Read the following text and write an article as required.

Dedication of Love is a sweet and popular song. What is love? Different people have different answers. Some people say that love is a lubricant, some people say that love is an amino acid, and some people say that love is the honey of life ... Because of love, our heart lake is rippling; Because of love, our life is full of fragrance; Because of love, our studies are thriving; Because of love, our souls shine ...

Please write an article on the topic of "love". The title is self-made, the style is self-selected, and the idea is self-determined, not less than 600 words.

Thinking instruction

Love is an old and young topic. From ancient times to the present, thousands of years of culture and history in China are all about love. At home, you feel the love of your parents; At school, you feel the love of teachers and classmates; Strangers lend you a helping hand, and you feel that society is full of beauty and love. Love is an abstract thing, a feeling, a taste, a spiritual activity based on reality, and an eternal pursuit of mankind.

Faced with such an open topic, we should first fly the wings of imagination, search for our own life, and extract materials from it, and then choose styles according to the materials we have mastered and our own specialties. If you write a narrative, first of all, you should pay attention to the choice of materials. When you choose an event from your personal experience to start a narrative, you can associate other similar events with your life and reading experience, and enrich and perfect your content with the details of other events; Or use the opposite events to contrast and strengthen the expressive force of the article. Secondly, we should pay attention to the arrangement of the structure. You can just write one thing and advance the story according to the plot development; You can also capture some events to express the theme of "love" in the form of fragment combination. Third, we should create a pearl of detail and let it shine in the text. We should be good at collecting, digging, magnifying and expressing details from our daily life. If you write an argumentative essay, you should not only make clear arguments, typical arguments and clear argumentation ideas, but also show a certain literary talent.

Exhibition 1 of excellent works

There is a lie called sex.

□ Liu Zhuojun

Everything, because there is such a lie in this world, its name is sex.

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Since kindergarten, handicraft class is the soil that breeds my inferiority.

After entering middle school, physical education class has become a catalyst for me to feel inferior, because every time I can't complete those simple actions.

One day, the black-faced teacher Ma finally got angry. He shouted angrily, "Stand aside and watch what others do!" " I stood aside and watched my classmates roll easily one after another, like happy little balls, and I was so ashamed that I almost cried.

When I got home, as soon as I saw my father, I immediately threw myself into his arms and cried. "It's all my father's fault, and I passed this shortcoming on to you." As he said this, Dad did a back roll, but he couldn't turn it over. I snorted and was happy.

The next day, my mother accompanied me to school. She said she wanted to talk to Teacher Ma. I'm afraid my mother will blame Mr. Ma. My mother smiled: "I'm not blaming the teacher. I just want to tell him that some of your movements are a little worse than those of other children, but you will catch up slowly and tell him not to worry too much."

From then on, when I met a bad action in physical education class, Teacher Ma always cut me some slack and stopped demanding, which made me secretly happy.

If it weren't for that time, maybe my life would have been as calm as water. That day, I sent my late homework to the office and walked outside the door. I heard Teacher Ma mention my name: "That Liu Zhuojun, don't you know?" She was diagnosed as' cerebral palsy'. " "'cerebral palsy' is not a very serious mental retardation? I think her intelligence is ok. " This is the voice of the Chinese teacher. "She is slight, mainly manifested in the defects of movement, which is what her mother said ..."

All of a sudden, my eyes blurred. No wonder there are so many books about cerebral palsy at home!

An inexplicable force prompted me to rush. I want to stay away from school, from the crowd, and from this world that mocks me. I ran home and shut myself in my room.

Finally, my father knocked down the door. He pulled me up and said, "Listen, Liu Zhuojun, no matter what happens, you can't shut your parents out who love you!" "I am a cerebral palsy patient. Why didn't you tell me that you have lied to me for 15 years, and when do you want to lie to me again?" I screamed at the top of my lungs.

Dad was silent for a while, then took my hand and said, "When you grow up, we should tell you many things. You do have mild cerebral palsy. We won't tell you because we don't want to let the disease leave a shadow in your heart. We just want you to be happy ... And dad will tell you another secret. In fact, dad also has mild cerebral palsy. You may not believe it, but it's true. The reason why Dad tells you this secret now is because Dad wants you to know that people with cerebral palsy can live a wonderful life. "

Yes, my father lived a wonderful life. He was all-powerful in the shopping mall and gave orders to more than 1,000 employees. But I doubt what he said. Maybe it's just a beautiful lie, just to help me find my confidence. My mother saw the doubt in my eyes and said, "If you look closely, you will find that my father walked on tiptoe, so he was very upset." "Yes, I was desperate, just like you are now. Later, I found that when I ignored my own shortcomings, others would not care! " Looking closely, dad really walks on tiptoe. Grandma in the country also called and said that Dad's symptoms were much more serious than mine ...

Like walking in a novel, everything is so tortuous and bizarre that I have to calm down and sort out my chaotic thoughts. I came to the conclusion that day: I will be as successful as my father; In the face of struggle, cerebral palsy is just a paper tiger!

After the baptism of this storm, I suddenly matured a lot. On the road of life, I regained my self-confidence, struggled forward, and then picked up a string of fruits: I was admitted to a key middle school and got many certificates of winning competitions ... My life was wonderful although it was not smooth.

Last summer vacation, I went to my aunt's house. Nothing to chat with my aunt. When I talked about my father's cerebral palsy, she laughed: "Your father has cerebral palsy? Impossible, he was naughty when he was a child! " "Then why does dad always walk a little on tiptoe? That's a symptom of cerebral palsy." "He stood on tiptoe? No way! However, he learned to walk on tiptoe quite well. His appearance is the most ridiculous! " My aunt was immersed in memories of the past, but I was stunned by my aunt's smile ...

I finally realized my parents' good intentions. They pruned the branches of my life tree with lying scissors again and again, so my confidence was able to stretch freely in the sun. I'm going to call my father at once and tell him that I don't have to walk on tiptoe next time I see him ...

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Life is the source of writing, and we advocate that writing should reflect the truth. There is no flowery rhetoric in this article, but I can't restrain my excitement and express my heartfelt wishes in simple language. The author is good at grasping some details and pouring out his heart, going deep into his inner world and receiving the effect that silence speaks louder than sound here. The structure of the article is exquisite, and the full text takes the time of one's own growth as the latitude and the understanding of father's love as the warp to organize the material. The thinking is clear, the level is orderly, and the writing is smooth, like a beautiful stream, shining with touching brilliance everywhere.

Excellent work exhibition 2

Unforgettable parental affection

□ Li Wang

Last summer vacation, my mother asked me to help my father harvest rice. Because the cut rice needs to be bundled and picked to the designated place for threshing, the workload is very heavy, so the rice thresher must be carried to the field, and it is generally necessary for two people to work together to drag the rice thresher in the paddy field. Because the fertile land and barren land should be matched when the fields are divided into households, the rice fields in my family are not connected together. After harvesting rice in one place, the rice thresher must be carried to another place hundreds of meters away.

Staring at the heavy rice thresher that sank in the mud, I said, "Let's carry it by two people."

The father said: "It is dangerous that the two people don't cooperate well when they lift the hurdle or turn. You go ahead, heavy, thin, unable to hold on. You walk in the back with your head in the barrel, which is not good for the road. I'd better recite it by myself. " As he spoke, my father asked me to help him drag the rice thresher to the edge of the ridge and erect it. I saw him crouching down, his back against the bottom plate of the rice thresher, struggling to stand up like a giant snail and walking to another rice field. I saw his thin body under the heavy rice thresher, almost overwhelmed at any time, and my heart welled up with pity and guilt.

After several hours of hard work, two baskets of rice were filled, and we were ready to go home. It's more than two miles from the rice field to the sunguping at home, and the one my father picked is obviously much heavier than mine. He walked quickly in front and repeatedly told me to walk slowly and take a rest when I was tired. After he carried the rice to Shaiguping, he strode back to pick up my burden for fear that I would be tired. I am already hungry, and I feel exhausted after walking behind my father. There is hardly a dry place on my father's body, and he is all wet with sweat. Looking at all this, I deeply feel how hard it is for my father to face the loess and grind his feet under his shoulders.

When I went home, my parents were very ashamed. I repeatedly said that I had worked hard and should not be asked to do this heavy work. When eating, my parents put eggs and meat slices in my bowl, chanting that I should supplement more energy, but they rarely have these in their own bowls. In fact, they are the ones who have been suffering from heavy physical labor for many years, and they need to replenish more energy. My throat tightened in waves, but I didn't let my tears fall.

The love of parents in poor families, like chopped green onion, has a vivid color after a handful of sprinkling, and then a life of clear soup and scanty water, and a pale and simple day. Whenever I think of my parents' love for me, I am full of gratitude.

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Sincere feelings are the first feature of the article. Family love is often like this. There is no deliberate affectation, but only the natural expression of feelings, which is inadvertently reflected in life. In the author's pen, the love of parents has become a ray of light shining on his life.

Excellent selection of materials is the second major feature of the article. It is natural for parents to love their children, and it is virtue for children to honor their parents. Sometimes parents "sow" a lot of hard work and money to "harvest" their children a little filial piety. The author selects examples from different angles, which not only describes the happiness that parents love their children and are willing to give, which is the expression of "nature", but also describes the deep understanding of children's love for their parents, which is the bud of "virtue".

Vivid details are the third feature of this paper. The author makes good use of details to describe and create a life atmosphere, showing the fatherly love and maternal love of poor families and grassroots families incisively and vividly, giving readers a visual impact and a spiritual shock.

Excellent work exhibition 3

Love is colorful.

□ Garlum

On May 12, 2008, the earthquake tore the earth, covered it with black clouds, and death strangled countless lives. But we will never give up!

Look, love is shining and shining, illuminating the hope of life!

You said, love is green. Look, the green armed police soldiers are in action! The Wenchuan earthquake with a magnitude of 8.0 didn't scare you off. You rushed to the ruins and the dangerous area where aftershocks kept coming. You were racing against death, putting life and death at risk, putting people's interests above everything else, and you took a series of fresh lives from death. You use green to interpret the hope of love!

You said, love is white. Look, the white loving angel is in action! Doctor, doctor is on the move! You fight against the clock, you raise the infusion bottle and use your body as a support. The white coat that runs for 24 hours and the concentrated eyes tell us that love is so sacred and white.

You said that love is orange. Look, the orange rescue team is on the move! You go deep into the dangerous ruins to hold up your dying bodies, you take firm steps and shed tired sweat, and you use your wisdom to protect every life and create miracles of life. You show orange love to the fullest!

You said, love is yellow. Look, Chinese children with yellow skin are in action. No matter where you are, it is the disaster area, it is far away, and the color of love is everywhere. Teacher Tan opened his arms like a mother bird guarding her chicks. He protected four students with his life and flew to heaven by himself. Teacher Zhang took off two "wings" and gave them to the students to fly, but he quietly slept; The director of civil affairs who lost loved ones continuously directed the disaster relief and only slept for seven hours in five days. Donation, material donation, charity performance, attention ... The land of China is writing a passionate love song of Chinese children of yellow race.

What color is love?

Love has no color, red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple. When all the colors come together, they merge into endless light, which shines with the sun, moon and human beings, and love illuminates Wenchuan, China and the whole world!

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The article has a clear point of view and ingenious conception. Focusing on the earthquake relief of the people in China after the disaster, the full text selects green, white, orange and yellow to show the performance and great dedication of the PLA, armed police officers, soldiers in white, rescue teams and China people in earthquake relief. The highlight of the article is "Love is red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple. When all the colors come together, they converge into endless light, which shines with the sun, the moon and the human beings, and love illuminates Wenchuan, China and the whole world", following the above-mentioned colors and deepening a layer. The idea that "love is red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple" shows the depth of the author's thought and the ingenuity of his conception, which is really the finishing touch of the article and the sublimation of the theme of the article.

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