1. Continue to write the composition. Come and help me.

Since then, Sang Na's burden has become heavier, and his five children barely fill their stomachs, not to mention Simon's two children. As the days passed, Sang Na stayed at home day and night to take care of the children and clean up ... Her husband went fishing in a boat every morning.

Children don't have enough clothes. In winter, their feet are all black and blue with cold. Their food is only fish. Sometimes they only eat two meals a day. The most pitiful thing is that sometimes they only have a piece of black bread. Every time dad comes back from the sea, the children are the happiest, because there will be fish to eat when dad comes back, and the children look forward to his coming back early every day.

The sea breeze is very strong these days. Dad can't catch any fish when he goes to the sea every day, and he almost dies. The children had to gnaw at Wowotou every day. Seeing that they wanted to eat so much, Sang Na gave his share to the children and had to starve himself.

In this way, the days passed day by day, and the children were seven or eight years old when they should go to school. However, due to malnutrition, the children looked very young, only five or six years old. The children are very sensible. Although they want to study, they know that the conditions at home are not good.

When Sang Na knew it, he threaded the picked-up waste newspaper and ordered a book for the children. The children were so happy that they almost went crazy. Finally, they had a book to read! ! Today is Sang Na's birthday. The children wanted to surprise their mother, so they went fishing in the sea with their father. What a coincidence, they caught five fat and big fish. In the evening, the family happily ate and chatted around the Xiao Mu table ... In this way, time passed and the family still endured a hard time.

2. composition network: xiaoshengchu composition: how to write continuation

1. what is continuation? let's find out what continuation is first.

continuation is to extend the content on the basis of the original story and become a complete article. Continued writing is a common "writing for materials", which is to continue to supplement the incomplete story and write a complete writing.

It helps to cultivate our ability of rational imagination, creative thinking and language expression. 2, the form of continuation from the form of continuation practice, there are two main types: one is to give the beginning of the story, and then ask to continue to write the plot and end of the story.

This is mostly the way to continue writing in the middle-grade Chinese exam questions. The other is to continue writing according to the main content and basic plot of an article, which is a way of continuing writing by combining reading and writing, and often requires writing a new story with different plots.

For example, after reading The Tortoise and Rabbit Race, I continued to write The Tortoise and Rabbit Race for the Second Time. The new story has some connection with the original story, but the center of the story has changed. This time, the rabbit learned the lesson and won successfully.

this kind of continuation should not only understand the main content and center of the original text, but also expand imagination, pay attention to maintaining a certain continuity and consistency with the original text, and be innovative. 3, continue to write common methods (1) expand imagination and reasonably speculate on the original content.

Imagining is to make reasonable inferences about the plot not written in the original story, open your mind, imagine from multiple angles, imagine several situations and results, and then choose from them. For example, in the fourth grade, there was a text "In the Rain", which wrote that in the evening rain, a girl overturned a laundry list of apples on the road, and the girl was extremely anxious.

The text only describes the scene on the road in the rain in the evening, and the scene where the girl overturned the laundry list. Many students wrote different articles.

Some continue to write stories about people extending a helping hand, praising the civilized wind of society. According to their own life experience, some wrote about the indifference of passers-by and reprimanded this practice.

Others wrote the story of a girl who reluctantly gave up picking apples in order not to block the traffic. The endings of these stories are reasonable, so that the continued articles will be rich in content and innovative.

(2) Take care of the front and back to prevent self-contradiction. Pay attention to the care before and after the continuation of writing to prevent contradictions.

especially for the continuation of the beginning, it must be closely related to the above to integrate the context. For example, in the article "An Unforgettable Event", the material given in the article is as follows: Whenever I see rain, an uncle will appear in my mind, and that event will also appear in my mind, which will make me unforgettable for a long time ... It was a summer day, and it rained cats and dogs after school. I stood at the school gate with a little girl and others.

it's getting late, and we're both anxious. At this time, a figure came running towards the school in the distance ... The students continued to write in various ways, and most of them read the contents of the materials and wrote that the uncle was the little girl's father.

After reasonable speculation, the story that this uncle saw my anxiety and took the initiative to walk, ride a bike, take a taxi or lend me his umbrella is consistent with the previous materials. However, some students wrote that my uncle was a bad guy, and I fought him bravely and successfully escaped from danger.

It seems reasonable to just look at the content of the continuation, but combined with the materials already given in the article, we will find that the content of the continuation is somewhat contradictory to the title and the beginning. This kind of struggle against bad guys should be thrilling or scary, but it is unlikely to be unforgettable for a long time, right? On the topic of physical education class, Wang Jun, a student from Class 5 (2), accidentally sprained his foot and couldn't move ... He asked to expand his imagination and continue to write a narrative according to the provided plot and his real life.

The title is After a sprained foot. 2. First determine the center of the composition, and write specific materials closely related to the center.

tip: in the face of ellipsis, we can arouse many imaginations. You can imagine Wang Jun's painful appearance at that time and the concern of teachers and students; I can imagine how teachers and students send him to hospital for treatment and how to send him home. You can also imagine how the students visited Wang Jun during his recuperation and how to help him make up lessons. You can also imagine how an unnamed driver can help the students take Wang Jun to the hospital; It is also conceivable that Wang Jun will not forget the class collective during his recuperation and contribute to the class ... There are too many imaginable contents! Students should grasp "after spraining their feet" to expand their reasonable imagination and will continue to write a good article.

When imagining, we must pay attention to "rationality", that is, we must conform to the reality of the plot given in the article and the reality of the students' lives. Unreasonably "making up" will violate the intention of practicing continuation.

to choose what kind of material, you must first determine the center of the article. Should we praise the friendship between classmates, praise the teacher's love for students, or reflect the true feelings of people in the tide of reform ... After the center is determined, imagine around the center, think specifically about the content related to the center, and write specifically.

[Continued] Wang Jun, a student from Class 5 (2) in physical education class, accidentally sprained her foot and couldn't move when she was practicing long jump. I saw him pointing to his right foot, biting his teeth and saying, "It hurts ... it hurts me to death."

too many cooks, a few tall and strong boys, slowly carried him out of the sandpit and carefully took off his shoes and socks. Ah, his ankle was swollen and bruised, and Wang Jun was sweating with pain. Everyone panicked at once, and some said, "Send it to the hospital quickly."

Some people said, "Call his parents quickly." More impatient students, come forward to * * * for him, very anxious to rub that big swollen bag down at once.

Just when everyone was in a hurry and anxious, Mr. P.E. Wang remained calm. He stopped giving it to Wang Jun's classmates and said to them, "Just sprained it, you must never move it. Listen to my arrangement: Feng Xu-go to the infirmary and ask the school doctor at once, and ask her to bring a roll of bandage; Xiao Peng-you are strong enough to carry Wang Jun to the pool. "

With the help of the teacher, Xiao Peng carefully carried Wang Jun to the pool. The students also gathered around.

While washing Wang Jun's sprained foot with cold water in the pool, the teacher told us that this was to prevent further blood stasis. After a while, Miss Li, the school doctor, came and tied Wang Jun's ankle tightly with a bandage.

The PE teacher also told us that this is to prevent swelling. 3. I want to be a good boy

Continuation of Dream-I want to be a good boy When I saw an article in the representative work specified in the scholarly class, I immediately remembered the book I want to be a good boy, which I loved very much. Without saying anything, I immediately entered the idea ...-Inscription When the closed school gate was opened, it was still very lively just now.

Some pat the child on the shoulder, some give him a smile, and some give him a hug. And Jin Ling's mother, Hui Zi, stretched out her fist and made a refueling action to Jinling, then turned and left.

Jin Ling, who is careless, has no pressure in her heart and smiles all over her face, is even less likely to take the "junior high school" exam, which is very important to many parents, compared with the serious candidates next to her. With the usual relaxed and elegant steps, Jin Ling entered the examination room.

In the examination room, Jin Ling saw pale Yang Xiaoli, and Jin Ling smiled and waved to him. The exam has begun.

first of all, the first course is to take a math test. This is also a subject that worries Jin Ling's mother, Hui Zi.

In fact, great changes have taken place in mathematics in Jin Ling now, which is also due to Grandma Sun. Since his mother discovered the secret between Jin Ling and Grandmother, Jin Ling met Grandmother again.

Of course, Grandma Sun didn't tell Jinling much, but just had fun with Jin Ling for more than two hours. With grandma Sun's words in mind, Jin Lingshun finished the math paper smoothly.

The next Chinese exam will be relatively easy for Jin Ling, not to mention the topic of this essay is "I want to tell my alma mater". In the face of such a topic that interested Jin Ling, she had already laughed her fat face out of sight.

Jin Ling is even happier when he gets to English. The knowledge of English in primary schools is already very simple. While Jin Ling's mother Hui Zi, who left the examination room at this time, hesitated to buy an old hen to stew for Jin Ling in the vegetable market.

If Jin Ling does well in the exam, the family will naturally be happy. But one thousand Jin Ling play disorder again, then there is no interest in eating. After thinking for a long time, Jin Ling's mother, Hui Zi, finally decided to buy a fat old hen.

After Jin Ling finished the exam, he checked his answers with his classmates, but he didn't find anything wrong. After returning home, Jin Ling told her parents about this situation. Jin Ling's mother, Hui Zi, happily kept putting meat in Jin Ling's bowl. At this moment, she didn't tell Jin Ling to control her diet and lose weight.

It's been three days since the exam. According to what Teacher Xing said that day, students will receive the admission notice after three days. I don't know how many times Jin Ling ran downstairs on this day, but every time he returned empty-handed.

there is nothing in the mailbox. Until the evening, Jin Ling took out a letter from the mailbox and gave it to his mother, who was already looking pale.

Jin Ling's mother, Huizi, opened it and hugged Jin Ling. It turned out that this was the admission notice of a key middle school. 4. Graduation composition in the sixth grade of primary school and continuation of The Poor

After Sang Na and the fisherman adopted two children from their female neighbor Simon, life became even more difficult. Every day, fishermen go out to catch enough fish; Sang Na has to take care of the food, clothing, housing and transportation of seven children every day. Although the children are very sensible, hard-working and obedient, Sang Na still has to work hard and is exhausted every day.

In this way, the days passed day by day, and Sang Na and the fisherman became poor day by day. Finally, on a cold morning, they were forced to sell their house and wander around with their seven children.

one day, they came to a big city. Along the way, it was cloudy, and no one helped their family. They were exhausted, sallow and emaciated. So, they went begging from house to house, but it was really terrible that people were either kicked out or splashed with water. Just then, an old man with a broken leg and a limp and white hair limped slowly over: "Good people, give alms, save me this poor old man!" " Sang Na couldn't help crying and said to the fisherman, "Husband, look at the hungry old man. Give him what we have left!" "This ..... this how line? We have nothing to eat, how can we give it to him? How about our seven children? " The husband said slowly, it seems that he can't decide yet. "Our child ... forget it ... just let it be ... never mind. This old man is too poor. After all, he is an old man. He has lived for most of his life and has to suffer from cold and hunger. How can this be?" Sang Na turned his head and said to the old man, "Come on, we only have this Ciba, you can take it!" The old man nodded, thanked him, and left in a hurry.

in the next few days, they had no clothes to wear, much less food. They think that as long as there is food, whether it is pig food or dog food, as long as they can eat it, they will be satisfied ... In this way, their family went hungry and froze for three days and three nights, and finally passed out on a snowy morning ...

"... Oh ..." Sang Na and the fisherman woke up, and they met the old man and a strong young man who begged them that day. It turned out that the old man was a rich man and wanted to find a kind-hearted housekeeper, so he disguised himself as a poor man to beg, and as a result he met them ...

In this way, Sang Na became the housekeeper of the rich man, and the family lived a happy and extremely happy life ... 5. Composition continuation

Chen Ming and I are very good friends.

one day, we took out the small wooden boat made in the handicraft group to play, and Chen Ming accidentally dropped my small wooden boat on the ground. During the argument, Chen Ming trampled it, and I was very angry. I grabbed his small wooden boat and shouted at him angrily, "Since you smashed my small wooden boat, I will make you pay the price."

As soon as the voice fell, I waved my hand and smashed Chen Ming's small wooden boat to the ground, only to find his boat smashed into two pieces. At this time, he was not to be outdone. His face was red, and he stepped on my boat and kicked it aside.

I shouted, "You have no right to do this to my boat." He immediately retorted, "Who told you to smash my boat? I didn't mean to smash your boat."

also, we had a terrible quarrel. If our classmates hadn't stopped us, we would have fought. When I got home, I threw my bag on the bed and lay on the sofa to calm down for a while.

But I can't stop thinking about the scene at that time, and the more I think about it, the angrier I get, and I think of my elaborate collection of countless wisdom and