Appreciation: using the appearance and language description of characters. Set off the femininity of Kunming rainy season with the charming modality of the flower girl, and express the author's nostalgia and love for Kunming.
2. The bayberry in Kunming is very big, as big as a table tennis ball, and its color is black, red and black, which is called' charcoal coal'. That's a good name. It's like a ball of hot coals! Not sour at all! I have eaten Yangmei from Dongting Mountain in Suzhou and Yangmei from Jinggangshan. It seems that they are not as good as Huotan Plum from Kunming.
Appreciation: The author introduces the color, shape and taste of Myrica rubra in detail. Among them, the rhetorical device of metaphor is used to compare Yangmei to "burning fiery coals", vividly writing the black and red color of Yangmei, and the imagination is novel and ingenious, which is unforgettable.
The author also compares "Myrica rubra in Dongting Mountain, Suzhou, Myrica rubra in Jinggangshan" with "Huotan Coal" in Kunming, showing the uniqueness of Myrica rubra in Kunming, expressing his love for Myrica rubra, and revealing his nostalgia for Kunming between the lines.
3, a woody, climbing on the shelf, covering the yard tightly.
Appreciation: Verbs such as "Climb" and "Cover" personify Radix Aucklandiae, endow Radix Aucklandiae with human actions, vividly show the luxuriance of Radix Aucklandiae, and express the author's admiration.
4. The rainy season in Kunming is bright and full, which makes people emotional.
Appreciation: "Bright" and "Plump" respectively describe the degree of abundant light and rainfall in rainy season in Kunming, suggesting that everything will flourish under the rain, laying the groundwork for the following writing: cactus, fungus, fruit and osmanthus fragrans. It shows the author's love for the rainy season in Kunming.
5, and spring comes green again to trees and grasses, Meng Xia has long vegetation.
Appreciation: The author uses Du Fu's Spring Hope and Tao Yuanming's Reading &; lt； Shan Hai Jing & gt； The poem in "Kunming" describes the characteristics of heavy rainfall in rainy season, highlights the lush vegetation in rainy season in Kunming, and makes the article beautiful, elegant and full of charm, adding artistic charm.
2. Wang Zengqi's rain in Kunming > Appreciating Rain in Kunming shows the author's haunting Kunming complex, which makes the writer come to Kunming several times to find the footprints left by his youth when he is near ancient times.
The article describes the author's experience and feelings about the rainy season during his stay in Kunming. At the beginning of the article, the characteristics of Kunming rain are written in a fresh, natural and unconventional style, that is, bright, full, emotional, stopping but not monotonous. Later, the author did not write about rain directly, but wrote some scenery in the rain, such as fungus, bayberry and osmanthus fragrans.
These scenery set off the rain in Kunming, making the rain in Kunming more three-dimensional and vivid in front of readers. The language of the article is simple, the words are flowing, poetic and interesting, and it is a masterpiece.
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In 20 17, this article was selected as the new Chinese textbook of People's Education Society, and Weidong was invited to record this article. Two principles of detail accumulation: First, "experience with heart".
Second, "intentional memory." The distinctive features of Wang Zengqi's narrative text are inseparable from his superior detail memory.
Kunming has a mild climate, no scorching heat in summer, no severe cold in winter, spring-like seasons and pleasant climate. The annual precipitation is 1035mm, which has typical temperate climate characteristics. The urban temperature is between 0℃ and 29℃, and the annual temperature difference is the smallest in China. Such climate characteristics are rare in the world, with flowers blooming all year round and evergreen vegetation. It is a famous "Spring City" and "Flower City".
3. Appreciation of Wang Zengqi's Rain Sentence in Kunming "People in Kunming often hang a cactus at the door to ward off evil spirits. The cactus hangs upside down and can still survive and bloom.
Here we can see the tenacious life of cactus and the moist air in rainy season in Kunming. In the rainy season, there are qingtou mushroom and boletus, which are extremely delicious. "
I miss the rain in Kunming. I didn't know there was a rainy season.
The "rainy season" didn't have a concrete feeling until I arrived in Kunming. I don't remember how long the rainy season in Kunming is, from a few months to a few months, it seems quite long.
But it's not boring. Because it's stop and stop, stop and stop, not continuous, and it's endless.
And it's not boring. I think the air pressure in Kunming in rainy season is not low, and people are very comfortable.
The rainy season in Kunming is bright, full and emotional. And spring comes green again to trees and grasses and Meng Xia have long vegetation.
The rainy season in Kunming is thick green. The water in the branches and leaves of plants and trees is saturated, showing excessive and exaggerated exuberance.
That painting of mine is realistic. I did see a cactus hanging upside down and still blooming.
In the old days, many things were used to ward off evil spirits in Kunming: a small mirror with gossip painted around it, and a cactus below it-pierced a hole in the cactus, pierced it with hemp thread and hung it on a nail. There are many cactuses in Kunming, and they are extremely fat.
Some people planted a circle of cactus around the vegetable garden instead of the fence. -After planting cactus, pigs and sheep will not dare to eat in the garden.
Cactus has thorns, but pigs and sheep are afraid of pricking. There are a lot of bacteria in Kunming.
Visiting the vegetable market in rainy season, you can see all kinds of bacteria at any time. The most and cheapest is boletus.
When the boletus comes down, every restaurant sells fried boletus, and even there can be a bowl on the table of The National SouthWest Associated University canteen. Boletus is as smooth, tender, fresh, fragrant and delicious as beef liver.
Stir-fried boletus must put more garlic, otherwise it will easily make people faint. Penicillium is slightly more expensive than boletus.
This kind of mushroom is still light green when fried, and its style is higher than that of boletus. The king of bacteria is chicken and soil, and its taste is fresh and strong, which is incomparable.
Chicken soil is a rare delicacy, but it is not really expensive. The price of a plate of braised chicken is comparable to that of a bowl of braised chicken, because it is not rare in Yunnan.
There is a joke: someone took a train from Kunming to Chenggong, and saw a chicken on the ground in the car. He jumped down and picked up the chicken soil, and he was able to climb the train in a hurry. This joke is intended to show that the train from Kunming to Chenggong is slow, but it also shows that chicken soil can be seen everywhere.
There is a kind of fungus, which is ugly in eating, called Ganba fungus. At first glance, it's really doubtful: can you eat this kind of thing? ! The color is dark brown with green, a bit like a pile of semi-dry cow dung or a trampled hornet's nest.
There are still many grass stems, loose hair and a mess! However, if you work hard, you can choose the loose hairs of the grass stems, tear them into shreds as thick as crab legs, and fry them with green peppers. The entrance will make you stunned: Is this thing so delicious? ! There is also a kind of fungus, which is ugly, called chanterelle. They are all about the same size, as big as a silver circle, smooth and round, and light yellow in color, just like chicken oil.
This kind of fungus can only be used for color matching when cooking, and it has no taste. The fruit of rainy season is Myrica rubra.
Myrica rubra sellers are all Miao girls, wearing a flowery hat and shoes embroidered with flowers, sitting in a corner of someone's step stone, calling out from time to time: "Sell Myrica rubra-",with a Jiao Jiao voice. Their voices softened the air in Kunming during the rainy season.
Yangmei in Kunming is very big, as big as a ping-pong, and its color is black, red and black. It is called "Huotan Mei". That's a good name. It's like a ball of hot coals! Not sour at all! I have eaten Myrica rubra in Dongting Mountain in Suzhou and Myrica rubra in Jinggangshan. It seems that they are not as good as the charcoal plum in Kunming. The flower in rainy season is osmanthus fragrans.
Osmanthus fragrans is white orchid, and Beijing is called "Baer Orchid". Yunnan calls this kind of flower Osmanthus fragrans. Perhaps this kind of flower was introduced from Myanmar at first, and the fragrance of the flower is a bit like Osmanthus fragrans. In fact, this has nothing to do with Osmanthus fragrans.
-but then again, it is called Prynne and Baer Orchid elsewhere, and it can't get along with orchids, just because it smells like orchids. The Brando I saw in my hometown is one person tall, and the Burmese laurel in Kunming is a big tree! I lived at No.2 Ruoyuan Lane, and there was a big osmanthus tree in the courtyard with dense leaves, which made the surrounding rooms green.
When Burmese osmanthus was in full bloom, the landlord and one of her adopted daughters took a ladder to pick it. Every day, they picked it better and took it to the flower market for sale. She is probably afraid that the tenants will pick her flowers at random and often send some to each family.
Sometimes a seven-inch plate is sent, which is full of Burmese osmanthus! Burmese osmanthus with rain beads makes my heart soft, not pregnant, not homesick. Rain can sometimes cause people a little homesickness.
Li Shangyin's note on a rainy night to a friend in the north is written for many long-time travelers. One day, I went to the lotus pond with Dexi from the new school building of the General Assembly in the morning when it was rainy and I lived less.
After seeing the clear water in the pool and the stone statue of Chen Yuanyuan made by a bhikshuni, it began to rain again. There is a small street and a small hotel near the lotus pond. We went in, asked for a plate of pork head and half a catty of wine, and sat down.
It's raining hard. There are several chickens in the hotel, all with their heads behind their wings, one foot on the ground and standing motionless under the eaves.
There is a big Muxiang flower in the hotel yard. There are many fragrant flowers in Kunming.
Some small rivers are surrounded by woody plants. But it is rare to see such a large woody root.
A woody tree, climbing on the shelf, covered the yard tightly. The dense and finely divided green leaves, countless half-opened white flowers and full-fledged flowers and bones were all soaked by the rain.
We couldn't leave, so we sat in the afternoon. Forty years later, I still can't forget the feeling of that day, and I wrote a poem: there are few pedestrians outside the lotus pond, the moss marks in the wild shop are one inch deep, a glass of wine is after noon, and the fragrant flowers are wet and rainy.
I miss the rain in Kunming.
4. Wang Zengqi's rain in Kunming > Appreciation Ning Kun asked me to draw him a picture with the characteristics of Kunming.
I thought about it for some time and drew a picture: a thick green cactus hung upside down in the upper right corner, with a golden flower at the end; At the bottom left, there are some blue mushrooms and boletus. The following lines were inscribed: "People in Kunming often hang a cactus at the door to ward off evil spirits. The cactus hangs upside down and can still survive and bloom.
Here we can see the tenacious life of cactus and the moist air in rainy season in Kunming. In the rainy season, there are qingtou mushroom and boletus, which are extremely delicious. "
I miss the rain in Kunming. I didn't know there was a rainy season.
The "rainy season" didn't have a concrete feeling until I arrived in Kunming. I don't remember how long the rainy season in Kunming is, from a few months to a few months, it seems quite long.
But it's not boring. Because it's stop and stop, stop and stop, not continuous, and it's endless.
And it's not boring. I think the air pressure in Kunming in rainy season is not low, and people are very comfortable.
The rainy season in Kunming is bright, full and emotional. And spring comes green again to trees and grasses and Meng Xia have long vegetation.
The rainy season in Kunming is thick green. The water in the branches and leaves of plants and trees is saturated, showing excessive and exaggerated exuberance.
That painting of mine is realistic. I did see a cactus hanging upside down and still blooming.
In the old days, many things were used to ward off evil spirits in Kunming: a small mirror with gossip painted around it, and a cactus below it-pierced a hole in the cactus, pierced it with hemp thread and hung it on a nail. There are many cactuses in Kunming, and they are extremely fat.
Some people planted a circle of cactus around the vegetable garden instead of the fence. -After planting cactus, pigs and sheep will not dare to eat in the garden.
Cactus has thorns, but pigs and sheep are afraid of pricking. There are a lot of bacteria in Kunming.
Visiting the vegetable market in rainy season, you can see all kinds of bacteria at any time. The most and cheapest is boletus.
When the boletus comes down, every restaurant sells fried boletus, and even there can be a bowl on the table of The National SouthWest Associated University canteen. Boletus is as smooth, tender, fresh, fragrant and delicious as beef liver.
Stir-fried boletus must put more garlic, otherwise it will easily make people faint. Penicillium is slightly more expensive than boletus.
This kind of mushroom is still light green when fried, and its style is higher than that of boletus. The king of bacteria is chicken and soil, and its taste is fresh and strong, which is incomparable.
Chicken soil is a rare delicacy, but it is not really expensive. The price of a plate of braised chicken is comparable to that of a bowl of braised chicken, because it is not rare in Yunnan.
There is a joke: someone took a train from Kunming to Chenggong, and saw a chicken on the ground in the car. He jumped down and picked up the chicken soil, and he was able to climb the train in a hurry. This joke is intended to show that the train from Kunming to Chenggong is slow, but it also shows that chicken soil can be seen everywhere.
There is a kind of fungus, which is ugly in eating, called Ganba fungus. At first glance, it's really doubtful: can you eat this kind of thing? ! The color is dark brown with green, a bit like a pile of semi-dry cow dung or a trampled hornet's nest.
There are still many grass stems, loose hair and a mess! However, if you work hard, you can choose the loose hairs of the grass stems, tear them into shreds as thick as crab legs, and fry them with green peppers. The entrance will make you stunned: Is this thing so delicious? ! There is also a kind of fungus, which is ugly, called chanterelle. They are all about the same size, as big as a silver circle, smooth and round, and light yellow in color, just like chicken oil.
This kind of fungus can only be used for color matching when cooking, and it has no taste. The fruit of rainy season is Myrica rubra.
Myrica rubra sellers are all Miao girls, wearing a flowery hat and shoes embroidered with flowers, sitting in a corner of someone's step stone, calling out from time to time: "Sell Myrica rubra-",with a Jiao Jiao voice. Their voices softened the air in Kunming during the rainy season.
Yangmei in Kunming is very big, as big as a ping-pong, and its color is black, red and black. It is called "Huotan Mei". That's a good name. It's like a ball of hot coals! Not sour at all! I have eaten Yangmei from Dongting Mountain in Suzhou and Yangmei from Jinggangshan, and it seems that they are not as good as Huotan Plum from Kunming.
The flower in rainy season is osmanthus fragrans. Osmanthus fragrans is white orchid, and Beijing is called "Baer Orchid" (this name is really unpleasant).
Yunnan calls this kind of flower Osmanthus fragrans. Perhaps this kind of flower was introduced from Myanmar at first, and the fragrance of the flower is a bit like Osmanthus fragrans. In fact, this has nothing to do with Osmanthus fragrans. -but then again, it is called Prynne and Baer Orchid elsewhere, and it can't get along with orchids, just because it smells like orchids.
The Brando I saw in my hometown is one person tall, and the Burmese laurel in Kunming is a big tree! I lived at No.2 Ruoyuan Lane, and there was a big osmanthus tree in the courtyard with dense leaves, which made the surrounding rooms green. When Burma and Guangxi were in full bloom, the landlord (a widow in her fifties) and one of her adopted daughters took a ladder to pick them. Every day, they picked better ones and took them to the flower market for sale.
She is probably afraid that the tenants will pick her flowers at random and often send some to each family. Sometimes a seven-inch plate is sent, which is full of Burmese osmanthus! Burmese osmanthus with rain beads makes my heart soft, not pregnant, not homesick.
Rain can sometimes cause people a little homesickness. Li Shangyin's note on a rainy night to a friend in the north is written for many long-time travelers.
One day, I went to the lotus pond with Dexi from the new school building of the General Assembly in the morning when it was rainy and I lived less. After seeing the clear water in the pool and the stone statue of Chen Yuanyuan (it is said that Chen Yuanyuan became a monk after Wu Sangui went to Yunnan and died in the lotus pond in his twilight years), it began to rain again.
There is a small street and a small hotel near the lotus pond. We went in and asked for a plate of pig's head meat and half a catty of wine (in a green glazed earthenware cup) and sat down. It's raining hard.
There are several chickens in the hotel, all with their heads behind their wings, one foot on the ground and standing motionless under the eaves. There is a big Muxiang flower in the hotel yard.
There are many fragrant flowers in Kunming. Some small rivers are surrounded by woody plants.
But it is rare to see such a large woody root. A woody tree, climbing on the shelf, covered the yard tightly.
The dense and finely divided green leaves, countless half-opened white flowers and full-fledged flowers and bones were all soaked by the rain. We couldn't leave, so we sat in the afternoon.
Forty years later, I still can't forget the feeling of that day. I wrote a poem: There are few pedestrians outside the lotus pond, and the moss marks in the wild shop are one inch deep. A cup of turbid wine is after noon, and the fragrant flowers are wet and rainy.
I miss the rain in Kunming. May 19th, 1984 [Author's Brief Introduction] Wang Zengqi, one of my favorite writers, is really reflected in his works.