A candidate in Shanghai

You may not believe it, but I have an unusual hobby-washing dishes.

Many people always feel that washing dishes after a full meal is a burden. Just like some people don't want to wash clothes after taking a shower, they always finish them in a hurry. Because of this, we ignore some trivial beauty in life. Everyone else suffers from washing dishes, but I enjoy it alone.

Soak greasy vegetables in a basin full of bubbles, wipe them carefully with a thick rag, and then rinse them with clear water. The original sticky vegetables immediately become smooth and clean. The blue-edged porcelain bowls hung with water drops were neatly folded by me, as if they were exquisite works of art, and then I wiped off the water drops and felt a sense of accomplishment. More importantly, after the oil was washed away, I felt as if something in my heart had gone with the water and become delicate and fresh. I wonder if you have ever felt that kind of euphoria?

Every morning, the whole family is as busy as a bee. Adults are busy with work and children are busy with their studies. The rice bowls used at home are always washed by the last person to leave, and sometimes even left until evening. Lunch is handled separately at work or school, so only dinner symbolizes family reunion and relaxation. After dinner, washing dishes naturally became an opportunity for me to show filial piety. I always liked it. While washing dishes, talking and laughing with my family, I don't feel tired at all. If the tune "Wash and Brush" is playing on TV at this moment, I will dance with chopsticks and knock on the bowl on a whim, humming and swaying to the music. Occasionally, I look up at the window and see thousands of lights, thinking that maybe every light has the same atmosphere, and I can't help but indulge in it. In the warm light, each bowl actually has a layer of blue and white halo flowing on it. From time to time, my heart will be filled with a little warmth and a little satisfaction.

For me, washing dishes is not only a housework, but also a way to nourish my life. Whenever friends and relatives have a dinner, the question after a full meal is "Who washes the dishes". I said, "I'll wash it. I have this hobby. " So people call me "hardworking humor". Ha ha ha, with this reputation, why not?

Someone said to me, "If you were a dishwasher, you wouldn't be so happy." I think so, too. Only such a beautiful family life can make me appreciate trivial and unusual sweetness.

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I didn't expect such a trivial matter as washing dishes to enable the author to write such a beautiful "big article". Whether it is the process of washing dishes or the details of washing dishes, it is spread out without affectation. For example, when describing washing dishes, "sticky dishes immediately become smooth and clean", such a scene description is very appropriate; For example, after washing the dishes, the phrase "there is a layer of blue and white halo flowing in the bowl" is beautiful; When describing the inner feelings, the phrase "a little warmth, a little satisfaction" is even more true. Finally, when everyone regards washing dishes as my "diligence and humor", the phrase "Why not use this good name to do it" shows the author's thoughts and feelings of loving labor and life to the fullest.

I am very happy in my heart.

A candidate in Shanghai

Mom has been haggard a lot recently. Yes, she is too tired for this family!

My mother is very busy with work and housework. I am in junior high school, which makes her very worried. Today is a holiday, so mom should have a good rest. To this end, I have been thinking: What can I do for my mother?

Look around: clothes, mother has washed them; The floor, mother has polished to reflect the figure; Mom has bought it, washed it, cut it, and is waiting for the pot. Well, I can't help you. I lay idle on the sofa, picked up a magazine and turned it casually. Suddenly, a line of small words caught my eye: "Combing your hair can activate qi and blood, eliminate fatigue and refresh your mind. Sticking to combing your hair for a long time is good for your physical and mental health ... "

"Eliminate fatigue?" I feel refreshed at the sight. Yes, why not give mom a "right medicine"?

I took a comb and mysteriously walked up to my mother and said, "Mom, I know you have been tired for some time. Sit on the sofa and have a rest. I'll comb your hair. The book says that combing your hair can eliminate fatigue. " Mother obediently leaned back on the sofa and closed her eyes happily. I took a comb along my mother's hair and gently combed it from the middle to both sides. Suddenly, I was surprised to find that my mother's bright black hair was mixed with a few harsh silver wires. What's going on here? You know, mom is not yet forty years old! Oh, it's all for our family! The hand holding the comb doesn't work at all. The careful mother obviously noticed and quickly asked, "Baby, what's wrong with you?" I quickly rubbed my eyes with my hand and said, "No, nothing, a hair touched my eyes." Say that finish, and continue to comb.

"ouch!" Mother suddenly let out a cry softly, and the voice was very small, but I still heard it. It turns out that the comb caught some of my mother's hair. I quickly slowed down and combed slowly. Mother closed her eyes and was completely immersed in this extremely warm atmosphere. As time went by, I stretched myself and just wanted to say, "All right!" "I couldn't bear to stop when I saw my mother's comfortable and satisfied expression, so I leaned over and combed it gently. ...

Sheep have the grace of kneeling and nursing, and crows have the meaning of feeding back. When affection, the sweetest bond in the world, gradually becomes a luxury, I call from the bottom of my heart: filial piety can't wait, even if it is a foot wash, a warm word and a comb.

I am always happy to comb my mother's hair.

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Sometimes, a word, a smiling face and an action can suddenly make an article colorful. This article only tells a scene of combing hair, but because of personal experience and real feelings, ordinary events have become dazzling. The success of this composition lies in the description of details, such as the scene of "I" helping my mother comb her hair. Through the two actions of "leaning" and "closing", her happiness suddenly jumped to the page. Another example is the details of "rubbing my eyes with my hands" when "I" found my mother's white hair, showing the complex psychology that "I" was moved but wanted to hide. However, the candidate did not stop there, but continued to move forward. At the same time, he "bent down and combed gently" and sent out such affection as "the sheep has the grace to kneel, and the crow has the meaning of feeding back". In this way, even the smallest thing will have the brilliance of thought and emotion.

I am very happy in my heart.

A candidate in Shanghai

Grandpa is an old Chinese doctor, and his family is always filled with all kinds of Chinese medicines. I always like to sit on a stool and watch my grandfather quietly grinding medicine and making soup. My heart was drunk when the wisps of medicine gradually filled the whole room.

When I was a child, I used to play in grandpa's drugstore. Tall and sturdy counters, dark brown paint and yellow and outdated labels are all the "scenery" of pharmacies. A small scale and a pair of skillful hands shuttle between heavy medicine cabinets, which is probably grandpa's daily work. The corners of his mouth rose slightly, probably wondering if someone had picked these herbs gently in the distant mountains and dried them to taste. He often puts one or two pieces of licorice into my mouth like a magician, and the sweet taste lingers on my tongue, as if life is full of joy.

I spent my childhood drinking several bowls of brown medicine soup. Grandpa's rickety back, the gas coming out of the medicine jar and the blue flame licking the bottom of the medicine jar are all frozen in the fragments of time. At that time, grandpa always held a white porcelain bowl and two pieces of rock sugar in his hand and handed it to me with a smile, saying, "Good medicine tastes bitter and is good for the disease. Be good, just drink it." But I often knock over the medicine bowl willfully, which makes grandpa very worried.

On my deathbed, I can only kill time by reading and drawing, so I know many beautiful names from the old Chinese herbal medicine books at home, including Angelica dahurica, Pinellia ternata, Aster, indigo naturalis ... Grandpa took pains to tell me their efficacy. I often think: they must have been gentle and beautiful women in previous lives, and then they became these herbs to give patients the greatest comfort, otherwise how could they have such a beautiful name. The poor character of Sister Lin in A Dream of Red Mansions is even more touching because of the fragrance of medicine. Drinking aromatherapy in summer and rock candy bird's nest in winter ... Xiaoxiang Pavilion in the secret room looks very different.

When I grew up, I went to the countryside with my grandfather to collect herbs. It was sunny or rainy in Mao Mao all the way. Grandpa was carrying a basket, rubbing herbs and smelling them carefully. On the way back, I still can't forget the cheerful spirit of those pharmacy owners, big and small, when they saw grandpa. This medicinal fragrance, like a unique melody, is scattered in every corner of the city and countryside, bringing me happiness and health.

The bitter medicinal fragrance has already become the most mellow aftertaste and fragrance in my heart. It is accompanied by grandpa's love, meticulous and soft, soaking my life. Now that I think about it, my heart is as good as before!

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Like this masterpiece, I'm afraid there is only one candidate in Shanghai who can focus on Chinese medicine. The reason why candidates can come easily is entirely because of their unique experience and knowledge. It is difficult to write this excellent examination room without my grandfather, unusual contact with Chinese medicine and deep feelings for Chinese medicine. Good material and good cutting angle. Candidates don't like Chinese medicine since childhood, which leads to grandpa's poor care for himself; Then, in the plot of reading a medicine book during my illness, I expounded my understanding of Chinese medicine, especially the narrative about sister Lin, which came from the name of Chinese medicine and added a lot of details and cultural charm to the article. Finally, on the way back from collecting medicine, others will admire grandpa. The content of the article is rich and colorful, and the emotion is promoted step by step, so that the happy and beautiful feelings of the characters are truly natural and beautiful.

I am very happy in my heart.

A candidate in Shanghai

She finally came out of the exercise, soft as a deflated ball. Gently rubbing your sore and tired eyes and gently holding your dull forehead, I can't help but sigh gently ... With the approach of the senior high school entrance examination, the requirements for teachers are becoming more and more strict. Gradually, she was a little overwhelmed and unable to cope. In meditation, she couldn't help looking out of the small window.

Outside the window, an idyllic beauty immediately caught her eye. The green shoots, the cauliflower in bud, and the newly sprouted saplings ... all these deeply pierced her heart and her spirit immediately cheered up. She hummed softly, faintly, the poem "Green, Willow and Yellow Half-jagged" written by Juyuan Yang in the Tang Dynasty. What a wonderful poem, like a sweet and clear mountain spring, instantly moistened her heart and soothed her boredom and burnout. She stared at this beautiful spring scenery, deeply and stupidly immersed in it.

For a long time, she opened a window. In an instant, a fresh air came to my face, refreshing. She took a deep breath of this spring and got carried away. "What a wonderful world outside!" She sings. At this moment, all the complaints, troubles and worries have vanished. The boundless world outside the window propped up her narrow spiritual space and broke the rules she set for herself. She only felt that for a moment, she was as light as a swan and seemed to fly. She leaned out and sang loudly, and the birds chirped and danced with her cheerful melody. Her heart is full of joy and excitement. At this moment, she feels like a boat that has unloaded its burden and set sail for a long voyage, full of energy, passion and hope.

"Oh," she sighed, a sigh of infinite satisfaction. When she blinked her big black eyes and stared out of the window, two strange expressions appeared in her eyes. Then she seemed to be muttering to herself and pouring out her thoughts: "Let go, get out of yourself, the world outside the window is wonderful! Don't tie yourself up and go out-"

She tossed her head casually and shrugged her shoulders again. Outside the window, the sun is shining, birds are singing and flowers are fragrant; In the fields, green waves are undulating and full of vitality. Everything is so full of energy. At that moment, her heart was full of joy and warmth.

Oh, the girl sitting in front of the window is none other than this girl!

short review

It tells the same story, but the candidates in this paper use a lot of pen and ink to render their anguish. This kind of thinking method of reverse cut-in not only has the effect of brilliant writing, but also makes ordinary content have new ideas. Different from other articles, this paper has a gradual process of lively psychological display. In order to write this emotional change naturally and truly, candidates obviously spent some time thinking. When the hero first met the scene outside the window, the article said, "It soothed the boredom and burnout in my heart"; When intoxicated with it, the article said that "the body is as light as a swallow, as if to fly"; Finally, when she shook her head freely, the feeling of warmth and joy was beyond words. Because of its strong bedding, the expression of emotion also appears real and natural. More subtly, the examinee's pen turned around at the end and fell on himself, which was really wonderful.