Composition evaluation's Selected Works on Youth
1. Introduce the customs of Yongfeng in chronological order.
2. Can reflect the lively scene through concrete examples.
3. The details are appropriate and a festive atmosphere is written.
4. accurate words, vivid description, reflecting the traditional excitement and people.
5. Reflect the author's infinite happiness
6. While describing traditional customs, you can write your own unique feelings. negative comment
7. Inappropriate details, covering everything, keeping a running account, and having no focus.
8. Some customs are not specified.
9. I didn't write my own unique feelings
10. The language is dull and not vivid enough.
1 1. Confused and disorganized.
12. This article is a narrative narrative. The description of the event process is detailed and concrete, and although there are many contents, it appears orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and ability to plan the layout of the article. The materials are novel, the conception is wonderful, and the language is lively. Between the lines, it reveals a fresh breath of life and children's interest.
13. The author of this article has a novel and unique idea. Outside the window? Outside the mountain? Overseas? Arrive? Outside the heart? Layer by layer, from small to large, from personal reunion to the unification of national territory. Quote at the end of the article? But they are my body, and you still keep my inner soul! ? A lyric highlights our urgent desire for the reunification of the motherland.
14. This is a narrative article. With the help of my father's mouth, the author introduced us the origin and the author's determination to be a patriotic person like Qu Yuan. The language of the article is fluent, and it would be better if you could describe the psychological activities after listening to dad's introduction.
15. Unlike many people who praise Qu Yuan, the author has his own unique ideas. The author thinks that Qu Yuan is timid and his sacrifice is not worth it. His unique ideas and novel ideas can arouse readers' interest in reading. The article discusses that the language is well-founded and rich in literary talent.
16. The little author went out of the classroom to pay attention to life and wrote his feelings in traditional festivals from a unique perspective. Its language is fresh, lively and smooth, and the description of the action of making zongzi and the dialogue between characters is even more childlike. After reading the full text, the image of a lovely child jumped to the page.
17. This is a narrative, and the author narrates the matter of making zongzi. Point it out directly at the beginning of the article? Wrap zongzi? , cut to the chase, leads to the following narrative. The author described the process of making zongzi in detail. The author also quoted Du Fu's poems, adding literary grace to the article.
18. This is a descriptive article. Reading your article makes the teacher particularly moved, moved by dad's memory of grandma, and moved by your understanding. Between the lines of the article, I miss my grandmother. The full-text language is fluent, natural and vivid, and it is a good exercise.
19. This is a narrative article. The author uses the method of combining narrative and lyric to express the author's admiration and admiration for the heroes of the revolutionary predecessors. The language of the article is cordial and natural, and every sentence is full of the author's memory of the hero.
20. This article describes the beautiful scene of the first encounter with bamboo forest. The content of the article is substantial, the language is concise and concise, and the description of the scenery is particularly exquisite, which outlines a beautiful bamboo forest with beautiful artistic conception. The description of bamboo sound at the end of the article takes the article to another profound realm. That melodious and deep voice runs through my whole childhood and my whole life. ? Arouse readers' thinking about life.
Composition evaluation's recommendation on youth.
1. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.
2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.
3. Proper details, clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.
4. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and lifelike, the characters are distinctive and prominent, and the image is full and vivid.
5. Set off the mood of the characters with the environment, and the scene blends, and the situation is in the scene, and the scene is with the scene.
6. Rich in imagination, strange in conception, not divorced from the truth of life, and tied to the association of life, which broadens the reader's thinking and makes people feel lively and interesting.
7. The description of the scenery is vivid and lifelike, the words and sentences are appropriate and appropriate, and the scene is born with the feelings, and the scene is blended, which is like a vivid sketch painting presented to the readers.
8. Imagination is wonderful, which not only comes from life, but also surpasses life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.
9. The description of the event process is detailed and concrete. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and ability to plan the layout of the article.
10. The appearance is vivid and vivid, and the characters are lifelike and properly dressed, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality. What is the so-called? By life? .
1 1. The environment describes objectively and truly, and the environment serves the character, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the character.
12. The expression is vivid and vivid, with a few words, which outlines the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance, and the characters' manners and manners have distinct and unique personalities.
13. The content before and after the content is not closely related, some of the content is too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.
14. The narrative is brief and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.
15. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.
16. The content is mostly outlined by lines, and there is no point description.
17. It is out of keeping with the times, and the content is too old and outdated.
18. The theme is focused, the center is clear and the idea is clear.
19. The viewpoint is clear and the likes and dislikes are clear, which makes people clear at a glance.
20. The theme is directly highlighted in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
Excellent composition evaluation about youth
1. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it is like keeping a running account.
2. The process is detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. Unreasonable structure, giving people a tiger
3. the feeling of anticlimactic.
4. The idea is unreasonable, the content is full of loopholes, and it can't reflect the truth of life.
5. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast, which is not coherent enough.
6. Rhetorical metaphors are vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.
7. Appropriate use of comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.
8. Lose no time to use parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
9. Using personification skillfully, the objects in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, people's thoughts and feelings, and make them reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.
10. The selection of materials can choose themes with typical significance in life, and the events are more representative.
1 1. The material selection is novel and unique, without mediocrity, and it is refreshing.
12. Although the ordinary things are described, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is deep, which highlights the essence of the incident.
13. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.
14. The selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.
15. The selection of materials is too popular, not representative, old themes and old ideas.
16. It's plain.
17. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, due to
18. The analysis is not thorough, the excavation is not deep, and the hidden truth of the incident is not deeply reflected.
19. The material selection is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and not innovative, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.