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Correction comments on mung bean germination observation diary

1. These observation diary sentences are smooth and have no typos. You can draw the truth from the observation: I know that plants, like people, need constant cultivation to thrive. It can be seen that you are a very new child, but you must pay attention to the accuracy of expression.

2. These three diaries respectively introduce the process of soaking bean sprouts and the changes in bean sprouts. The article captures the changing characteristics of bean sprouts in different periods, and uses a large number of metaphors and personifications to describe bean sprouts vividly. The language of the full text is fluent and the sentences are fresh and lively, leaving a deep impression on people after reading it.

3. This is a set of observation diaries. The young author wrote down everything he saw and thought. It can be seen that the observation is more careful, and the young author's joy is beyond words. This article would be even better if the description was more specific!