2. Ask for a composition. Xin Qiji was an outstanding patriotic poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, and Broken Array is one of his representative works. Judging from the title, it was given to my friend Chen Liang to express my ambition to resist gold. Chen Liang's name is Fortis and she is a famous lover. Both Xin Qiji and Chen Liang belong to hawks and are persecuted by capitulationists. 1 18, Chen Liang visited a pair of like-minded comrades Xin Qiji in Daihu, had a heart-to-heart talk and expressed his ambition of the Northern Expedition. After that, they wrote lyrics and sang together. This article was written after meeting the lake, which expressed my strong feelings and encouraged it.
This paper uses the combination of romanticism and realism to express one's ambition and anger. The poet cast his patriotism and loyalty to the monarch in this lyrical chapter full of spirits, generosity and sadness. The word "Zhuang Ci" is strong because it vividly depicts the strength, military ability and heroism of the anti-gold troops and expresses the heroic heart. "Drunk to see the sword, dream back to the corner." The first two sentences blend together, and I can't help feeling. These two sentences closely follow the word "Zhuang" and are a portrayal of real life. At this time, the poet resigned and lived in seclusion, but when he witnessed state affairs, he was worried and had a lump in his chest, so he had to pour it with wine. The poet was drunk, turned on the light and carried his beloved sword affectionately. "Pick the Lamp" and "Looking at the Sword" are about action and expression. The red light of the lamp and the cold light of the sword want to blend with each other and convey a unique heroic atmosphere. From this heroic atmosphere, we can see how urgent the poet's desire to fight against the enemy in the shadow of swords and swords is! The actions of "holding the lamp" and "looking at the sword" truly show the poet's inner depression at this time, and through these, the poet seems to have returned to the battlefield that made him dream day and night and the unforgettable years. In a state of drunkenness, the hero fell asleep and woke up, and the horns calling soldiers out to kill the enemy sounded in various barracks. "Dream Back to Blowing Horn Camp" has rendered high morale and high morale.
"Light a fire in eight hundred miles and turn over in fifty strings." It means: the officers and men share roast beef, and the military band plays a magnificent battle song. "800 Li" is another name for cattle. "The Newspeak? Waste: There is a love cow named "800 Li Jiao" in Wang Kai. Later generations used "800 Li" to refer to cattle. " Subordinate "means subordinate. "Fifty strings" refers to various musical instruments. Turn to "play." The Voice of the Great Wall is a magnificent and sad battle song with frontier fortress as its theme. These two sentences further exaggerate the fighting atmosphere in the army. The troops are well supplied, and the officers and men share weal and woe. The military band played magnificent battle songs to stimulate fighting spirit. We clearly see that in the mighty military camp, the axe and halberd stand upright and point directly at the sky; Flags fluttered and rattled; The men's armor is shining, and they are all heroic. How spectacular and warm this scene is! "Autumn Soldiers on the Battlefield" makes people feel the great military strength of this team with high morale. Autumn is a good time to kill the enemy with soldiers. The army is being reviewed on the battlefield and ready for a long journey. In just five words, he vividly wrote a magnificent lineup, reproduced the image of the poet before the war, and made an excellent summary of the above situation, which was forceful.
The next film closely follows the words of the previous one and pushes * * * to the peak. "The horse's road is fast and the bow is like a thunderbolt." These two sentences mean that the hero rides Lu's fast horse, holds a powerful bow and arrow, flies to the battlefield and kills the enemy bravely. Drew is the name of a good horse. According to Shi Shuo Xin Yu, Liu Bei was killed in Xiangyang, and Lu took him out of danger in January. Later, people used "deer" to describe a good horse. "Thunderbolt" is a metaphor for thunder. These two sentences use two metaphors together, which makes us feel as if Liu Xun's horse is galloping forward, with a strong bow and an arrow like a thunderbolt. A battle scene covered with dust and gold drums is vividly on the paper. Patriotic soldiers are at the forefront, and their invincible heroism is as vivid as it is now. This is a further contrast between Zhuang Ci's strong scenery and the further growth of Zhuang Ci's strong meaning.
"I have done everything in the world, and I have won a reputation before I die." "What's going on in the world" refers to the great cause of recovering lost territory and reunifying the motherland. "Fame before one's death" refers to the reputation left before one's death to build a country with immortal feats for the motherland and the nation, and patriotism permeates between the lines. These two sentences mean that the poet saw the success and was full of ambition, thus giving a happy cheer, even with a relaxed and dignified tone, which made the feelings of the word rise to the highest point.
At the end of the sentence, "It's a pity that things are in vain", and the pen tip turns sharply, which makes the feelings plummet from the highest point, expresses the infinite feelings of hard-to-reward ambition, reveals the sharp opposition between ideal and reality, and expresses the grief and indignation of serving the country wholeheartedly and asking for help, which makes the whole word cage full of sadness. This sentence echoes the first sentence from a distance, describes the feelings of real life, is in sharp contrast with the dream, and effectively shows the grief and indignation of serving the country.
This "Zhuang Ci" is magnificent and impassioned. From the structural point of view, the concept is strange and the structure is also strange. It broke the traditional way of lyrics, the first one described the scenery, and the second one expressed emotions. Except that the first sentence and the second sentence are about reality, the middle is about dreams, and the film remains the same. Dreams are magnificent, but reality is sad; The dream was written heartily, pushing patriotism, loyalty to the monarch and a person's lofty aspirations to the apex, and the sentence fell down at once. In the sharp contrast between dream and reality, it gives vent to a cavity of grief and indignation that is hard to be rewarded.
3. Expand the ancient poetry into an 800-word article "Miss My Shandong Brothers on Mountain Holidays" (rewritten). One morning, I was a guest in a strange place alone and felt very lonely.
Every time I meet a holiday, I miss my family more. I am in a distant place, thinking that my brother, sister and brother must climb every mountain.
I wish I could climb every mountain. I really want to find my brothers at once and climb the mountain with them.
But I saw my brothers standing on high places, holding beautiful dogwood. Without me alone, my brothers climbed up happily. "To Wang Lun" This is also an article: In the spring morning, the sky in Wan Li, Wan Li is cloudless and blue as wash. I bid farewell to my good friend Wang Lun and boarded the ship that was about to leave.
I stood at the bow and looked into the distance. I saw the beautiful blue sky, the breeze blew, and I could smell an intoxicating peach blossom fragrance. At this time, a group of waterfowl "croaked" hovering on the water.
Ah! Waterbirds also know the feeling of parting! I was intoxicated with this beautiful scenery when I suddenly heard a crisp and sweet song from the shore. Ah, this is Wang Lun's affectionate farewell song! Listen, Wang Lun is walking and singing with the beat. It's getting closer. Ah! This song is full of parting feelings.
It's Wang Lun who has had a heart-to-heart talk with me these days. It was Wang Lun who accompanied me to see the scenery late at night; It was Wang Lun and I who discussed the meaning of life together. It is Wang Lun who drinks and writes poems with me under the lamp at night. Ah! "Come on friends.
Come, let's shake hands again and say a few words of confidence. "Ship, set sail.
Ah! Friend, dear friend, you waved to me outside, and I waved to you. Ah, although the pool is as deep as thousands of feet, it can't be compared with your deep affection for me. Supplementation, Clever Guidance and Arousing Imagination —— The expansion of ancient poetry China is known as a country of poetry, and ancient poetry can be said to be a treasure left over from the long history of China culture.
Its language is concise and highly concentrated, but its content is quite heavy: astronomy, geography, customs, everything. Reading and accumulating ancient poems can not only develop students' imagination, accumulate students' sense of language, but also consolidate students' cultural heritage.
Expanding the writing of ancient poetry can not only deepen the understanding of ancient poetry, but also stimulate students' interest in reading. After several years of teaching and scientific research practice, the author thinks that the key to guiding the development of ancient poetry is to guide students' imagination through various channels, and then make it formal and written on this basis.
Arousing imagination can be carried out in the following three aspects: 1. Excavate empty space. The art of imaginary poetry is blank to some extent: the blank of story plot, the blank of character description, the blank of psychological activity, the blank of thoughts and feelings, the blank of philosophy and so on. Teachers guide students to grasp and explore these gaps. According to the five categories of poetry: narrative expression, landscape description, emotional expression, philosophical sublimation and comprehensive tolerance, students can imagine images in class, activate their thinking, cultivate their creativity and lay the foundation for expanding their writing.
1. Seize the "image blank" and imagine some ancient poems not laying out direct narration, but pursuing the interesting style outside the poem by sketching or hitting the point. The images depicted in poems are often not detailed and obscure, leaving teachers and students to supplement their imagination and create an ethereal and rich artistic realm.
Such as "Village Residence" (the grass grows in February and the willows are drunk with spring smoke. The children came back from school early, so they were busy flying kites in the east wind. )
What's this kite like? What did the children say? What was the situation then? How beautiful is "the grass grows and the warblers fly" and "the willow blossoms are bright and the spring smoke is drunk"? What other sights might there be on this February day? Wait a minute, this poem is not carved out of details. Teachers can grasp these "image gaps" and guide students to expand their reasonable imagination and supplement details.
2. Stick to the "emotional blank" and imagine that "emotion will lead to resignation". In the development teaching of ancient poetry, teachers should pay attention to displaying artistic conception, so that readers and poets can feel the same.
Language is a tool to express feelings, but some complex, subtle and radical feelings cannot be directly expressed, thus setting an emotional gap for readers. For example, in Boarding Guazhou, the poet Wang Anshi used the scene of "Spring Breeze and Green Jiang Nanan" to express the feelings of "when the moon shines on me".
What is the scene of Jiangnan in Chun Lv? Spring is full, which is pleasing to the eye. How can a poet reveal the melancholy of when to return home? What was his psychological activity at that time? What is the image like? Both teachers and students described the poet's depression and homesickness, and his worries about the failure of political reform and the uncertain future through "blank" imagination. 3. Imagining the philosophy in ancient poetry around the "philosophical blank" often lies in the image, and its "blank" zone is wider.
Teachers should enlighten students, let them feel the inside story of poetry and make appropriate associations. Zheng Xie's Bamboo Stone is an ancient poem with profound philosophy, and the author's original intention is to "make people think and know".
This requires teachers to guide students to appreciate the poem, imagine the scene of bamboo "indomitable, let the northeast wind blow", and then guide students to contact life, so as to refine and sublimate from the image of the poem into a universal philosophy: whether you are determined or studying, you must "stick to the green hills and not relax", and it is easy to persevere when you lock your goals. In teaching, students will appreciate the true meaning of poetry as long as teachers pay attention to excavating the deep connotation of poetry and recreating imagination.
Second, with the help of audio-visual media, imagine that "reason lies in poetry, such as salt in water, honey in flowers, and the body is hidden and beautiful." For primary school students who are not deeply involved in the world and lack life experience and literary understanding ability, it is really not an easy task to experience sex and interest in Hidden Corpse and Yuan Mark.
To deeply understand the artistic conception of poetry and the poet's feelings, teachers need to build a bridge across this gap. In the development teaching of ancient poetry, making full use of audio-visual media, carefully designing teaching links, optimizing teaching process and enhancing the intuition, image and vividness of teaching can perfectly show the artistic charm of ancient poetry, stimulate students' interest in learning ancient poetry and improve the development level of ancient poetry.
1. It is very artistic to create a poetic scene and stimulate the imagination of ancient poetry. In the development teaching of ancient poetry, teachers should pay attention to creating situations, so that students can experience the poet's emotions through their specific perception of the situation. Multimedia has the characteristics of sound and shape blending, dynamic and static combination and strong appeal. Multimedia teaching can transform words into images and abstract into shapes.
When writing a 300-word composition during the exam, everyone is afraid, and the time I am most afraid of is after the exam. After the exam, I always worry about my grades and whether I can get into the top ten. Mother is worried enough about her brother's grades. I don't want to add a few strands of silver to her hair because of myself. So after every exam, I always worry about my grades. ...
Two days after the mid-term exam, it was really like a year for me. I finally got through those two days, and Monday arrived. I thought I could know my grades, but I haven't changed some subjects yet, and I feel inexplicably disappointed. Knowing my Chinese grades, I looked at the paper in my hand. Why are there so many mistakes? Why is the score so low? What is wrong with me? Can I still make the top ten? May I? May I? ..... Followed by English scores, speaking high is not high, speaking low is not very low, and compared with the highest grade, I found myself far behind. At this point, the fear hidden in my heart has spread slowly and quietly.
Later, when I learned about my grades in other subjects except those I didn't change, my fear grew stronger and stronger, and I couldn't get rid of it, as if I had taken a deep root somewhere in my heart. My heart ached when my classmates cheered for their good results in the exam.
When the papers of all subjects were corrected, to my surprise, my score was getting higher and higher, and I was actually the second in my class. At this time, my fear was swept away and replaced by a strong belief. ...
A few days later, at the award ceremony, when I saw many outstanding students taking pictures there with golden awards, this belief became more firm and prompted me to study hard and make progress every day.
5. How to develop Don't Move Big into a composition of more than 600 words? One day in the Tang Dynasty, Dong, a guqin master who was left out in the palace in Chang 'an, went to a mountain forest in the outer suburbs. The west wind blows, a flock of geese scream alone, Huang Yun rolls in the sky, and heavy snow falls in succession.
"What a sad atmosphere!" Dong can't help but sigh.
"Dong Xiong walk slowly!" At this time, there was a cry behind Dong. He turned around and saw that it was his good friend Gao Shi. Gao Shi took Dong by the hand and pulled him into a nearby "Fulai Inn".
"Xiao er, serve wine!" The normal university shouted to the bartender, "Give us a pot of good daughter red and let's have a good drink!" " "Gao Shi took Dong's hand and smiled and said," Brother Dong, you see the weather is really bad today. It is snowing in Huang Yun. I think you'd better go tomorrow! "
"yes! The north wind is blowing geese and it is snowing heavily. Actually, I don't want to go! However, I can't leave! "
"Why?"
"Because I play the guqin without a bosom friend, now everyone loves to listen to Le Hu. What's the use of me staying here?" Dong let out a long sigh again.
"So you are the famous guqin master Dong! I like listening to your guqin. You play the guqin much better than Le Hu. Last time you played guqin for all of us in Huangchenggen, we really enjoyed it! " At this time, the wine guarantee sent a pot of daughter red, and when I heard their conversation, I was surprised to say.
"Yes, Dong Xiong, Xiao Er is right. You used to be a famous Guqin teacher. Without your intimate friends, you shouldn't worry about the road ahead. You know, people all over the world appreciate you! In fact, some people seem to like music tigers on the surface, but that doesn't mean they don't like guqin in their hearts! " Gao Shi stopped Xiao Er and continued to persuade him.
After listening to Gao Shi and Xiao Er, Dong nodded thoughtfully: "Thank you for your words, I have already figured it out! By the way, brother Gao, what are your plans in the future? "
Gao Shi raised his glass: "Come on, Dong Xiong, let's drink three cups!" " "
It's snowing harder outside. Dong told Gao Shi that he planned to go back to his hometown and live an ordinary life. Gao Shi said that he wanted to walk around, see all the famous mountains in the world, and write poems and draw pictures.
It was getting late, and when they left the Fulai Inn, they saw Dong riding a big horse. Gao Shi can't help but feel a tight heart. He grabbed Dong's skirt and said sadly, "It's still different to send you a thousand miles away. Let me give you a poem! Take care of yourself! " After that, he recited this well-known poem "Don't Move Big" loudly: "Thousands of miles away in Huang Yun, the sun is shining, and the north wind is blowing geese and snow. Mochow has no confidant in the road ahead, and no one in the world knows you. "
After listening to Dong's words, my nose turned sour and a stream of tears came down. He quickly waved his whip and said to Gao Shi, "Take care!" I rode away at a gallop.
Huang Yun is densely covered in the sky. With the sound of hooves, there is only dim light on the ground.
Comments: This composition, which rewrites ancient poems, vividly writes the scene of the poet Gao Shi saying goodbye to his good friend Dong in the form of stories. The sentences are beautiful, and the artistic conception of ancient poems is far away, which deserves our careful taste.
6. About Du Fu's composition, climb Du Fu in about 800 words.
The wind is fast and high, the ape cries sadly, and the birds are circling in the white sand.
The endless trees are rustling leaves, and the Yangtze River is rolling unpredictably.
Li in the sad autumn scenery, a wanderer all the year round, lives alone on the high platform in today's illness.
After all the hardships and hatred, the white hair is full, and the wine glasses are damaged.
This autumn is particularly bleak. The sky is high and the clouds are light, and the autumn wind is eager to reunite with friends. And I, standing on the top of the mountain watching all this, feel the chill of autumn. The river in the distance is crystal clear, and groups of people fly back to the beach at low altitude and snuggle up to each other. I am the only one, listening to the cries of apes telling endless worries for me. Looking up, the leaves withered bit by bit, and it fell one by one, silently. But it was rolled up by the ruthless autumn wind, endless, until it disappeared into my sight. Bow your head, the Yangtze River keeps flowing, the river is rolling, surging, splashing and moving forward. Who knows if there is an end, and if anyone feels the same way as me? I wander alone thousands of miles away and live in other places all the year round. I can only look up at the Mid-Autumn Festival and get drunk just to forget loneliness. Since my old age, my health is getting worse every day. I am lucky to climb the mountain alone today. The hardships of the times and life make my sideburns pale as frost. But who can understand? Now when it comes to wine, you can only stop at your mouth. My body can't stand it anymore, and I can't drink even the worst wine ... Now, on this mountain, looking at the vast and empty scenery and bleak autumn, my heart hurts. This sad and lonely heart, alas ...
This autumn is particularly bleak. The sky is high and the clouds are light, and the autumn wind is eager to reunite with friends. I stood on the top of this mountain, watching all this and feeling the chill of autumn. The river in the distance is crystal clear, and groups of people fly back to the beach at low altitude and snuggle up to each other. I was alone, listening to the ape's cry and telling my heart.
7. It's amazing to ask for an expanded article.
-expanding "offer a humble apology"
Caihe No.2 Primary School Education Group Caihe Campus 60 1 Xie
teacher
Lu
Outside the window, the breeze blew, Song Hai Tao Tao. From time to time, there was a burst of birdsong in the tree, which was pleasant to hear.
Lian Po paced back and forth in the room, uneasy. Recalling what his wife and children said to him last night: "Lin Shangqing, the reason why I avoided you was for the national interest. What do you think? "
Lian Po knew the implication of his wife and children's words and stopped talking. However, this unforgettable sentence deeply shocked his heart.
He stopped endless steps, sat down, picked up the teacup, sipped his tea, closed his eyes, took a deep breath and thought carefully.
Indeed, Lin Xiangru can get where he is today, not only because of his glib tongue, but also because of his wit, courage and overall situation. He can put the national interest above everything else. But I, ... shouldn't, shouldn't compete with him for fame and fortune. If it weren't for ShangQing's generosity, maybe Qin would have taken advantage of people's crisis. And I, in order to fight for status, neglected the country. How do I face the prince of Zhao, the people, Shangqing and myself? Do I deserve this shirt?
At the thought of this, Lian Po regretted it; Heart, suddenly suddenly enlightened.
He went to the windowsill and looked at the blue sky through the cracks in the trees, very high, very high; Just like his mood now. Suddenly, he looked at the birds flying freely in the forest, as if he thought of something and decided something.
Suddenly, he resolutely untied his belt and took off his shirt, which he regarded as the honor of his life. A lifetime of honor, which contains the brilliant achievements of Lian Po's life!
But now Lian Po seems to have forgotten those things and still ignores the dissuasion of his family. He hung his clothes around his waist and was naked. Jing, with sharp thorns, is deeply embedded in the meat. At the moment, Lian Po is so old and solemn, with a black back and a drop of warm liquid flowing downwards with the branches. But Lian Po completely ignored it and went to Lin Xiangru's house. He will use his own blood to wash away his mistakes; He wants to make Zhao more prosperous with his own blood.
The sun is high overhead and shining brightly.
Lian Po walked through the streets, surrounded by people who were talking in astonishment. But then, I was filled with infinite admiration for the general's integrity! Tears rolled down and applause lasted for a long time.
At the moment, Lin Xiangru is sitting at home and having a rest, but suddenly he hears General Lian kneeling at the door, offering a humble apology. I was surprised, but on second thought, I smiled with relief.
He hurried out of the door. Lian Po at this time, carrying Vitex negundo, hands fuels, kneeling under the steps. Amazing! Amazing! Men have gold under their knees. Such a talented, tall and stubborn general actually knelt down! But now a kneeling, kneeling out of dignity; Now, when kneeling, let the civil servants and military attache hold hands; Now, kneel down, and all living things in the world will be moved by it.
Lin Xiangru hurriedly hands to help Lian Po, invited him in.
"Shang Qing, please forgive me for offending you!"
……
From then on, the two men became friends who talked about everything and worked together in Qi Xin.
With one heart and one mind, bring peace and stability to the country. (Author's Note: Children don't have a deep understanding of history, and there are some flaws. )
8. spread the composition from grade six to grade one. The happiness of 700 butterflies is to have a pair of colorful wings; The happiness of flowers is to give off a fragrant smell; The happiness of the sea is to collect sunshine ... My happiness is to live happily with my family.
Happiness is as ubiquitous as air. Dad brought me happiness.
Dad snores loudly at night, and I'm a little annoyed. However, I can't help feeling guilty when I think that my father goes out early and comes back late every day and tries to make money just to make my mother and I live better.
From my father's snoring, I heard the sound of happiness. My mother brought me happiness.
I failed in the exam, and my mother didn't scold me, but patiently analyzed the reasons for the wrong questions and taught me to remember the mistakes. Never doing it again in the future is the greatest progress. Every night, my mother and I study together. Sometimes, she can't help yawning in order to dictate words to me.
Looking at my mother's haggard face, I saw happiness. Grandma always brings me a small cake when she picks me up, for fear that I will be hungry after school.
I eat the cake bit by bit. I tasted happiness from a small cake.
Happiness is a euphemistic song; Happiness is an intriguing painting; Happiness is a warm and soft poem; Happiness is a bridge to communicate family ties ... Happiness is a special kind of love, which makes me learn to be happy and grateful.