If defined by a percentage system, this poem can score 78-80 points.
It's not easy.
According to my years of experience as an editor, such a sentence can kill 85% of the so-called poets who decorate their faces with literature.
He's just an actor.
To put it bluntly, in their line, this poem is estimated to be at the top of the pyramid, which can be compared with no more than 10 people.
Poetry begins with "one big and one small", and Xinjiang and hometown, which are objective in mind, suddenly jump into readers' eyes and are grasped very accurately. Cotton gives us warmth, just like mother's hand, which is apt and vivid, and makes people more and more passionate about that land and people living in that land.
This image is very beautiful.
The disadvantage is that it is a bit stiff to go directly to Cotton after Light as a Flower. If this place turns naturally, add 8- 10 to the whole poem. The ending is a bit abrupt, but in fact, it can be more vivid by careful words.
This is nitpicking. Generally speaking, Chen Jianbin knows what art is and deserves to be a master of film and television.
Any art is interlinked at the highest level, that is, it is afraid of being straightforward and jumping out to shout!