one thing to prove it. Once, it was our group's turn to sweep the floor.
There are three female students and two male students in our group. In the contract area, I let the female students go and the male students clean the classroom.
There was only one male classmate at this time, so I told him that another male classmate would come later and clean the classroom with him. After the homework, I went downstairs with two female students to clean the contract area.
When we came to the contract area, two female students and I quickly picked up the waste paper on the ground. Then, clean the rubbish on the road with a broom.
These three people work hard. The contract area is getting cleaner and cleaner.
We spent a long time cleaning up the contract area. Then, the three of us went back to the classroom talking and laughing.
When I came to the classroom, I saw that everything in the classroom was beyond my expectation. The broom was not put away and was thrown on the ground. The garbage was not thrown out, lying on the ground. The floor is still dirty and hasn't been mopped.
What happened? What a mess! I am very angry. I caught the male classmate and severely criticized him.
He said that he had cleaned it, and the rest should have been cleaned by another classmate. I'm even angrier when he denies it.
At this moment, Yao Liwei just came over. I vented all my anger on him, severely criticized him, and finally ordered him to sweep the floor, take out the garbage and mop the floor ... He just listened to me criticize him silently, sweep the floor, take out the garbage, put away the broom and mop the floor ... I watched him do everything obediently, and his anger disappeared.
Then, I went into the classroom and opened the book of the students on duty. Oh, no, it is not Yao Liwei's turn to sweep the floor today. How can I criticize him? Didn't he defend himself? Suddenly, my face went red.
He didn't retaliate against me, but did what I ordered. He is really a simple and honest good classmate! He is one of my middle school classmates. He is neither tall nor thin, but he is a little taller than me. He has a pair of big eyes that are not very magical, and a Zhang greatly's mouth.
Because I love sports and often play football outside, I am in good health, but my skin is very tanned. In addition, he has another feature, that is, he has curly hair, not a perm, but a natural curl He looks like a poodle, so everyone calls him a poodle.
Another advantage of his perseverance is that he doesn't give up halfway, but finishes what he started. I remember once, we went to the football field to go to physical education class.
The teacher asked everyone to run 400 meters. So everyone lined up, and of course he was among them. After listening to the "start" password, the running began. Everyone runs forward like an arrow, and he is no exception. But something surprising happened. I saw that he had just run for more than ten feet and was suddenly "ambushed" and fell. Had a bad fall. His knee hurts.
Finally, under the painful interference, he is getting closer and closer to the finish line, ten meters, five meters.