At this time, if you think the author's result is different from your own favorite result, you can write down the reasons why you like your own result, so that you can become a comment, and you can also write a sequel yourself, and write some reasonable plots behind the original story to make your desired result come true. If someone else wrote the sequel, when the result he wrote is the same as what you want, you can write why it is such a result when reading this story, that is, analyze the thoughts of the person who wrote the sequel, which is of course your own thoughts.
When someone else writes a sequel that is different from the result you want, you should tell me what's wrong with his writing like that, and explain why you think the result is better than him, that is, why you should take the result you think as the result.
2. Continue to write comments on the small wooden boat. Chen Ming and I are good friends.
One day, we took out the small wooden boat made by the handcraft team to play, and Chen Ming accidentally damaged my boat. In the argument, Chen Ming trampled on it again.
I was flushed with anger. I grabbed his little wooden boat and slammed it on the ground. I stepped on it and said angrily, "I stepped on it, stepped on it, stepped on it ..." Chen Ming touched the small wooden boat sadly ... After that, we didn't speak and nobody paid attention. In this way, a few weeks after meeting, I passed like a stranger.
But whenever I go to school, I regret it. Chen Ming is my only good friend. Only then did I know how important friends are, and I couldn't even think of them at that time.
He just accidentally broke it, but I blamed him like that. I asked my teacher to help me with my composition, but the teacher said in the comments that I believe you can write down the unhappiness between you and Chen Ming.
I decided to apologize to Chen Ming. Unexpectedly, the next day, an exquisite wooden boat appeared on my desk, and a small note was put inside, which read: Sorry! Are you still willing to be friends with me? I turned and smiled at him and said, "Would you like to play with me? .
In this way, we showed a beautiful smile ... Chen Ming and I both decided that this small wooden boat was evidence for us to reconcile. Take care of it and let it be a witness of our reconciliation! This also makes us realize that friendship is precious and priceless! From now on, our friendship will be stronger. After that, the word "friendship" is very pure in my heart and can't be stained with a trace of dirt, because true friendship has brought us many beautiful feelings after all. I wrote it myself. I don't know if it's good.
3. Continue to write the "signboard" composition. When my son ran his father's flower shop, his son John hung that signboard and received one customer after another like his father.
One day, the official went to the flower shop again and found that Dent's son was running it, which surprised and delighted him. The official said, "Hello, John! I feel honored that you came to run a flower shop. Your experience and attitude towards customers are not worse than your father's.
But I have some ideas about your logo. "John replied," go! I can change it. "
"Because you are so young, I don't want you to simply pick up the signboard like your father," the official said quietly. "Then you should give your flower shop a name! Now, the sign says: Astor Flower Shop sells beautiful and bright flowers. Two days after this happened, a customer came to this flower shop and bought some flowers.
I also gave John some advice: "Hello, I like your flowers very much, but when I saw the signboard in your shop, I thought it was dazzling." Especially the words "beautiful and bright".
Your flowers are beautiful, so what's the use of using signs to describe them? Why not delete these words? John listened to the customer's suggestion and simply changed the signboard to Esther's flower shop. The next day, a customer came to this flower shop. He said to John, "I like the flowers in your flower shop very much, but I don't like the signs in your shop." When people look at this shop, they know it is a flower shop. "
Why don't you sell the flower shop? "Later, only Astor was left in the flower shop. Dent's son's flower shop business is booming and his reputation is growing. John got married and gave birth to a son.
One day, John thought about the signboard in the flower shop for a long time, and suddenly realized something and took it off neatly.
4. Unit 7, Grade Three, Primary School: Continuing the composition book "Pipiru's Kite"
"There are no dragons in nature. This first dragon should be released into nature. " Cpaing thinks so. It quietly took a knife out of his pocket and cut off the dragon. The dragon rolled in the air and rose to the sky.
The kind dragon just wants to find a comfortable home. It flies, flies, flies to America! The president of the United States found the dragon over the United States and shouted eagerly, "Dragon, dragon! Start the helicopter and close the net! ! ! "The dragon was attracted by the scenery in America, so it drifted there. I was caught in the net if I wasn't careful! It took the dragon to react. It stretched out claws sharper than a knife, and only touched it lightly and broke the net. Good dragons sometimes get angry! In a rage, the dragon whirled in the air, and soon, a tornado blew over. The houses and people nearby have been rolled up! The dragon tore the roof and the house apart and tore the bricks piece by piece. In less than an hour, America was in ruins. Since then, Americans have been scared to hide in the house as soon as they see dragons.
The dragon didn't like America, so he left again.
Dragonfly arrived in the East China Sea of China. Fishermen in the East China Sea are so happy that they can't even say clearly when they see the dragon coming to the East China Sea! Donghai people take out all the fish, shrimps, crabs and mussels at home for the dragon to eat. Seeing that the fishermen here are simple, kind and hospitable, they have already settled here. The dragon tore off its three hairs, blew it, and its doppelganger floated to other seas.
Cpaing fell asleep in the distance and the dragon came to Cpaing's window. Cpaing dreamed of dragons and woke up. Cpaing hugged the dragon tightly and left tears with excitement.
Rural people continue to write beautiful compositions of 500 words in winter. Although I grew up in the city now, my birthplace and my grandmother's family are in the countryside. I have always yearned for and missed the beautiful scenery of the countryside. I always like to soak in the country during holidays and experience the fun of country life.
In rural families, most houses are single-family houses, and even rows of high-rise buildings are rare. They always fence the small yard in front of and behind their house, and plant all kinds of fruit trees in it, including peach trees, pear trees and bayberry trees ... In autumn, the yard is full of fruitful harvest scenes. You see, peach trees bear fist-sized peaches, which are tender and juicy, round and plump. Its curved branches tell the joy of harvest, which is particularly eye-catching against the dazzling green onions and lentils around. It is much more affordable than setting up a sculpture or building a fountain in front of a building in the city.
There are also some families who plant some magnificent big iron trees in front of their doors. They are like soldiers guarding the whole house, and they are like flowers and plants around the house. Other families like to build a vegetable garden behind the house. Every spring, the rape flowers in the garden are covered with golden coats, attracting countless bees and butterflies to visit, sniffing east and west, sometimes getting into petals, and sometimes hiding in leaves. ...
There are always a few cats, dogs and people in the countryside. If a stranger comes and walks into the yard, you will see a dog meet him, panting, staring at watery eyes, barking at you and defending his home to the death like an enemy. However, as soon as the owner comes out to say hello, the dog immediately stops barking and wags its tail rhythmically and obediently.
If you go out for a walk in the summer evening, you will often hear beautiful ensembles. Brother Frog cried cheerfully, and cicada sang "cicada, cicada" excitedly in the tree. The soprano textile girl also cooperated under the eaves. "Weave, weave, weave, weave, weave!" This harmonious movement of man and nature echoed around the countryside, dispelling all the fatigue of people working all day and accompanying them into a sweet dream.
No matter what time and season, people in the countryside will have unique and charming scenery. I love this beautiful rural scenery!
6. How to write a continuation composition When it comes to "continuation", we must first clarify what is "continuation". Continuation is to continue to make up stories according to the original content. Sometimes, with the origin of the story, follow the train of thought of the story and continue to write its process and results through imagination. Sometimes, we will tell you the ending of the story and flashback the cause and process of the story. Sometimes, we will give you a story and ask to continue. This is called reverse continuation. There is also a continuation, just telling us a scene, giving time, place and characters, so that the imagination space can be bigger. In short, the sequel should follow the clues, scope, personality and the author's ideas provided by the raw materials, and continue to write the development of the story plot and the activities, psychology, language and expressions of the characters, so that the plot of the original text can develop reasonably and form a complete story. 1. Read the materials provided to you carefully and think about what is the center of the whole article after the sequel. Take this as the center, spread the wings of imagination, and supplement the development of things and the ending of stories. When expanding imagination, we should pay attention to the following points: ① Imagination should conform to the development of the original text, and people and things should maintain continuity and consistency with the original text. ② Imagination should conform to the reality of life. Even if it is fiction, its content should be possible in real life. You can't make a story incredible in pursuit of its bizarre twists and turns. 3 imagine that the composition should be integrated with the materials provided, the center should be clear, the key points should be highlighted, and the things should be written in detail. 2. The continuation part is connected with the previous article. And it conforms to the plot development and character of the original text. It is reasonable for the story to develop backwards. 3. The language of the sequel should be as consistent as possible with the original language in style. Reading a story and writing a composition is to add an appropriate paragraph or a reasonable plot to the text around the center of the article, which is related to real life, extracurricular reading or movie stories. Continuation can also be combined with our real life, starting with the article provided by the teacher. You can also write the continuation and possible ending of the story according to the end of the article. When continuing to write an article, we should pay attention to the following points: first, we should make clear the direction and way of continuing to write according to the beginning, end or other clues provided. Second, when continuing, the plot development should be logical, the characters' thoughts should be consistent, and the narrative tone should be consistent from top to bottom. Let's take Pig Bajie eating watermelon as an example to talk about how to continue writing. Synopsis: Pig and Eight Rings. This article tells the story of Pig Bajie being lazy, greedy and stealing watermelons when four apprentices in the Tang Dynasty went to the Western Heaven to learn Buddhist scriptures. It shows his ridiculous, cute, clumsy and honest character, and also criticizes this selfish, greedy and lazy behavior. (For the original text, please refer to Lesson 35, Volume 6 of Five-year Primary School Chinese published by People's Education Publishing House. After reading the story of Pig Bajie eating watermelon, students will definitely think Pig Bajie is ridiculous. Or speculate on the story that will happen after pigs eat watermelon. Pay attention to the following points when writing this composition: 1. Inherit the above and make a natural transition. In order to make the next story or what he wants to say to the pig lively and interesting, and keep the integrity of the article structure, it is necessary to briefly describe the scene when the pig ate watermelon and his ambivalence at that time, but in order to highlight the key points, this part should be written briefly and naturally transition to the next paragraph. Or see this scene, what would you say to Bajie? Students can boldly imagine according to their own life experiences and try to be reasonable and thorough. They may think that Pig and Pig wolfed down watermelons, only cared about themselves, and forgot Master and Brother, which annoyed Wukong and was teased. On the way back to visit Master, the pig suddenly had a stomachache, making Master roll around and hating himself for being greedy. You might say that the pig deserved it and was unreasonable. Perhaps thinking that Bajie took on all the tasks of going to the Western Heaven to learn Buddhist scriptures in order to punish himself, and then showed his true skills, you might say that this is what disciples should do to honor master; Maybe I thought it was Bajie who told a story in front of the master and offered a humble apology. After that, he became kind, kind and not greedy. You may say, if you really get rid of the bad habits of laziness and greed, that would be great ... students may have a lot of golden ideas, so write them out and see who writes them more novel, reasonable and interesting. 3. Set a suspense to remind people that after all this, Bajie is still selfish, greedy and lazy, or does whatever he wants. What kind of image do you want the Eight Rings in your heart to be? I hope the students can imagine boldly, create a brand-new image of Bajie for readers, and win the favor of readers. Student example 1 "Pigs eat watermelons" is a sequel. When the Tang priest and his disciples went to a temple to learn Buddhist scriptures, they planned to beg for something to eat, but there was no one inside. Master had to send the Monkey King to find some wild fruits to fill the machine. Bajie, who stood by, couldn't wait and had to follow. But on the way, Bajie pretended to have a stomachache, and it was Wukong. But the pig flew away without saying anything. At this time, the pig lying under the tree found a watermelon and ate it all because of his greedy mouth. He also found four good reasons to deal with Master, Wukong and Friar Sand. What he never expected was that Wukong, who came back from picking wild fruits, had seen it clearly. Wukong suddenly let out a cry and turned into a flying bug while Pig was in a daze. After eating the last watermelon, the pig got into the pig's stomach. Throw the watermelon skin far away. Then Wukong came to Pig and dragged him to see the master. On the way back, Bajie fell four times in a row. Wukong thought that he deserved it. When he came to the master, Bajie had to tell him the truth in detail, and everyone laughed. The Monkey King shared the wild fruits he picked, and after eating, he went on his way. On the way to the west, Bajie went straight. "No, my old pig didn't lie to you," said the pig helplessly. Wukong doesn't care that much. Go on. The pig had a terrible stomachache and rolled on the ground. He thought it was all his own fault.
7. Composition Encyclopedia "Hometown" continued to write 800 words (20 years later) 194 1 this winter, the weather was particularly cold. After nearly four years of war with Japan, China finally declared war on Japan. That night, Zhou Zhihong, the head of the third regiment, looked at the topographic map in front of him and studied it carefully with a frown. How to fight this war with the least casualties and the greatest impact? Just as he was thinking, the guard came in and sent a message: "Report Colonel, two passers-by just found our team and wanted to join us. They were very enthusiastic and expressed their enthusiasm for contributing to the revolution. Li, deputy head of the delegation, has talked for them and asked me to report to you. "His eyes didn't leave the map, but he just nodded slightly. It took a long time to understand the meaning, and immediately looked up: "This is a big event! The revolutionary road does not exist in the first place. If more people walk, there will be a road! Come on, call them in and let me meet them. " "Yes," the guard turned around. When I came back, I was followed by two people. One of them is tall and dark. With another kind of satisfaction on his face. When Zhou Zhihong raised his head and met his eyes with enthusiasm for the revolution, a feeling of deja vu came to mind. Murphy? ! "Aquatic, is that you?" After staying for a while, Zhou Zhihong asked in a trembling voice. Memories that I thought I had forgotten suddenly appeared in front of my eyes. This is my playmate in my hometown when I was a child! After hearing the person in front of him call out his name with a familiar local accent. The tall young man froze. Finally, I hesitated to shout out a name that has always existed in my memory and never forgotten: "Brother Hong? Is that you? "
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"yes! Aquatic! Twenty years, I thought we would never see each other again! " The young man named Shui Sheng stepped forward and hugged his brother whom he hadn't seen for years. "Ha ha, your boy did a good job. They are all heads. " Hearing this, Zhou Zhihong sighed: "Yes, I held my breath in my heart when I invaded our land wantonly." As soon as I grew up, I left home to join the army. I can't watch others spoil our land! ""me too! I've been looking for the Eighth Route Army troops, and our hometown disappeared under the enemy's gunfire. From then on, I knew I could no longer look on coldly. "The joy when we first met was because the brothers had the same goal and the same patriotic feelings deepened. The two brothers can finally have nothing in common because of the difference in rank, unlike their parents. This is the preface of New Life. It can even be said that a new life has not yet begun, but some things have changed.
Please comment on my article. Continue to write The Emperor's New Clothes. The emperor came back from his tour and knew that the whole article was very interesting. Because it was written in the famous fairy tale fable "The Emperor's New Clothes", people were looking forward to it at that time.
After reading it, I suddenly realized that it was really good! "The emperor is not in the dressing room, but in the study" is very classic, and it is also clear that "water can carry a boat and overturn it", which is well known to all women and children. Generally speaking, it's good. However, if you can write your child's words more naively and appropriately, it will be in line with your child's identity. Looking forward to seeing your revised works! Your writing style is very good, with clever ideas and fresh ideas, which makes people feel suddenly enlightened after reading it, but in the end, after the emperor read the child's letter, the turning point was too sudden and not specific enough. It would be better if you could give full play to your own ideas, patiently structure it, and write it in detail after reading the letter, so as not to be wordy and empty.
It is a bit contradictory that a simple letter can make a stupid king wake up all day. Nothing is difficult in the world, but if you put your mind to it, plus your genius, I believe it will be more exciting.
Your composition is 1, continuing the emperor's new clothes. When the emperor came back from swimming, he knew that people were talking about him wearing nothing, so he was very angry and sent for the "Royal Weaver Girl".
2。 After a while, the "royal weavers" came and the emperor asked them, "How do you explain what people are talking about?" The weavers said, "Your Majesty, because your people are stupid, you can't see this dress, but you are extremely smart, so you can see it."
In order to prove his innocence, he has to make another dress, which only ambitious people can see. "The emperor was glad to let them do it quickly.
3。 A month later, another military parade began. The emperor paraded in the street in this dress. The minister and the people all pretended to be surprised and said, "Why did the emperor wear clothes?" Everyone knows that as long as someone says how beautiful this gorgeous dress is, the emperor will behead him as a traitor.
4。 The emperor returned to the palace and received a letter: 5.
Amy, maybe you are in the dressing room. I just want to bother you for a few minutes. You are like a big ship, and we ordinary people are sea water. We can hold you high, but we can also drown you. I hope you can be a good emperor and let us hold you forever.
6。 A naive child.
The emperor was very moved after reading it, and began to concentrate on governing the country and exiled the weavers. Since then, people have always said that the emperor is not in the dressing room, but in the study.
My comments are-a. Advantages: 1.
The first, second and third paragraphs are closely related, concrete and attractive. 2。
The central sentence of the article "The emperor is not in the dressing room, but in the study" is very good. B.
Disadvantages: 1 The fifth paragraph is out of touch with the above paragraphs.
The above is "clothes". This passage suddenly talks about the relationship between the emperor and the poor, which seems unnatural. In fact, this passage can completely express the meaning of "we can drown you, too" I hope you can be a good emperor, let us always support you "by talking about clothes." Of course, it is not easy to write this passage well.
2。 Paragraph 7 Why did the emperor suddenly like the study? There should be other language transitions here, otherwise the article will look unnatural.
D. consider the following words: ①.
Why don't you change "then" to "right away" Because changing it to "immediately" can highlight the imperiousness and impatience of the emperor.
2. It should be "you".
③. The word "everything" should be changed to "only".
This paragraph is accurate and good.
⑤ "in" should be "again".
9. Journey to the center of the earth continues to write prose. As the saying goes, "a good book benefits people for life." Journey to the center of the earth makes me unforgettable.
Journey to the Center of the Earth is a science fiction adventure novel written by French writer Verne. This book is very wonderful. It tells the story that Professor Lidenblock accidentally got a piece of parchment in an old book and found that his predecessors had been to the center of the earth. Professor Lidenblock is determined to do the same thing. He and his nephew set out from Hamburg and invited a tour guide to Iceland. They followed the guidance of their predecessors and descended from a crater in Iceland. After three months of travel, they experienced hardships and miracles and finally returned to the ground. In the book, Professor Hans, Professor Axel and Professor Lidenblock traveled around the earth in the center of the earth and almost lost their precious lives several times. They escaped from the mouth of the dragon and suffered a water crisis. ............................................................................................................................................................
The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs. When reading this novel, I seem to have experienced an adventure of exploring the center of the earth. When I think there is a Ma Pingchuan ahead, many crises come quietly. When I was in despair, the God of Destiny extended a helping hand. On the road of exploration, the protagonists went through hardships, and I couldn't help but be impressed by the heroism and perseverance of the protagonists in the story, and their fascination with science and persistent pursuit of spirit were even more touching.
While following the adventure of this book, I learned a lot about stratigraphic structure and archaeology, which increased my scientific knowledge. It also made me understand that the truth of science always begins with fantasy. Anyone can succeed by spreading the wings of imagination, strengthening faith and combining wisdom and courage.