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composition instruction and demonstration on the topic of "I"

Xu Jingde

instruction

Writing on the topic of "I" is the best, because it's too familiar, too well understood, and who can know himself better than himself? However, not many people really write this composition well. What is the reason? But they don't really understand the two most basic and important questions "what can be written" and "how can be written". If you don't know what you can write, you can't find the best material that suits you; If you don't know how to write, you can't find the form and method that suits you best. Without these two articles, what can I say about writing a good composition?

what can I write in a composition with "I" as the topic?

You can write a brief introduction about yourself, and make a comprehensive introduction about yourself, including name, gender, age, family, school, class, hobbies, personality, favorite motto ... Of course, don't forget some short and typical examples in the introduction.

You can only write about one outstanding aspect of yourself, I am competitive, I love reading books, I love playing basketball, I am helpful, I am stingy, I am timid, I am lazy ...

You can write about me in the past, I can write about me now, I can also show my wishes and dreams, and I can write about me twenty years later and me in the future.

you can write the real me or the unreal me.

don't think that I can only be me. I can also be "you" or "he (she)". Rao Yunfei took me as "you", wrote an article "Rao Yunfei, I tell you", and shouted his name and scolded himself; Lai Xiaodan thought of herself as "her" and wrote an article "Smelly Friend", listing many shortcomings of "her". At the end of the composition, she said: "I have to admit that my" smelly friend "is not others, she is another me in my heart, and I can't get rid of her. However, I will not stop, I will find a way to cure her. " Huang Nina and Wang Min are also experts in writing themselves with "she". They have written "There is a pistachio in my class" and "Cher". The "pistachio" and "Cher" in the composition are actually themselves.

don't think I can only be myself, I can also be a group, a class, a school, a nation ...

don't think I can only be a person, I can also be an animal, a cat, a dog, a tiger, a lion ... I can be a plant, grass, leaves, flowers and fruits ... I can be a fairy, and I can be a god.

Look, what a vast world it is to write! In such a vast world, can you not find good materials suitable for your composition?

How to write a composition is also a very broad world.

When writing a composition, you can write a narrative to express yourself vividly; You can write a letter and tell yourself affectionately; You can record a true self in the form of a diary; You can also write plays, fables, fairy tales, science fiction, new stories, and serial stories to show yourself heartily; You can write expository articles and introduce yourself from all aspects ...

The language of the composition can be plain, gorgeous, humorous, funny and not rigid.

each writing method has its own length. According to each person's reality, each person is good at choosing. The success of the composition is waiting for you!

Example 1

I am forgetful

Mao Jieli

I am a forgetful girl. I often forget this and that. My mother used "Don't forget me" to remind me to be careful and not to forget myself one day.

once, we went to physical education class and were all sweaty. I'm going to take a bath after studying at night, looking around, and the evening study is finally over. I rushed out of the classroom like an arrow off the string. I ran to the dormitory to open the door, but the key couldn't be inserted. I was surprised. I looked up and the code on the door was wrong. God, I ran to someone else's door to unlock it! Turned to his bedroom, opened the door, and ran to the bathroom with a bucket. I turned on the water. Oh, no, I didn't take the water bottle. Turned and ran back to the dormitory, took the water bottle and made the water. I took it into the bathroom and looked down. Oh, no, I forgot to wear slippers! I quickly put on slippers and shoes and came to the bathroom. I was so tired that I was panting. Adjust the water after breathing slowly. It's time to take a shower. Look into the bucket. Oh, no towel! Alas! There's not much time to take a shower. What should I do when the light-off bell rings later? I had to fly to get it again. I brought the towel, thinking, great, everything is ready, take the time to take a shower! Thinking of this, I felt relieved. At this moment, my friend borrowed my soap. Oh, no, it's happening again. Where is the soap? I forgot to bring it! Alas, the time is almost up, and it's too late to get it again, so I have to borrow it from others humbly. Alas! I am forgetful!

once, we took a home leave. As soon as class was over, I came to the dormitory and hurriedly packed my things. Just about to leave, my friend stopped me and said, "How can you do your homework when you go home without a pen?" As soon as I saw it, I really forgot to take the pen. I took the pen, thanked my friends, and left in a hurry.

do your homework after you go home. Let's see, let's do Chinese first. Open the bag. Hey, why aren't there any Chinese books? Forget it, do English! I took out my English book and English book. I was just about to do it. Oh, my God! Why did you take the exercise book into a notebook? Alas! Forget it, forget it, do math! Take out the math homework book and have a look. Oh, no, I took a used-up book. Alas!

how can I forget things?

a little

The composition is about one aspect of oneself-forgetting things. Taking a bath at school and doing homework at home are concrete and vivid. After reading the composition, this forgetful girl seems to be standing in front of us.

Example 2

Biography from the Silent

Chen Ludan

My last & is Chen, and my classmates call me & uot; Chenpi duck & uot; , so ugly! That's the piece &; uot; You & fool & uot; Wang Kehong gave it to me! Very annoying. Fortunately, he "flew" to another school early, otherwise, he would not be content if he didn't make me angry to death. Haha, God helps me! Alas! See where I was? By the way, it's time to say age. I'm 14 years old, and I was born in. Tell me, am I a bit careless?

My home is on a rectangular piece of mud in Chenjia Village, Guanyin Town, pengshan county, Sichuan Province, China, Asia, on that round flat earth. My father was only 3.5 kg when he was born, but when I came to the ground, he weighed 8 kg, but I don't know why, but now he is very thin. Neighbors, some people call me&; uot; Fat man & uot; Others call me&; uot; Thin man & uot; , make the uninformed people dizzy. Don't let them shout &; uot; Fat man & uot; Or & uot; Thin man & uot; , and they said I&; uot; Crooked & uot; Very well. It makes my heart attack angry.

my hobby is playing with mud. Hold the mud into all kinds of things, people, rabbits ... Once, I played with my friends and turned myself into a mud man. My mother came to drag me home, and I still cried and cried.

I'm a little fond of embroidery. On a whim, I tore my dad's cloth one piece in the east and one piece in the west, and embroidered it in a decent way. My dad said me, and I'll add another sentence:&; uot; This is called creativity, the latest trend, will you appreciate it? You used to be a tailor. & uot; My dad was neither angry nor laughing. Hey, tell you what: I want to be a fashion designer when I grow up. If you need any help in this regard, just come to me. I'll do my best.

alas, talk about shortcomings? My weakness is that I am afraid of those naked reptiles. What animal is it? Keep it a secret for the time being, lest you go and get some to scare me. However, you don't have the courage.

alas! Time is limited, so I won't write any more. Besides, my hands are soft. In the future, I will come back to talk to you about serial communication when I have time. Good Bye!

Dial 2

Example 3

What am I

Zhang Yuxiao

"Hoo-hoo-hoo" I woke up, opened my hazy eyes, stretched myself and yawned for a long time. I wanted to go out for a walk, but I couldn't stand up. Oh, I remember, I am a pig. I landed on all fours, swaying my fat body and pacing to the door of the pigsty. The door was closed and I couldn't get out. I hit the door hard, and my head hurts. I'm tired of it. I screamed and attracted my master. The owner is also obese. When she walks, her whole body seems to fall off. She walked to the pigsty and saw that the trough was empty. She thought I was hungry. In fact, I didn't eat anything today.' That was eaten by those pigs who were still asleep and fatter than me.

The owner took a huge ladle (about the size of a pig's head) outside the pigsty, stretched the handle of the ladle, filled the trough and left. I walked to the trough and looked at the pile of sticky and sour pig food, which was delicious for pigs. I don't want to eat. I hate eating, but I have to eat because my flat stomach won't allow me to resist. My two big nostrils took a deep breath, purred, and ate slowly, perhaps because they were eating too loudly, perhaps because the food was too fragrant. Those pigs who seemed to never wake up rushed to the trough in three seconds, and their fat twisted forward, so I was forced to quit, watching them eat so greedily, and their mouths clicked loudly. I think a pig is a pig, at least I used to be a man. As for why I am a pig now, I don't know, because pigs don't have brains.

a month later, the owner came to pick pigs with a stout butcher. Pigs scurried around the circle in horror, and the mournful howling made my ears tingle. A pig that usually eats the most was dragged out, and then two, three-six were dragged out, leaving only me and a thin pig. I know they didn't choose me because I was too thin. I'm glad. People die for money, pigs die for food. This is the fate of pigs.

I woke up. I stretched myself and yawned for a long time. I wanted to go out for a walk. I stood up and walked out of the door. Oh! I remember, I'm alone. As for why I used to be a pig, I don't know, because I'm too lazy to use my brain.

alas! What am I? Pigs? People?

(selected from Meishan Daily)

It's a very happy thing to "set up a serial" during leisure time. In the activities of "putting on a serial", we teenagers are often listeners. Why not put on a "serial" created by ourselves? This composition is a "serial" created by Zhang Yuxiao himself. With his familiarity with pigs and the life of raising pigs, he pinned his criticism of lazy habits on his "serial". People can't be too lazy. If people are too lazy, they are no different from pigs. This is what Zhang Yuxiao said to himself, and also to his peers who are too lazy to use their brains. If you say this directly, I'm afraid not many people like to hear it, but how can it be written into such a story?

We also have our own familiar life and our own thoughts, so why not "show off" by "serial"?