"These words are very popular at present, and it is not difficult to write. Deng, a candidate from Rongshan Middle School, wrote an argumentative essay on the topic of "China, the international peace ambassador", using three key words: Great Wall, Giant Panda and. "The three key words are all friendly signals for China to express its pursuit of peaceful development to the world." Deng Xiaoping said that the Great Wall is a symbol of China's excellent culture and represents the rise of China. The giant panda is a friendly symbol of China's export; The Belt and Road Initiative is a friendly expression of China's participation in world economic development.
Many students also said that the topic of the composition is relatively free, and compared with last year's comic composition, it is easier to grasp the ideas. Chen, a student of Foshan No.3 Middle School, chose "bike-sharing" and "Mobile Payment" because they can be linked by mobile phones, and they are related to the development of science and technology and the trend of the times, which makes them easier to play. "In my composition, I highlighted the convenient application of mobile payment in life, showing the positive energy of China's economic development and technological development!" Chen Tong said.
In addition to "mobile payment" and "high-speed rail", Huang, a student of Sanshui Experimental School attached to the Middle School, also chose the relatively unpopular "air pollution" for discussion. "The first two keywords mainly discuss the rapid development of China, while emphasizing the need to adhere to scientific development and balance the relationship between economic development and environmental protection through' air pollution'."
Xia, a social candidate who took the college entrance examination in the second year, said that this year's college entrance examination composition needs to find the commonness between keywords, and then find the conflict point of keywords through commonness, highlighting the development and changes of China society today. To this end, he chose "mobile payment" and "high-speed rail". "The high-speed rail connects the cities of China in series, which brings the distance between cities and people, cities and cities closer; Mobile payment has greatly facilitated and changed the consumption habits of citizens, representing the rapid economic and social development of China. "
composition subject
According to a recent survey of overseas students in China, they are more concerned about "China keywords": Belt and Road, Giant Panda, Square Dance, China Cuisine, Great Wall, bike-sharing, Peking Opera, air pollution, beautiful countryside, food safety, high-speed rail and mobile payment.
Please choose two or three key words to introduce what you know about China, and write an article to help foreign youth understand China. Require the selection of keywords to make them organically related; Choose a good angle, clarify the problem and draw up a good title; Please do not copy or copy; Not less than 800 words.
"College Entrance Examination Micro-composition" Let's Challenge
Yesterday at noon, 20 17 national college entrance examination composition questions were released one after another. The official WeChat of Foshan Daily and the official Weibo launched the topic of "Micro-composition for College Entrance Examination" to attract citizens to leave messages to write micro-composition for college entrance examination. Excerpts from Micro-composition of College Entrance Examination
@Money Hunter-Don: I unlocked bike-sharing with mobile payment and traveled all over Foshan beautiful countryside.
@ He Xiaojie: As a veteran foodie, I know that many China cuisines are quite low-key and hard to find. Because walking is too slow, you can't get into the street by car, so you need to share them by bike, which is convenient and fast. You can ride them away by mobile payment.
@ Bige: Foreigners take the high-speed train along the Belt and Road to China to see giant pandas. They can see grandfathers and grandmothers dancing in the square dance in every square they pass by, learn to use mobile payment to unlock bike-sharing, and taste Chinese food all the way while worrying about food safety. They can't stop. After dinner, I watched the movie The Great Wall and listened to Beijing Opera. The only fly in the ointment is the air pollution in the city, which reminds them of the beautiful countryside.
@M.J: Riding bike-sharing to play basketball in beautiful countryside, only to find that the stadium has been occupied by a large number of square dance aunts.
Expert comment: Only by listening to things outside the window can we tell the "China story" well.
Yesterday, the Provincial Education Examinations Institute issued an official comment within 1 hour after the composition of the national Chinese examination paper of Guangdong College Entrance Examination in 2065,438+07. Professor Chen Shaohua, Dean of the School of Literature of South China Normal University, made an analysis of the composition, and the reporter also invited the person in charge of preparing for the exam in Foshan No.1 Middle School and shimen middle school Senior Three to interpret the composition.
Pay attention to reality, "two ears should hear things outside the window"
"Tell the' China Story' to foreign youth." Chen Shaohua said that this year's essay topic will guide candidates to pay attention to reality, the history, reality and future of the country, the development achievements and characteristics of the country, enhance patriotism and enhance their pride in foreign exchanges.
"The materials involve many aspects such as economy, culture and society. The test questions are open, the ideas are multiple, and the autonomy of candidates can be brought into play. " Chen Shaohua said that candidates can choose keywords according to their knowledge of China and connect them. "For example, bike-sharing and mobile payment can help urban construction and energy conservation, while mobile payment provides technical support for the realization of bike-sharing. This is the connection. "
Chen Shaohua also suggested that candidates should write a good composition, usually "listen to things outside the window", pay attention to these China keywords and think deeply, so as to write a good article.
Read materials that require comprehensive understanding.
"I give this essay title 10 praise. "Li Cunren, the person in charge of preparing for the senior three language test in Foshan No.1 Middle School, said that the essay topic is highly targeted and the requirements and restrictions are very strict, but it does give every student something to say, which is highly oriented and can show the true level of students.
Li Cunren said that the new material composition requires candidates to fully understand the material and read their opinions from it. Nowadays, it guides students to pay attention to society, current affairs and close to life. Li Cunren believes that candidates must first ask for four requirements for the purpose of solving problems before choosing keywords. First, choose two or three keywords, neither more nor less; The second is to present what you know about China and choose the most interesting and easy-to-understand keywords; The third is to help foreign youth understand China and think about what they want to know from the perspective of foreign youth; The fourth is that words should be related to each other.
Get out of books and understand social reality.
"This new material composition topic is moderately difficult, guiding students out of books and paying more attention to social reality." Wang Jianhua, the person in charge of preparing for the Chinese exam for Grade Three in shimen middle school, said that the topic emphasized the social reality of China in the eyes of candidates and asked them to observe and think about the society. From the perspective of "cultivating people by virtue", it is very writable.
"The college entrance examination composition questions can be analyzed from six aspects: writability, selectivity, guidance, inquiry, condom prevention and difficulty." Wang Jianhua said that this new material composition question fully meets the requirements of the proposition, especially the guidance, and guides students to pay attention to the things around them. He believes that before selecting keywords, you can classify keywords and find the relationship between them. For example, from China cuisine to Peking Opera, China can be displayed from the material level to the spiritual level; Square dance and bicycle sharing are social hotspots that people pay attention to; High-speed rail and mobile payment are the representatives of China's scientific and technological development and achievements.