1. How to write a picture book composition for primary school students

Writers use words to express their thoughts and feelings, but readers see far more than flat words. They rely on imagination. , turning words into three-dimensional pictures, so the sounds, colors, smells, changes and contrasts in the composition are particularly important.

In addition to cooking delicious dishes, a good chef must also know how to arouse the appetite of diners, so that those who see it will want to eat, and those who eat will be satisfied. Therefore, the chef puts great effort into the presentation of the food so that the food looks good in color, aroma and taste.

1. Sound

Can you imagine what it feels like to watch a silent film? Without sound and color, the effect will be greatly reduced.

In a composition, sound is definitely not the protagonist, but adding sound effects when necessary and appropriate can make the article more vivid and intimate.

In articles describing scenes, sound reconciles the excessive flaws of the picture, letting the raindrops fall to the ground, the wind blowing through the leaves, the chirping of insects and birds, the waves crashing on the embankment and other natural phenomena. Sound, as well as the different sounds of the city, convey the meaning you want to convey.

Compositions on other themes can also add sounds as appropriate, such as crying, heartbeat, throat clearing, footsteps, etc. As long as you listen attentively, you will feel the sound of the words, as long as you put a little thought into it. , these sounds can embellish your composition.

2. Color

We live in a colorful world, and articles written cannot be in black and white, but there are many compositions that are just black words on a white background.

Adding color to a composition relies on observation. Under what circumstances, what color should be highlighted; what color sets off what mood. In the world of words, there are certain rules. We need to read more and think more before we can grasp it accurately.

For example, wind has no color, but we can use the wind to bring out different colors. The wind blows through green trees and grass, blue sky, red roofs, and blue sea. The wind even blows your black hair and blue melancholy heart.

Of course, unnecessary and inappropriate colors will look out of place.

3. Smell

In real life, smell is invisible, but it definitely exists. Just like the aroma of a delicious dish, it won't fill your stomach, but it will whet your appetite. The sense of smell replaces vision, hearing and touch at critical moments. For example, if the food is rancid, we may not be able to see it, but we can certainly smell it.

The smell of composition makes the way of expression more diverse and lively.

For example, the smell of wind is determined by the direction it comes from. The wind blows over the coast, bringing a strong smell of salt and fish;

The wind blows through the garbage chute, and you smell the rot; the wind blows over the happy people, and you can even smell their laughter. The beautiful scent that comes with it.

Whether it is a beautiful smell or a disgusting stench, there is a wonderful finishing touch.

4. Change and contrast

Changes can be discerned with the naked eye, such as the shift of sunlight, people's emotions and expressions. Change can also be indirect. For example, when a person changes, or it is a process of growth or aging, we may not necessarily be able to detect it in a short period of time.

But it is always going on. Using change can make the article more interesting. There are layers and more depth.

Contrast is often inseparable from change, but the use of contrast is stronger. Whether it is color, sound, light and darkness, mood, or behavior, the role of contrast is to create conflict and make readers feel shocked. Through comparison, the meaning we want to express will be clearer and the effect will be significant.

The use of change and contrast in composition can show the author's careful observation.

5. Summary

When a chef cooks a dish, he will not only focus on color and seasoning, nor will he reverse the priorities and neglect the other, destroying the characteristics of the raw materials and making the food lose its original taste. Similarly, when we write an article, we should not pay too much attention to the use of techniques and cover up the original thoughts and feelings to be expressed.

A good composition should be balanced, prioritized, prioritized, and prioritized. 2. Why are picture books the best composition books?

Because picture books not only tell stories through text, but also through pictures. The more carefully children observe, the richer they will gain;

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Because the picture book is not a Bible, it is also created by ordinary people one stroke at a time, and there will be places that cannot be explained. This can help children not blindly worship books and authority, but learn to question it.

We all know that "picture book" means "picture book". It refers to a kind of book that is mainly based on pictures and supplemented by text, or even has no text at all and is all pictures. Although the proportion of pictures is relatively important, the words and pictures appearing in "picture books" are equally important.

Here we take a very classic "picture book" - "Ross the Hen Goes for a Walk" as an example.

In this book, we will find that there are very few words in it, and there is only one coherent paragraph:

Rose the hen went out for a walk. She walked across the yard, around the pond, over the haystacks, past the mill, through the fence, through the bee house, and returned home in time for supper.

This text seems to be about an ordinary process like a hen going for a walk, but when combined with the picture, it forms a very interesting and funny story. Because in its picture, in addition to the hen Rose taking a leisurely walk, there is also a fox with a yellow body and an orange face. The fox followed Rose furtively, but every time it failed.

This carefully designed coincidence and the cheerful atmosphere of the whole picture are particularly suitable for children's psychology and emotions. In addition, the vivid and interesting pictures also make the seemingly simple words come alive, allowing children to unknowingly learn some words while enjoying the story. As mentioned before: go through, go around, go over, pass by, go through, go through, etc.

Some of these verbs are commonly used by us, such as "walk through"; some are not commonly used by us, such as crossing over. As a child's eyes look at these pictures, his ears hear the corresponding words. After a few times, he can understand it accurately. He can understand that the hen walks and crows like this, and the hen walks and crows like this... Then the next time the child crawls somewhere by himself, such as under the bed, he will think: Oh, I It's drilling through.

By the way, the text in the picture book is relatively concise and standardized. They use written language, which is different from our usual spoken language. Therefore, such language will benefit children more when it comes to exercising their language vocabulary. For example, this picture book - "Ally's Red Cloak".

Its text is this:

Poor Ali! He really needed a new cloak. So, come spring. Ali cut off the wool from the sheep, washed it, and then combed the wool straight with a brush. Ali then spun the wool into yarn. However, Ali wanted a red cloak, so before the summer was over, he picked some wild fruits for dyeing and boiled them in a pot. Then Ali put the yarn in the juice made from wild fruits. dyed red. When the yarn was dry, Ali loaded the yarn into threads on the loom. In the autumn evening, he was busy weaving threads into cloth. Ali spread the cloth on the table and cut it into pieces with scissors. Then pin the cut cloths together with needles and sew them up. Winter is coming, and Ali finally has a new, beautiful red cloak.

Look how rich the language is here! Those figurative verbs, like "comb straight", "spun into yarn", "boil", "spread the cloth", "cut", "pin together", "sew"; there are also words like "poor" Adjectives and adverbs such as "real"; and some connecting words such as "reuse", "then", "while", "wait until", and "busy again". This connects the entire process of the story smoothly through these words.

Therefore, the pictures and words in picture books are really important. Its pictures can guide children to discover, observe, explore, and imagine. And its text can increase our vocabulary and enrich our language, making expressions clearer and more standardized. 3. A picture book composition, the content is to write about a thing about a person I know well

A person I know well

There are many people around me who care about me. The person I know the most among a group of people is my mother. My mother is a beautiful mother. She has long hair and a pair of medium-sized eyes that can always see through my thoughts. Under the high bridge of his nose, there is a eloquent mouth that speaks in an orderly manner. Because my mother has been working hard for a long time, a few wrinkles have unconsciously appeared on the corners of her eyes.

One day, I came home from school. I didn’t see my mother at the school gate, so I went home with my classmates. After a few minutes, my mother came to school and found that I was no longer in school, so she went back and forth. try to find. After a while, I saw my mother rushing back from outside. As soon as he saw me, he said, "Why did you go home by yourself! Do you know how anxious your mother was when she didn't see you? Next time you don't see your mother, just wait at the school gate for a while, you know?" I looked at my mother's picture. His face was flushed and sweat was dripping from his head! Only then did I deeply understand the profound meaning of the sentence "A son is everything to a mother".

Mom's love is selfless and great. This sentence is true at all. Whenever I am silent in the happy love my mother gives me, I will sing "Only my mother is good in the world." A mother's child is like a treasure. If you throw yourself into your mother's arms, you won't be able to enjoy happiness... 4. What picture book stories are suitable for fourth-grade primary school students?

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Yesterday, Xuejun Primary School mathematics teacher Zheng Li recommended many interesting mathematics books. During the interview, we learned that Su Feng, a Chinese language teacher at Xuejun Primary School, has been studying picture books for many years. I have read thousands of picture books and have gained a lot of experience.

Today I would like to ask Teacher Su to recommend some books to share with you. Teacher Su Feng is an advanced worker in the education system of Xihu District and the first prize winner of the Zhejiang Province Morality Competition. , Zhejiang Province Excellent Instructor for Reading and Essay Writing.

Teacher Su has participated in the compilation of books such as "Learning Chinese Language Skillfully", "Being a Moral Person" and "Childlike Home". In the past few days, he has brought picture book reading into Chinese classes and moral classes, which have been very impressive and deeply loved by students.

My son has the habit of reading before going to bed every day. Teacher Su’s son is in the kindergarten class. “He started reading at 6 months old. We showed him various picture books. At that time, it was not strictly a reading book. Picture books were read by adults in the elementary and middle classes of kindergarten. Now in the senior class, he can read books by himself. “We didn’t deliberately teach him to read. He has already learned more than 1,000 words by reading picture books before he entered elementary school. Known.

The last time we went out to eat, he pointed out the name of the restaurant and said "Black Fish Restaurant". We asked him how he knew it, and he said there was a book about "Little Black Fish". "Because he has been reading picture books since he was a child, my son has a good reading habit. He must read a book every night before going to bed, which helps him calm down.

There are studies abroad that show that children who watch TV cartoons for a long time are not interested in static images. It is not easy to concentrate on things (such as reading). "Picture books actually have no age limit. I have studied picture books a lot. Teacher Su slowly brings interesting picture books into the classroom. Picture books will be used in Chinese classes, composition classes, and ideological and moral classes. Students experience the magic.

"Every time I talk about picture books, the classroom is very quiet. The text + pictures in picture books are very expressive. Many things cannot be expressed clearly in words, but picture books can.

Some After reading picture books for a period of time, fourth-grade students can write thousands of words at a time. " Teacher Su said that picture book reading seems to be suitable for young readers, but in fact there is no obvious age limit. There are some good books that even adults can learn from. , very flavorful.

How to read picture books? Many people are concerned about how parents teach their children to read a book. Teacher Su said that when you first start reading picture books, you can let the children purely look at the pictures and let them explain themselves by looking at the pictures. The children's language expression ability will gradually develop, and they can then tell the story in words.

Many picture book stories may seem short, but they are full of suspense and have unexpected endings. At this time, parents should seize the opportunity and discuss more with their children. Teacher Su recommended picture books for many reasons, and we have selected eight of them: Reason 1: Guide children’s imagination. In early childhood, it is very meaningful for children to read picture books to cultivate their imagination.

Let’s take a look at the unusual imagination of the picture book "Whale" - the content is as follows: A migratory bird flies in the sky and shouts "Whale"! However, the people in the village searched and searched but could not find it in the lake. They began to complain that the migratory birds had deceived them. However, a child was carried into the sky by the migratory birds. It turns out that the shape of the lake near the village is like a whale, and the water sprayed from a broken water pipe in a house is very similar to the water sprayed by a whale. It turns out that the migratory birds are not deceiving.

When my children and I read picture books such as the "Cute Mouse Brother" series, "Who Wants a Cheap Rhino" and "Animals Should Never Wear Clothes", we will always admire the "imagination" of the works. ". Reason 2: Let children learn knowledge easily. Let us open the picture book "Sweet Potato" with our children.

The appearance of sweet potatoes, the planting of sweet potatoes, the growth process of sweet potatoes, and the harvest of sweet potatoes are all so new and interesting to children. Read the titles of these picture books, "Can you count to the power of 10?" "How to weigh a lion?" "What's older than a tortoise?" "Did dinosaurs drink the same water as today?" "What's faster than a cheetah?" "Is there anything smaller than a shrew?" "How do you know what time it is?" 》...Can children's innate desire for exploration and curiosity not be mobilized? Reason 3: Let children learn to manage their own emotions. Today’s children are all only children. They have bad tempers and are difficult to educate. They often get angry and cry because of a little “little thing” (parents don’t even think it is a “thing”!). , even shaking all over. How could such a child grow up? Therefore, it is important to guide children to learn to manage their emotions during the education process from an early age.

Among the picture books related to emotion management, "Angry Arthur" impressed me the most. What do parents say when their children are angry? How to do it? In "Angry Arthur", the mother's approach is to make Arthur angry enough! Let Arthur fully express his anger, to the end, and to the end! In this way, let the children know what kind of emotion anger is and how powerful it is! "I Turned into a Fire-breathing Dragon", "Angry Soup", "I Don't Want to Be Angry", "I Won't Be Afraid", "I Don't Want to Be Jealous" and "Smelly Lamb and Goose", these picture books will make children realize that having healthy emotions is How important.

Reason 4: Let children understand some philosophy of life. Introduce a children's picture book about an "owl" - a cute owl whose home has a second floor. When the owl is on the first floor, it thinks how nice it would be to be on the second floor; when it is on the second floor, it thinks how nice it would be to be on the first floor.

In order to own both the first and second floors, the owl kept running back and forth between the first and second floors. The content is very simple.

But it gives people a revelation: sometimes people have this thing, but it is impossible to have that thing.

If you run around, you won't even be able to own the first or second floors in the end, putting yourself in an awkward position.

Reading this story, you can understand the truth through feeling the lovely images. Later, during parent-child reading with my son, I discovered many picture books of this type, such as "The Lost Corner", "Stone Piggy", "Nicholas' Three Questions", and so on.

Reason 5: Give children a "true self" When I read picture books to children, I feel that we adults need to put aside our "seriousness" and let children retain their "true self." When I saw the title "It's so fun to pick your nose," I found it very interesting.

"Nostril-picking" is a taboo. Should we educate children to break this taboo? The little animal parents in the story. 5. What are the picture book compositions for the third to sixth grade of elementary school?

Picture book is called Picture Book in English, "Love En" in Japanese, and "picture book" in traditional Chinese characters. As the name suggests, it means "picture book". ". It refers to a type of books that are mainly paintings with a small amount of text. The picture books on the market now are mainly read by young children, and their content involves literature, education, science popularization, etc. In terms of adult picture books, writers such as Jimi Mi and Qian Haiyan have emerged in recent years.

The teaching of picture book composition uses picture books as the main medium of teaching. The picture book itself has a strong appeal to children: the pictures in the picture book are exaggerated, cute and full of childishness; the text in the picture book is concise and humorous, leaving endless meaning, leaving children with rich imagination space; the plot shown in the picture book is full of twists and turns. Vivid and engaging. When children read picture books, they will naturally be attracted by the whimsical plots and exaggerated and interesting pictures in the picture books. On this basis, the teacher's timely guidance and clever guidance can easily arouse children's excitement, stimulate children's strong impulse to express, and make children unknowingly integrate into composition teaching while being full of interest. 6. Short stories suitable for drawing into picture books

Ah, you can draw an interesting experience when you were a child

Hey, do you want me to help you make it up?

Uh,, let me give you a hint.

① Lament how stressful studying is (everyone around me is writing this kind of story, seven out of ten stories are written like this...)

② Draw a fairy tale The sequel (this is so good, because the original work has given the characters and the story, you just have to continue it. The options are: The Emperor's New Clothes, the fate of the liar in the story can be made up; The Mermaid, after the mermaid turns into bubbles story, or make up a story based on a mermaid, Disney has continued the Little Mermaid 2, it is so imaginative, so there is still a lot of room for development)

③Adventures, just like you I was walking on the road, and suddenly a flying cat appeared. . . Then take Alice in Wonderland as a reference.

④ You can make up a story based on blood type. I looked at your information and found that your blood type is O. That blood type can be transfused to anyone (although now medical science has confirmed that it is best not to Transfuse blood to people with different blood types, but people with type O blood are really good) This is an impromptu idea that I made, and it may be a bit difficult and outrageous.

⑤ Draw a joke. This is the shortest and simplest. You can basically eliminate the background. The characters only need to wear T-shirts. There are only a few people saying a few words. Finally, add a speechless expression, and that’s it. . 7. How to use picture books to improve composition

Picture books are deeply loved by children because of their exquisite page decoration, beautiful pictures and concise text.

Suhomlinsky said: "Children think with colors, images, and sounds." There is an inseparable connection between the pictures and texts in picture books. Atmosphere, *** come together to tell a story.

This story is vivid, interesting, intuitive, enlightening, and has rich connotations. There is a very appropriate metaphor: the pictures in the picture book are like pearls, and the words are like thin and long threads.

Without threads, the necklace cannot be worn, and without pearls, the necklace does not exist. Pictures are the life of picture books.

The pictures in the picture book can be read. Behind the beautiful pictures and simple words are the author's rich imagination, and the story becomes meaningful. Therefore, a good picture book, while telling a story, also improves children's observation skills, enriches children's imagination, and sublimates children's spiritual world.

Using picture books to teach composition is similar to our traditional picture-based composition teaching, but it also has its own unique, novel and effective features. It has become popular in Europe, America, Japan, and Taiwan. It has not been long since it spread to our country, but it soon attracted widespread attention. 8. What are the picture books and extracurricular books suitable for third-grade students?

Books suitable for third-grade children: 1. "The Complete Works of Father and Son" comic strip "Father and Son" is the work of the German humor master E. The immortal masterpiece of O. Braun (1903-1944).

The vivid and humorous stories in the work come from the cartoonist’s real feelings in life. Father and son are actually true portrayals of Braun and his son Christian.

Each small and exquisite picture shines with the light of wisdom, and silently exudes pure love and harmonious family happiness, shocking people's hearts forever.

Reading such comic strips is not as simple as many people imagine, and it also requires reading experience and skills. It is both our responsibility and our pleasure to guide children to read this healthy, humorous and intelligent comic masterpiece.

2. "On Sunny Days, Sometimes Pigs Come Down" (6 volumes) A ??set of picture books with a quite alternative style created by Japanese children's literature writer and cartoonist Yatama Shiro, including "On Sunny Days, Sometimes Pigs Come Down" and "Tomorrow" It's Pig Day", "I'm a Pig Sometimes", "Even My Belly Button Is a Cartoon", "The Dream Child" and "Moving Robot". The first three books are a complete story, and the last three books are different stories.

I have seen it rain, but I have never seen pigs raining from the sky. The book said that when pigs rain, the sky is full of pigs, big and small, so densely packed that they almost cover the sun. . I really want to see it! But at that time, a Japanese third-year-old classmate was frightened. He quickly erased his diary with an eraser, and the pigs in the sky gradually disappeared.

This is a set of books with extremely rich imagination, and its absurd flavor is rare even among works known for absurdity. If you lack the spirit of play, it will be difficult to accept this book.

3. "Dear Mr. Han Xiu" won the 1984 Newbery Gold Medal for Children's Literature. This book may be of great help to your composition skills! Ray, a fifth-grade boy, was fascinated by the author Mr. Han Xiu's books and wrote a letter to the author.

It just so happened that the assignment (book report) assigned by the teacher was also to write a letter to a writer. In his letter, Rey asked the writer nine questions.

What’s amazing is that the writer actually wrote back to Rey and asked him ten questions, such as who are you? What does it look like? Who is at home? Where to live? etc. Now it becomes the burden of Rey, who hates composition... This is the letter written by Rey to the writer Mr. Han Xiu and his diary.

Parents’ divorce, the disappearance of the puppy classmate, the theft of lunch and the installation of alarm bells... 4. "Little House on the Prairie" The "Little House" series is the work of American writer Roland Ingalls. A collection of Wilder's nine autobiographical classics. The second "Little House on the Prairie" is the most famous and representative of this series of works.

The book describes how the Rowland family left the Wisconsin forests and migrated to the Kansas prairie in a caravan. This was a typical portrayal of the pioneers of the American West at that time. During this move, the Roland family had to cross a swollen river in great danger. After arriving on the prairie, they also encountered Indians, were surrounded by wolves, prairie fires, and fever attacks, but in the end they still moved in. In the cabin built by my father, I spent a sweet time hunting on the grassland to make a living.

This is the kind of book that can change a person's life after reading it, although it is simple and unpretentious. 5. "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" British children's literature master Dahl is the most popular writer among young readers in the 20th century, and "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" is the most well-known and popular of his works. Even football stars Beckham also claimed that this book was his favorite when he was a boy.

It was filmed into the movie "Happy Candy House" in the 1970s. This year, Warner Bros. spent a huge amount of money to remake it again and it will be released soon, which shows its status in the hearts of fairy tale fans around the world. This fairy tale unfolds a wonderful fantasy story with the help of children's favorite chocolates and other candies: Charlie and other five children were lucky enough to get the golden ticket hidden under the candy wrapper, and had the opportunity to visit the mysterious Mr. Wonka's most wonderful place in the world. chocolate factory.

They saw all kinds of miracles and experienced all kinds of adventures during their visit... 9. What are the picture books and extracurricular books suitable for third grade students?

Books suitable for third grade children:

1. "The Complete Works of Father and Son"

The comic strip "Fathers and Sons" is an immortal masterpiece by the German humor master E. O. Braun (1903-1944). Each of the vivid and humorous stories in the work comes from the cartoonist's real feelings in life. Father and son are actually true portrayals of Braun and his son Christian. Each small and exquisite picture shines with the light of wisdom, and silently exudes pure love and harmonious family happiness, shocking people's hearts forever.

Reading such comic strips is not as simple as many people imagine, and it also requires reading experience and skills. It is both our responsibility and our pleasure to guide children to read this healthy, humorous and intelligent comic masterpiece.

2. "On a Sunny Day, Sometimes a Pig Picture Book" (6 volumes)

Japanese children's literature writer and cartoonist Yatama Shiro created a set of picture books with a rather alternative style, including "On a Sunny Day" "Sometimes I'm a Pig" "Tomorrow is Pig Day" "Sometimes I'm a Pig" "Even My Belly Button Is a Cartoon" "The Dream Child Comes from a Dream" "Moving Robot". The first three books are a complete story, and the last three books are different stories.

I have seen it rain, but I have never seen pigs raining from the sky. The book said that when pigs rain, the sky is full of pigs, big and small, so densely packed that they almost cover the sun. .

I really want to see it! But at that time, a Japanese third-year-old classmate was frightened. He quickly erased his diary with an eraser, and the pigs in the sky gradually disappeared.

This is a set of books with extremely rich imagination, and its absurd flavor is rare even among works known for absurdity. If you lack the spirit of play, it will be difficult to accept this book.

3. "Dear Mr. Hanxiu"

This book won the 1984 Newbery Gold Medal for Children's Literature. This book may be of great help to your composition skills!

Ray, a fifth-grade boy, wrote a letter to the writer Mr. Han Xiu because he was fascinated by his books. It just so happened that the assignment (book report) assigned by the teacher was also to write a letter to a writer. In his letter, Rey asked the writer nine questions. What's amazing is that the writer actually wrote back to Rey and asked him ten questions, such as who are you? What does it look like? Who is at home? Where to live? etc. Now it becomes the burden of Rey, who hates composition... This is the letter written by Rey to the writer Mr. Han Xiu and his diary. Parents' divorce, puppy classmate's disappearance, lunch being stolen and alarm bells installed...

4. "Little House on the Prairie"

The "Little House" series is an American A collection of nine autobiographical classics by writer Roland Ingalls Wilder. The second "Little House on the Prairie" is the most famous and representative of this series of works. The book describes how the Roland family left the Wisconsin forests and migrated to the Kansas prairie in a caravan. This was a typical portrayal of the pioneers of the American West at that time. During this move, the Roland family had to cross a swollen river in great danger. After arriving on the prairie, they also encountered Indians, were surrounded by wolves, prairie fires, and fever attacks, but in the end they still moved in. In the cabin built by my father, I spent a sweet time hunting on the grassland to make a living.

This is the kind of book that can change a person's life after reading it, although it is simple and unpretentious.

5. "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory"

British children's literature master Dahl is the most popular writer among young readers in the 20th century, and "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory" is his work The most well-known and popular book among them, even the football star Beckham claimed that this book was his favorite when he was a boy. It was filmed into the movie "Happy Candy House" in the 1970s. This year, Warner Bros. invested heavily in remaking it and it will be released soon, which shows its status in the hearts of fairy tale fans around the world. This fairy tale unfolds a wonderful fantasy story with the help of children's favorite chocolates and other candies: Charlie and other five children were lucky enough to get the golden ticket hidden under the candy wrapper, and had the opportunity to visit the mysterious Mr. Wonka's most wonderful place in the world. chocolate factory.

They saw various miracles and experienced various adventures during their visit...