There are two little white pigs in my family. They are all white, and their big ears are like two powerful fans, flapping up and down; Long nose, a pair of round nostrils, like two small caves; There is a big mouth hidden under the nose. If you don't look carefully, you won't find a mouth under your nose. There are a pair of unpredictable little eyes and wrinkles on the nose, which really doesn't look good.

When the farm is busy, my mother works in the field and asks me to feed at home. I opened the door of the pigsty and put the prepared food in front of the pigsty. Greedy pigs have sharp noses and the smell has been smelled by them. Before I could pour the pig food into the bowl, they swarmed and spilled a pot full of pig food. Pig food splashed on my face, trouser legs and coat, and I was so angry that I picked up a stick and wanted to hit them. But as soon as they raised the stick, they cried "wow", as if begging for mercy from me. Looking at their poor appearance, I can't bear to let the stick fall again.

The little white pig grew up and showed his true nature-gluttony and lethargy. Whenever their mother feeds them, they gobble up, swallow the dates and keep humming. When I was full, I stood with a chubby belly, scraped the soil under my body with my feet and fell asleep.

Piggy always makes people angry when he comes to my house for the first time. Perhaps because of the unfamiliar environment, they bravely crossed the pigsty and ran out again and again, but the door was blocked so tightly that they could not get out of the second line of defense. After a day or two, they will be honest, find a water nest, arch it with their mouths, and then lie in it, still splashing mud. Of course, the little white pig will also become a little mud pig. No matter what they do in the yard, the family will be grateful as long as they don't run out.

Sometimes, they make people laugh and cry. One morning, my father wanted to build a pigsty, so he drove them both into the yard. As soon as they came out of the pigsty, they played happily in the yard, scaring several hens to fly and scream. Look at them again, regardless of anything, as if they were finally free, and as if they had come to a new world. After a while, they arch wildly in the charcoal pile, making their faces gray, and then arch young trees and make flowers and plants. The whole yard was turned upside down all morning. Maybe they're tired of tossing. At noon, they finally fell asleep in a warm place.

Although my little white pigs are greedy, sleepy and naughty, I still like them very much, because they add endless fun to me. cat

Cats are small animals that people like. They are docile, lively and lovely. They can catch mice and win the favor of their owners.

The newborn kitten, with closed eyes, thin voice and naked body, looks like a crawling meatball.

After the full moon, all the villi grow together. Some collars are white, the limbs are covered with white hair, the back is black and gray, and the tail is gray and black; Some people wear a dark coat from beginning to end, but the soles of their feet are white. People say it is an excellent variety, called "black clouds cover snow"; Some are yellow and tiger-patterned, and people have given it a good name "gold does not change"; There is also a kind of white hair and black hair tail, which is called "dragging a gun in the snow" A full-moon cat can't walk without milk.

Cats eat omnivores and like fish and lean meat best. If you throw it a fruit or vegetable, it will just smell it and walk away.

Cats have thick and soft pads on the soles of their feet, so they walk quietly and silently, and will not scare away mice. There are sharp claws at the end of the toes, which can be extended and retracted at will. This makes it not only run like a fly on the flat ground, but also build houses, climb trees and climb over walls. Rats are forced to lose their souls and rarely escape bad luck.

Cats have teeth as sharp as cones, a rough tongue and many barbs. Once the mouse is caught, the cat's claws scratch and the cat's teeth bite. In an instant, the evil mouse was heartbroken and bloody.

These structural features of the cat give it various advantages in catching mice. As the saying goes, no matter whether it's a white cat or a black cat, catching a mouse is a good cat. Cats that can catch mice don't shout. When it found the trace of the mouse, it immediately fell down and waited patiently for the opportunity to attack. When the mouse approached, it jumped on it with lightning speed and bit the mouse at once.

Cats also have a detector-a beard. Don't underestimate the beautiful beard of a cat. It is very sensitive and generally equals to the maximum length of its bust. So whether the cat can go deep into the cave can be known by measuring the hole with its beard.

Cats also have a unique skill: their bones are soft and they can turn over in midair. Therefore, even if it stumbles in a tall building, it will not die. It always lands on all fours first, shakes its head, shrugs its shoulders, licks its feet and palms, stretches its waist and strolls casually.

Cats are natural enemies of mice, so they have a high ability to catch mice. First of all, because of a pair of special eyes, the pupil can contract or enlarge with the intensity of light. The pupil shrinks into a thin seam under strong light; In the dark, eyes are wide and round, even in the dark, you can see things clearly, and even cunning mice can't escape.

Its ears are very flexible and can turn to the place where the sound comes at will, and even the slightest sound can be recognized in time.

The most pleasing thing is the "child cat" after weaning. They are extremely uneasy and curious. Look, a fluffy ball is rolling towards the kitten. It probably thinks it is a "monster". It suddenly jumped up and hid far away, and the fluffy ball stopped.

The kitten squatted down and stared at it. For a long time, when she saw the thread was silent, she quietly stepped forward and let out a cry of "Meow meow-". The coil is still motionless. At this time, the kitten couldn't bear it any longer, got up the courage to get close to the thread ball, turned several times, and then reached out and touched it carefully. When it understood that there was no danger in the thread ball, it played unscrupulously, sniffing with its nose for a while, and running around the yard with a "victory product" in its mouth. Just as a hen giggles when she lays an egg, a cat will make a whoop when it catches a mouse, indicating happiness and victory. Cats should be protected and loved by people.

A docile lamb, a crowing rooster, a watchdog, an agile and lively white rabbit, a bird that can sing, a pigeon that can report news … So, how can we truly describe them? First of all, you must be familiar with them and observe them carefully. Only by careful observation can we describe it in detail. When observing, you can generally look at it from the aspects of appearance characteristics, activities and living habits. When writing, you should describe the observation results selectively, emphatically and methodically. Specifically, the description of small animals should pay attention to the following two points:

First, describe the appearance and activities.

To describe a small animal, we must first describe its appearance and carefully look at its head, tail, coat color, limbs, shape, characteristics and color. If you write a paragraph about puppies:

1 "On Sunday, I came back from my grandmother's house. On the bus, I saw an elder sister carrying a cute little black dog and a purple bag. The little black dog has a pair of triangular ears like fur on his head, which droops softly downwards, which is very interesting. Two round black eyes kept looking around. The round black nose looks like a fluffy ball. Mouth tightly closed, silent, more like a quiet boy!

I really like this little black dog lying in the bag. "

This exercise was written by a grade one pupil. Although the article is short, it is very comprehensive: time, place, description of animals, and love for yourself. All metaphors and embellishments are vivid and appropriate.

Then look at its life habits, how small animals eat, how to play, how to sleep, carefully observe and describe in detail. For example:

gosling

"Oh, oh, the goose is hatched! The gosling is out of its shell! " I clapped my hands and shouted happily, I like goslings best.

These newly hatched goslings are dripping with water and their fur is not good-looking, but their red feet interest me.

The next day, I let these little guys out to feed. Their hair is dry, golden and soft. Although their feet are still too soft to stand up, they are all very lively. When they put down the ground, they jumped on the ground like wrestling. How funny!

When the gosling sleeps, its small neck becomes shorter and its head covers it like velvet. They wake up easily, with light footsteps, open their eyes to see, and then go to sleep without sound.

More than ten days later, I just opened the lid of the goose cage and they were about to rush out. A gosling stood on another gosling and jumped out! Their hair began to turn white and their feet were not soft. I ran for food. I put some rice on the plate first, with two big leaves in my hand. Their mouths are sipping rice, but their eyes are fixed on my leaves. Vegetable leaves seem more delicious than rice. A gosling jumped up, took a sip and fell down! Make me laugh.

These little guys are very human. As soon as I got home, they ran around my feet, very affectionate. I often chat with them, and sometimes they will answer! Therefore, I regard geese as my friends.

The article vividly shows the hatching, eating, sleeping and temperament of goslings. The language is lively, clear, vivid and childlike, and there is affection between the author and Goose between the lines.

The description of small animals focuses on static description, describing the activities of small animals and focusing on dynamic description. According to the orderly observation and description from static to dynamic, small animals can be written clearly, meticulously and touching.

Please read the following composition:

monkey

I like monkeys best. I'm afraid they are the cleverest animals. When we approached them, a monkey stared at us with bright eyes. It looks strange: the small nose is concave, the upturned mouth squeaks, and the hair is not only bright but also black and yellow. Small ears stand upright, and two small claws scratch the scalp from time to time, which makes people laugh. I took out a piece of bread and threw it. Unexpectedly, it did not answer. It just touched it with its claws first, then shrank back and looked at me with its eyes. After a while, he grabbed the bread and wolfed it down. After eating, he looked at me imploringly, put his paw to what I wanted to eat, and I threw him another piece of candy. It quickly peeled off the candy paper and put it in its mouth to chew. After reading this composition, the cute image of the little monkey will be vividly displayed in front of us. Therefore, this touching effect is the result of careful observation and detailed description by young authors from two aspects: static appearance and dynamic living habits.

When describing the appearance, the composition first summarizes the overall impression with the sentence "looks very strange", and then describes its sunken nose, protruding mouth, black and yellow coat color and scratching claws in turn. After reading this, we will definitely have a good impression on the little monkey. Then he changed a pen and wrote about the little monkey eating bread. The author threw it a piece of bread. The little monkey first "missed", just "felt it with his claws" and looked at me with his eyes. Finally, his step-by-step description of "wolfing down" is detailed and concrete, which has a touching effect and truly shows people the cuteness of the little monkey.

We use an outline to express the idea of this composition: Monkey: 1. Appearance: 1, summary-looks weird; 2, idiosyncratic-nose, small mouth, trade color, ears; Second, living habits: grab bread.

By reading the original text and the outline, you can better understand the thinking and writing order of this article. You can learn the methods of observation and layout from it.

Second, you should write your love in your composition.

Writing is to write your own heart by hand. Write your emotions. We love small animals, and when describing them, we should also use a pen to fuse our favorite feelings between the lines. Let readers feel our affection as soon as they read the text.

There are also various ways to express feelings: sometimes the appearance and shape of small animals are described in detail, and their feelings are integrated into them; Sometimes express feelings directly with concise sentences; Sometimes these two methods can be used interchangeably. The writing is flexible and eclectic.

Please read the following composition:

Frog preys

I like frogs very much. In summer, I often go to the pond to see frogs.

Frogs like to hide in the grass and bark occasionally. The happiest time for them to call is after the heavy rain. Whenever one barks at this time, the next one will bark with it. Dozens or even hundreds of frogs croak non-stop, and the sound can spread to miles away, much like a magnificent symphony!

Frogs are chubby, and some are seven or eight centimeters long. They are dressed in yellow-green or dark green clothes, showing their white bellies. Their heads are wide and flat, like a triangle. Its head has a pair of big round eyes, a big mouth and a small nose.

Frogs like to eat small insects. It's interesting to watch them hunt. One day, I squatted quietly behind the big tree by the pond and observed it carefully. A frog squatted on the ground, with his mouth open and his face upturned, waiting for something. Suddenly, a bug flew over and saw the frog suddenly jump up, hook its tongue and fall to the ground again. The bug disappeared, and the frog returned to its original appearance and waited patiently.

Frogs are really experts in catching insects. Listen to the farmer's uncle: you calculate that a frog can kill at least 10 thousand pests a year. Really our good friends!

This composition is about "frog's prey", which is slightly different from the previous article "monkey": this composition summarizes the center of the full text with the sentence "I like frogs very much", and then writes the frog's singing, appearance and insect catching scene in turn. Clear context, clear paragraphs