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Scene in the rain: What did the author write about rain?
The author of Scenes in the Rain makes the rain touching, amiable and lovely from three aspects: shape, sound and breath. This essay describes the scenery in the rain, and writes the true feelings of the scenery in the rain through personal experience, so that readers have an immersive feeling.

Original text:

It will be dark in the morning. Although it is daytime, it is dark and opaque. A series of lightning fell from the sky, and passers-by were scared to hide under the arcade. Malik thundered, with a loud bang, like a huge shell exploded. It rained cats and dogs immediately after the thunder, and everyone who didn't take an umbrella on the road was "soaked".

Passers-by caught off guard, picked up a briefcase to hide from the rain and ran awkwardly on the main road. People in the street fled everywhere, some people almost slipped and the scene was a mess. Stray dogs in the street are dejected and despondent. They look pitiful and look for shelter from the rain everywhere. Anxious to return, an adult after work, wants to return to his warm home as soon as possible.

Looking down from the overpass, the umbrella in the rain is colorful, like a walking flower, very beautiful and full of poetry. Naughty children wear raincoats and boots to tread water in the rain and have fun. The raincoat couldn't stop the heavy rain, and it was soaked through.

The heavy rain finally stopped, and people breathed a sigh of relief after the rain cleared up. The dusty signboard was completely refreshed by the heavy rain, and the trees on the roadside absorbed enough water, all of which were full of energy. People who have been sheltering from the rain have come out from all corners. Pedestrians come and go in an endless stream and see a lively street scene.

Appreciate:

In this paper, rhetorical methods such as metaphor and personification are used to fully enrich the fullness of the article, and each sentence appropriately reflects the vividness of the scenery in the rain.