Although it is not excellent at all, the reason why I give this composition an excellent grade is that it has the quality of "speaking from the heart". In the composition, some students write about other people's sufferings, sorrows, strengths and misfortunes, but they keep themselves out of the way and make themselves a spectator. Express your true feelings in simple words: compassion and strength are all in it, so that we can see not only the ruins, but the sad and unyielding spirit on the ruins. Writing ability is a kind of ability to express emotions, and the ability to express emotions is innate, so your writing ability is born-just, you sometimes ignore the grasp and excavation of this natural ability. Please write your composition with "your own feelings" as the center, so that you can write your composition.