Running all the way at high speed, I came to the zoo early. First of all, I saw a cute little monkey crawling around Monkey Mountain, playing around, really lively; This lazy bear is basking in the sun. I threw it a peach and it just caught it. It's really interesting. We saw the two-humped camel again. It's really like carrying a hill, so lifelike. Tall giraffes are quietly grazing, which looks like a sculpture from a distance; Hippos eat grass slowly there, which is really leisurely; Asian elephants are playing with grass with their noses. African elephants are very big. Their ears are bigger than my schoolbag. It's fun to spray water on their noses. Red and green macaws are still imitating me; The little orangutan stretched out his two front paws and asked the breeder's aunt to hug him, just like a baby looking for a mother to spoil. There is also an orangutan playing with his uncle, the keeper. The caretaker's uncle turned it around and put it down. Just after he put it down, the two hind paws of the little orangutan reached into his uncle's hand again, and he wanted to play. It's really interesting. Zebras drink water there, and the stripes are picturesque; The tiger walked up and down the mountain as if thinking about something; It's terrible that the lion sticks out its claws; Sea lions swim around in the pool; An ostrich's legs are higher than mine, and its feet have two separate toes. This is the first time I have seen such a big bird in the world. I also saw egrets, golden monkeys, jackals, peacocks, vultures, swans, takins, antelopes, golden pheasants and pandas. ...
There are countless animals in Jinan Zoo. How much!
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Winter-Jinan-here we come! Everybody be quiet. Let me introduce myself first-my name is Fu, and I am the tour guide who came to Jinan this time. During this trip, my friends must pay attention to safety and follow my instructions. Finally, I wish you all a good meal, a good drink and a good time! Where's your applause?
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Passengers, Jinan, where we went this time, is a very unique place. Compared with Beijing, he has no news; Compared with London, it is sunny; Compared with the tropics, he is warm and gentle. The landscape of Jinan is very unique!
The scenery in Jinan is very beautiful. Let me introduce you to the Mimiao Mountain first. Jinan fell asleep peacefully under the touch of sunshine. They put Jinan in this little cradle. The baby in Jinan is very quiet. The hills in the thin snow are also very attractive. Look at those mountains that have been dressed by Sister Xue. They are all very beautiful. Not only that, kind Sister Xue also gave Shan Ge a floral dress with waterline, which shows that they get along well with each other. What about us?
Ok, let's talk about the water behind the mountain. Speaking of the water in Jinan, three words are left: green! Safe. Blue! That water won't freeze even in winter. Those green duckweeds, seaweed and weeping willows have all contributed their green savings all year round; The water is so clear that you can see reflections in the air, mid-air and sky. The water is as clear as crystal. This is really hard to predict!
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Passengers, our destination has arrived. Let's walk into Jinan and get close to Jinan! Let's enjoy ourselves! Let's go
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Close your eyes in Jinan after 20 years. We are going to time and space in 2029. Strange, no, is this Jinan?
Here, as long as you put the water on the large water dispenser, it will clean and filter the water in 0.005438+0 seconds. Look at the cars on the road again. Hey, what is this strange thing? There is a small square device at the back of every car. Oh, it's collecting automobile exhaust. After recycling, it is returned to the chemical plant and then used for production, effectively avoiding environmental pollution. I took a deep breath of fresh air, and there was a faint fragrance in the air. It turns out that the hibiscus trees on both sides of the road are in full bloom, so beautiful! There is a rectangular wooden box next to the trash can. I saw a child throw a waste battery in and roll out a new battery from a small opening. It turns out that this is a waste battery. The battery can be reused and will not be discarded, polluting the environment. Blue sky, straight roads, carefree traffic and fresh air environment, isn't this the environment of Jinan that you and I yearn for in 20 years?
Open your eyes, relax and take a deep breath. Is that a good time/do you want to do it again? Is your heart about to jump out with excitement? /Then you'll have to bite the bullet and wait for the next time.
Bye. Goodbye!
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Ji 'nan Customs Ji 'nan Customs
Lantern Festival The fifteenth day of the first lunar month, commonly known as "Lantern Festival", is also called "Lantern Festival". In Jinan, the annual Lantern Festival is extremely spectacular. On this day, it is popular for every household to eat Yuanxiao. In addition, around the Lantern Festival, the streets and alleys of Jinan are full of stilts, roller coasters, dragon lanterns and lions.
"Dragon Head Up" is the Spring Dragon Festival on the second day of the second lunar month, commonly known as "Dragon Head Up", which means that the dragon is prosperous and controls the rain, and the weather is good. All the men and children have their hair cut to see the spirit and avoid disaster.
Every year on the Double Ninth Festival in the summer calendar, people climb mountains in Qianfo Mountain and stand on the "Chrysanthemum Appreciation Rock" to enjoy chrysanthemums. There are also folk art groups inside and outside the province performing acrobatics, circus, songs and dances at the temple fair, which are crowded and lively.
Let's talk about eating after the holiday first. People in Jinan have the custom of eating lotus petals. Among them, "fried lotus petals" is a famous dish unique to Jinan in summer. Wash fresh, complete and clean lotus petals, hang a thin layer of egg paste, fry in oil pan, sprinkle with white sugar after frying, and eat in your mouth. They are delicious, memorable and deeply loved by people.
"Sweet and sour Yellow River carp" is a traditional dish in Jinan, Shandong Province. The north of Jinan is close to the Yellow River, so the carp used for cooking is the Yellow River carp. This kind of fish grows in the deep water of the Yellow River, with golden head and tail, smooth scales and tender flesh, and is a good food at the banquet.
Oil swirl is a famous traditional food in Jinan. Because it looks like a spiral, the surface is moist and golden yellow, so it is named oil spiral. Its skin is crisp, the pulp inside is tender, and the onion smells delicious, which many people like to eat.
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I visited Jinan Zoo on National Day. My parents and I came to Jinan Zoo. There were so many people there that I could hardly breathe. Of course, animals are indispensable in the zoo. Look: monkeys, tigers, kangaroos and giraffes. ...........................................................................................................................................................
We first came to Monkey Mountain. A naughty monkey is playing leisurely on the swing. Suddenly, he rolled forward and jumped on the rockery. He also scratched his face to make everyone laugh. When I walked forward, I saw a tiger. I saw the tiger circling in the cage, his eyes shining faintly and scanning everyone from time to time. I can't help thinking of an idiom-eyeing.
We have come to the bird paradise again, where there are many birds, including swans, pigeons and peacocks ... Look: pride is like peacocks here, colorful feathers are flapping and doing some beautiful actions for everyone.
Finally, we took a cave car. This cave is dark and dark. There are many fake snakes and monsters in it. The whole body was covered with colorful light bulbs, which scared me to close my eyes and get out of the hole. I just opened my eyes when a monster bent down at me. I let out a cry, ah, I finally got out of the hole.
In the afternoon, we reluctantly left the zoo. Along the way, I have been recalling this interesting and exciting trip to the zoo.
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Summer Composition-Visit Jinan and Daming Lake
After the summer vacation, I can travel again. The destination of this trip is Jinan, Shandong. The first stop is Daming Lake.
The scenery of Daming Lake is no worse than that of the Summer Palace and Baiyangdian. This is my feeling after visiting Daming Lake. Stepping into the gate, a faint fragrance came face to face, and the breeze brushed my face, which was refreshing. While I was immersed in the fragrance, a butterfly covered with snow flew past me. I really wanted to catch it, so I followed it. Although the butterfly flew away, I also ran to the lake as a blessing in disguise.
When I arrived at the lake, I suddenly couldn't help but pick up the camera and kept patting the lake. It turns out that the scenery of the lake is so beautiful: part of the lake has been covered with lotus flowers and lotus leaves. If it weren't for the facilities in front, I think the whole Daming Lake would be covered with lotus flowers and lotus leaves! On the green lotus leaf, there are tender pink lotus flowers, and the flowers are also varied; Some are in full bloom, while others are still in bud ... This is only a small part of Daming Lake, and the real fun is yet to come.
Left the "Lotus Pond", took a cruise and headed for the center of the lake. It is a pleasure to sit on a boat and watch the boats drifting in the water, overlooking the green lake and looking up at the white clouds in the sky; On the other hand, it is also a pleasure to shoot the scenery such as Lixia Pavilion and Tiegong Temple.
Happy times are always short. I'm leaving Daming Lake, and I really can't bear to leave. Goodbye, Daming Lake!
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On National Day, my parents and I came to Jinan Zoo. I saw a sea of people there, so crowded that I couldn't breathe. Of course, animals are indispensable in the zoo. Look: monkeys, tigers, kangaroos, giraffes ... one game after another is very interesting.
We first came to Monkey Mountain. A naughty monkey is swinging leisurely on the swing. Suddenly, it rolled forward, jumped on the rockery, scratched its head and made faces, which made everyone laugh. Walking forward, I saw the tiger. I saw the tiger circling in the cage, his eyes shining faintly and scanning everyone from time to time. I can't help thinking of an idiom-eyeing.
We have come to the bird paradise again, where there are many birds, including swans, pigeons and peacocks ... Look: pride is like peacocks here, colorful feathers are flapping, and some beautiful dances are shown to everyone.
Finally, we took a cave car. This cave is dark and dark. There are many fake snakes and monsters in it. The whole body was covered with colorful light bulbs, which scared me to close my eyes and get out of the hole. I just opened my eyes when a monster bent down at me. I let out a cry, ah, I finally got out of the hole.
In the afternoon, we reluctantly left the zoo. Along the way, I have been recalling this interesting and exciting trip to the zoo.
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Winter in Jinan Have you ever seen winter in Jinan? If not. Let me show you around Jinan today! If you ask me what is the difference between winter in Jinan and winter here, I will tell you without hesitation. It's more beautiful there, and what's more strange is that it's sunny there. If you want to know more, let me take you into the winter in Jinan!
Jinan, a beautiful and elegant place, is very beautiful for the winter there. Don't be surprised that there is no wind in Jinan in winter. It is still sunny there, but don't think it is the same as ours. In the north of China, it is unusual for the weather to be sunny in winter.
In winter, if there is a little light snow, the dwarf pine will shine on the mountain. If there is a few snows on the dark dwarf pine, it is like a white flower on the top of the tree. Seen from a distance, the whole mountain is completely white. On the hillside, some snow is a little thick, and the grass on the ground sticks out a small head, as if curious about the beautiful winter in Jinan. Let's have a look.
In this ancient Jinan, the inner and outer cities are so narrow and spacious, and there are still several villages living on the mountain. You see, there are a few pieces of white snow floating on the roof, white and black, as if there is a beautiful mountain and river map painted by a famous person. It's beautiful!
The river in the middle not only does not freeze, but also flows slowly there. You can vaguely see the shiny green algae in the river. It's winter in Jinan.
Winter in Jinan is so beautiful, strange and curious.
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I love my hometown in winter in Jinan. In my impression, winter is full of fun. I like to walk on the thick snow after a heavy snow, and my feet make a "crunching" sound. That rhythm is the most beautiful movement in the world. "Catch" the snowflake with your tongue and let it melt slowly in your mouth. That kind of feeling is cool, moist, sweet and refreshing. But this year is different from previous years.
This winter, there is no usual heavy snow, no children playing with snow and laughing, only a little light snow, not as much as last year's snow, which makes people feel sorry. I remember last year, our school organized a snow show. We ran like a group of crazy monkeys on the playground, enjoying the fun of snow. The girls sat there gracefully, quietly making snowmen and making "ice sculptures". The boys can't get over it. They grabbed the snow on the ground, rolled it into snowballs and threw it at the target he was looking for. If they hit a boy, the two of them would grin and fight. Gradually, the boys calmed down. I think of myself as a cannonball, snowballing from the ground. Soon, I rolled bigger than basketball. Because of the need of "war", I have to give my treasure as a bullet to them. We are still playing. ...
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Jinan, my hometown.
My hometown is in Jinan, Shandong, where the air is fresh and the four seasons are distinct. I love my hometown.
In spring, everything recovers, the ice and snow melt, the peach blossom shows her little red face, and the grass emerges from the thick white quilt. When spring comes, the children take off their thick cotton-padded clothes and come out to play. Many people fly kites on Hero Mountain, which is full of infinite vitality.
In summer, Daming Lake is full of lotus flowers, frogs jump off the lotus leaves, and the park is full of colorful Chinese rose flowers, which are very beautiful. At this time, my mother will buy me a lot of lotus leaves, which our whole family likes to eat.
Autumn, autumn is crisp, the blue sky is dotted with white clouds, like a mass of cotton, floating in the air. In this season, I see the bright moon on the Mid-Autumn Festival night; I saw beautiful autumn chrysanthemums in the park; I saw the geese flying south neatly; I saw the leaves turn yellow and fall from the tree.
As winter approaches, the yellow leaves on the trees float down. The cold wind was biting, and the goose feather-like snowflakes covered the earth with a layer of silver. I made a snowman, had a snowball fight and skied with my parents. I took many photos of the snow scene and had a good time. We also made a snowman on the plate and took it home. I took a picture with the snowman. It is interesting to snow in winter.
I think my hometown is really beautiful!
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