Whether in school or in society, everyone must have been exposed to composition. Composition is a transition from internal speech to external speech, that is, from a compressed, concise language that you can understand to a developed, standardized grammatical structure that can be understood by others. Do you know how to write a standardized composition? The following is a national volume of Chinese composition that I have compiled for you. Welcome to read it. I hope you will like it.
Topic
According to a recent survey of international students in China, the "China keywords" they are more concerned about are: Belt and Road, Giant Panda, Square Dance, Chinese Cuisine, Great Wall, Cycling, Peking Opera, Air Pollution, beautiful countryside, Food Safety, High Speed Rail and Mobile Payment.
Please choose two or three keywords to present China you know, and write an article to help foreign youth understand China. It is required to select keywords to make them organically related; Choose a good angle, define the style, and draw up the title; Do not copy or copy; Not less than 8 words.
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An open task-driven composition
As a Chinese teacher who really sat in the examination room of the college entrance examination as a candidate, when he saw the composition topic of the first volume of the new curriculum standard, he suddenly felt bright-it is really an open task-driven composition with unlimited creative possibilities.
let's talk about openness first.
First of all, among the 12 "China keywords" given in the materials, each word has rich meanings. For example, the Great Wall can be said to be both past history and national spirit. Such as Chinese food, we can talk about both food culture and China people's love for life behind the food. Therefore, every word has a profound connotation.
Secondly, these words are not limited to the level of praise. Such as air pollution and food safety, also show the shortcomings of contemporary China. Therefore, it is also one of the manifestations of openness to truly present the social status quo, not to whitewash things, and not to be afraid of illness and medical treatment.
Thirdly, these words with different meanings, praise and disparagement are connected in series, which can be arranged and combined into countless writing ideas. Candidates can write in a variety of ways from ancient times to the present, from shallow to deep, from derogatory to commendatory, and so on. As long as there is an organic connection between words, it is a reasonable number of ways.
let's talk about the task.
first of all, you should choose "two or three" keywords, neither too many nor too few. And there must be an organic connection between them, and the main part of the article should not be written into several separate pieces.
Secondly, to understand that the audience of the article is foreign youth, how to clearly reflect this is worth considering. It seems that writing a letter to a foreign youth is the clearest way to show it.
You have to cross the desert, so you are not free; But you can choose the way to cross the desert, so you are free-this is the national essay topic of the new curriculum standard that I have seen, which restricts us, but gives us unlimited possibilities.
Fan Wenyi:
International friends:
Open letters as soon as possible.
the splendid civilization has been handed down for thousands of years, and the Chinese people have entertained guests. Contemporary China is welcoming every international friend with an open and inclusive attitude. Today, I heard that you are eager to know China, which is exactly what Confucius said in our country: "Isn't it a pleasure to have friends from afar?" Here, please allow me to be a guide for the time being, and take three things as mirrors to see the leopard in the tube and show you the past, present and future of China.
The Great Wall is a rearview mirror. Looking back, let's not forget where we came yesterday. From Shanhaiguan to Jiayuguan, from Bohai to Longxi, from stormy waves to sandstorms beyond the Great Wall, it is our national spirit that stands on the Great Wall. "But make the Dragon City fly, and don't teach Huma to cross the Yinshan Mountain." Qin Yuehan in Wang Changling has our determination to defend our country. "The way to defend the country is to keep the people in Xiu De. If the people are happy, the country will be better, and the border will be solid." Among the reasons why Emperor Kangxi did not rebuild the Great Wall, there is our people-oriented compassion. "Brothers are obsessed with the wall, and they are insulted by the outside." In the Great Wall Battle, where China joined forces to resist Japan, we were United in seeking common ground while reserving differences. * * * Deng Chengque, I hope you can see the inheritance and development of the national spirit and see where we came yesterday.
*** Enjoy the bicycle as a microscope, observe the reality, and let us reflect on today's behavior. No one in this world is perfect, and so is contemporary China. Strolling through the streets, you can see * * * enjoying bicycles everywhere, which reflects this point. Scan the code to ride a bike, park on the ground, pay on time, and protect the car body, as the contemporary poet Guo Xiaochuan said: "I hope I don't feel guilty about life every time I recall." I think, these citizens who ride in a civilized way can be proud. At the same time, however, a few people have the uncivilized behavior of smearing numbers, locking locks privately and destroying bicycles. They are exactly what Mr. Qian Liqun called "exquisite egoists". These people are exactly what we should focus on when building a spiritual and civilized society. We are not perfect, but we have been pursuing it. * * * riding a bicycle, I hope you can see the flash and lack of civilization and see our behavior today.
High-speed rail is a telescope. Looking to the future, let's see where tomorrow will go. The lightning speed, crossing the gorge and crossing the valley, and the high-speed rail are the representatives of science and technology. And if China wants to face the future with a more vigorous attitude, it is about to focus on developing science and technology. In fact, it's not just high-speed rail, please try it. Manned space flight, deep-sea diving and internet connection are all scientific and technological fields that China is making great efforts to develop, explore and have achieved outstanding results. Science and technology are the long wings facing the future, helping our Chinese nation to break through the clouds and waves. * * * Take the high-speed train, I hope you can see the development and take-off of science and technology and see where we will go tomorrow.
gentlemen, at this point, I suddenly thought of Ai Qing's poem: Why do I always have tears in my eyes? Because I love this land deeply. You may not understand the tears of pride and love surging in the eyes of our Chinese sons and daughters, but I hope you can see China in a corner of the sea in the past, present and future in my leaked introduction. Taking the national spirit as the bone, spiritual civilization as the soul, science and technology as the sword, reviewing the past, observing the reality and looking forward to the future, this is China brought by the Great Wall, enjoying bicycles and high-speed rail, and it is also my deep attachment-Great America and China.
Fan Wener:
Mr. Donald:
Hello!
You are surprised at the rapid development of China. Now, as your tour guide in China, please allow me to introduce China to you with three key words:
1. The Great Wall: There is an old saying in China: "You are not a hero until you reach the Great Wall". The Great Wall, one of eight wonders of the world, is a cultural treasure dedicated to the world by the industrious and brave Chinese nation with wisdom and sweat. It was first built in the Qin Dynasty, and it is said that it was built by Qin Shihuang to resist the invasion of nomadic people in the north. Later, after the expansion of the dynasties, the scale reached one Wan Li, so it was called the Great Wall of Wan Li. It is said that it has become the only earth building that astronauts can see in outer space. This makes every Chinese son and daughter feel proud. However, the Great Wall is revered by the people of China, not only because of its majestic majesty, but also because it stretches across Wan Li. More importantly, it is a strong and unyielding spiritual symbol of the Chinese nation. As an expert in Chinese, you must have heard of such an idiom: "Unity is strength". China is a peace-loving country, but if our beautiful motherland is in danger, all Chinese sons and daughters will build a new Great Wall with their own flesh and blood, which is a precious spiritual legacy left by the Great Wall.
beautiful countryside: If the Great Wall is the symbol of ancient China, then beautiful countryside is the epitome of modern China. Speaking of modernization, in your mind, you may see the grandeur of the Empire State Building and the noise of Times Square. Indeed, this is very modern. However, this may be your modernization, but it is by no means the whole modernization of China. Confucius, a thinker in China two thousand years ago, once said, "A gentleman is harmonious but different". We are taking the road of modernization with China characteristics. The characteristics of China here include the construction of beautiful countryside. As you know, there are more than 8 million farmers in China. Most of them live in the countryside, and building the countryside well is to benefit the majority of China people. This is from the material level, from the spiritual level, the countryside is the soul homeland of China people and the cultural root of China people. In the process of global urbanization, more and more people are moving from rural areas to cities, but when they wake up in the middle of the night, they can't find the clear stream of their childhood, the big locust tree folded at the entrance of the village, and the distant legend told by grandpa shaking his cattail leaf fan ... Therefore, we need not only modern Jinshan Yinshan, but also the green mountains and green hills of beautiful countryside. Wuzhen, the first stop you came to China, is the representative of beautiful countryside.
third, the belt and road: the first two are China's world, and the proposal of the "belt and road" highlights China's responsibility as a member of the world. The Bible says, "Do to others what you want". When China put forward this idea, he hoped to develop and prosper with the world.
Well, that's all. I hope you fall in love with "China's World" and I hope you can promote "China of the World"
This is a salute!