1, with full passion, described ... 2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.

3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it is very kind to read.

5 ... Tell us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is memorable.

6. The narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

7. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene and the scene is naturally integrated.

8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.

9. The article is lyrical while narrating.

10, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.

1 1, the author observes carefully, and the narrative is orderly.

12, the use of some subtle words, virtually added a lot of interest to the article.

13, the article is elegant, beautiful, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.

14, the article imagination is reasonable.

15, through vivid and vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.

2. The comments on primary school students' composition correction are short and selected.

1, the article has clear clues, prominent themes, and closely revolves around ... 2. The detailed description is quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.

3. Elaborate and delicate description of the characters' language, manner and movements is a major feature of this paper.

4, the description is exquisite, the life is strong, and the words and sentences are accurate and vivid.

5. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.

6. The stories are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.

7. The article comes from life, so although the language is not so beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.

8. The article makes ... detailed.

9. The language is lively and interesting.

10, a large number of oral English used in life, making the article more natural and friendly.

3. Selected and brief comments on primary school students' composition correction.

1) The article is vivid and sincere, especially? The article on the right to use is very infectious and thought-provoking. 2) The article is well-founded, convincing, highlighting the personality of the characters, the context is natural, the organization is clear, the beginning and the end are coordinated, and the topic is pointed at the end, highlighting the central idea.

3) "Give up your seat" is a very common thing, but your composition is refreshing. You not only write things, but also write down the complicated inner world before and after giving up your seat concretely and truly, with distinct levels, vivid sentences, natural plots and touching charm. In addition, the social problems you raised are thought-provoking.

4) Lou Qianbei, you are amazing! Reading your composition and savoring the good words and sentences, the teacher can't believe that you wrote Lou Qianbei at a young age. The teacher is proud of you. I hope you will keep working hard and paint a colorful life and a colorful world with your pen!

5) What an imaginative child you are! Write the beautiful spring scenery in a poetic way, and the sentences are very beautiful. You must have accumulated a wealth of vocabulary and observed many scenery. I hope you can be a conscientious person and write more beautiful articles.

6) Your composition is excellent, not only describing the appearance of the chicken, but also describing the eating movements, noises and quarrels of the chicken. It can be seen that you are good at observing and working hard at ordinary times! Strive to write a better composition

7) Fan Yuanyuan, you are a man of heart in life and love to observe things around you; You are also a small book fan and pay attention to accumulating good words and sentences. Therefore, the biological corner of the class is vividly displayed in front of readers in your pen. The teacher believes that with your efforts, you will soon become a writer.

8) Your article comes from life, which is higher than life. It is vivid, tortuous and bumpy, but it has a bright future. The success focuses on describing the process of planting melons and extracting wonderful details. The most successful secret of the tortuous article is that you wrote your own personal experience.

9) When reading your article, the talented teacher will be excited with your excitement and laugh with your laughter. Yes, the teacher has made sarcastic remarks, but he also has a frank and self-blaming mind. Such an excellent work will always inspire me to be a teacher that students love. I sincerely hope to be your mentor and your best friend.

10) Your imagination is so strange, bold and rich that the teacher is surprised by your fairy tale. If you imagine it magically, it can be described as "original" and vivid, which makes people feel fresh and interesting. The cute little fox "Hat and Horn", the joys and sorrows you give it, is simply amazing. The teacher applauds you and believes that you are not far from the writer's dream.

1 1) You're such a book fan that you forget the time when you walk into the sea of books. But that's why your diary is so vivid and detailed. The teacher is really happy for you. Keep it up and you'll be better.

12) it's really nice to see your diary grow up with you. It's all due to your careful observation, constant practice and extensive reading that you have this real and vivid article today, and even the teacher's heart has been caught by you. I believe that if you apply this heart to art, that painting can also attract others.

13) Tell things clearly, use verbs correctly, use metaphors appropriately, and make vivid suggestions, from which you can get education.

14) Simple and natural childlike innocence is embodied in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.

15) there are three main advantages of this article: can this article closely follow the requirements of the topic and write it completely? The process is rigorous in structure, focused, simple, concise and fluent in language, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate.

16) has a simple and natural beginning, clear structure and true psychological description, which shows the author's good language control ability.

17) The characteristics of this essay can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.

4. Selected and brief comments on primary school students' composition correction.

1, this paper organizes materials around the center of ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 2. This article may not be particularly attractive in the storyline, but it is still a successful work. First, it depicts the image of the character well, and second, it is vivid and rich in language and rich in life, which plays a good role in expressing ideas.

3. This paper embodies the characteristics of ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

4. The conception of the work is ingenious, and the writing is concise and smooth. The imagination is bold and creative, and the article is novel and attractive to read.

5. The theme is concise, concentrated, profound, powerful and shocking.

6. The article is realistic, stereoscopic, readable and interesting. With keen social insight, fairy tales reflect the dark side of reality, and vivid language, it can be said that it is profound.

7. The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.

8. The full-text narrative is concentrated, with simple and fluent language and sincere and touching feelings.

9. The full text is simple in language and natural in structure. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.

10, three major successes of this article: first, pay attention to selecting the most beautiful fragments to write, second, use accurate words, and third, the structure of the article is compact.

1 1, telling things clearly, using verbs correctly, using metaphors appropriately and vividly. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading.

12, this article expresses sincere praise for a beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing.

13, through enriching the characters' language and actions, set off the characters' ideological quality. The imagination of the article is reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.

14, the full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.

5. Selected and brief comments on primary school students' composition correction.

1, the article has clear clues and prominent themes, and it is carried out closely around. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read, and can't bear to put it down. 2. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are also detailed, authentic, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete, and the writing style is smooth.

3. A series of verbs that express the actions of characters are used accurately and well.

4. The language is simple, the center is clear, the conception is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.

5. The article takes care of the head and tail, with clear center and complete structure.

6. With rich imagination and colorful language, the article presents … to readers.

7. The full text is hearty and full of joy and expectation, which is sincere and touching. It was an extraordinary start.

8. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the echo of the beginning and the end is clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear, the language is simple and easy to understand.

9. This article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.

10, can write the inner activities of the characters very vividly, which is really commendable and left a deep impression on people.

1 1, the full text is remarkable, which adds some literary interest to the article.