the first article
country river (boutique)
I love country rivers.
in spring, the country river is full of vitality. The grass and trees on the shore have sprouted green buds. The river is flowing happily, and a flock of swallows skim the river gently. They flapped their wings and flew to the fields and the blue sky. At this time, taking a walk by the river and holding a mouthful of cool river water will definitely feel extremely relaxed and happy.
In summer, the running water of the country river sounds very fast. If it rains heavily for several days, the water level will definitely rise. In the hot season, the river becomes the best place for friends to play!
In autumn, the sound of running rivers in the countryside becomes smaller. Pieces of golden leaves floated to the water, rippling gently in tiny ripples, adding a touch of bright color to the river. In the fields on the shore, there is a bumper harvest scene, and farmers' uncles are happily harvesting Huang Chengcheng's millet and red sorghum.
in winter, the country river becomes quiet. The north wind inadvertently brought beautiful and charming snowflakes to cover the river, like covering the river with a thick quilt.
This is the river in the countryside all year round. It flows towards the sea day after day, flowing ...
I love the beautiful scenery of the river that changes endlessly all year round in the countryside!
Part II
My "He" (a boutique)
He places great hopes on me, full of confidence, and hopes that I will become a good girl with wisdom and morality, and that I will have a kind heart, treat the world with those who care about me, and he also hopes that ...
He is a special police officer, and his sense of responsibility has summed up his life. I thought that after 11 years with him, I could understand his heart and his thoughts, but it wasn't. I never knew him. I didn't get the message until I was 11 years old and his mother was in hospital!
His mother was admitted to the hospital recently because of gallstones. When he first heard the overwhelming news, he rushed to the hospital to visit his mother-I wonder if at that time, his heart was deeply scratched by a sword ... He kept on holding back his tears, held back his deep apologies for the storage, and a warm current gushed out.
In fact, he inadvertently told me that his parents were like candles, dedicating their youth to him selflessly. Now, he, like his parents, has devoted all his life-long love to me!
Do you know who he is? He is actually my father! My dearest father! !
how to write an excellent composition (grade four) based on the model essay for reference? Be aware that I have comments.
If you want to write a good article, you must read more books and accumulate more good words and sentences. Write a diary every day, so that your writing level will improve! First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice". These ancient summaries illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.
"We usually rely on accumulation, but the examination room depends on exertion", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.
(1) In terms of language, a "vocabulary" should be established.
vocabulary is the cell of an article.
in a broad sense, vocabulary not only refers to the collection of words and phrases, but also includes sentences and sentence groups.
There are two ways to establish a "vocabulary": the first is reading.
At ordinary times, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, and make reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs in a specific notebook, or make reading cards.
the second is life.
Usually, we should capture the lively spoken languages of the masses and write them down in a notebook or card that we carry with us, so that over time, every ounce of my arms makes a mickle, my words can be spoken in words, and my composition will be brilliant.
we should strengthen the accumulation of materials.
materials are the flesh and blood of the article.
Because many students usually don't pay attention to the accumulation of materials, they worry about it every time they write a composition, or make it up or copy it.
the way to solve this problem is to accumulate materials.
If you can, you can take a video camera and tape recorder, observe life deeply, take an active part in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time by sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes.
when recording, we should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects and scenery.
In this way, the articles written are flesh and blood.
(3) to strengthen the accumulation of ideas.
opinions are the soul of an article.
The unclear center of the article or the lack of profound ideas often indicate that the author's thoughts are superficial.
therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank".
there are two ways: first, be thoughtful.
"The more you think, the more you gain.
"Think deeply at ordinary times, and ask" why ","what "and" how "when something happens.
so we can see the essence through the phenomenon.
We should also record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.
Secondly, it is necessary to compile, that is, to extract famous sayings, aphorisms, etc.
In a word, the composition should be accumulated, and three writing warehouses, namely, vocabulary warehouse, material warehouse and thought warehouse, should be regularly counted, sorted and classified, and constantly enriched and expanded.
Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write a good article" of literary youth: one is to read more and the other is to practice more.
"seeing more" here means observing more.
This shows that if you want to write a good article and master skillful writing techniques, you should observe more, learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.
The Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners like this: "A writer must train himself into an observer with keen eyes and never give up! -it is a habit to exercise yourself to observation, as if it were second nature.
"Exercise observation into habit and second nature. This is a kind of kung fu that takes time to hone. It is very effective and remarkable.
Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and get the materials you need for your composition: you should be interested in something that seems small but is meaningful, and pay attention to the cause, process and result; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out into the society, get in touch with more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things and merge them into the long river of your own thoughts at any time.
This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with the eyes".
In a broad sense, observation with more practical significance refers to mobilizing all the five senses: listening with ears, feeling with body, and more importantly, thinking with heart and brain, so that observation will be more delicate and profound.
(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process.
As the saying goes, a good memory is better than a bad writing.
Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will make the observed materials go to waste and many valuable things will be wasted.
(3) observation should pay special attention to perseverance.
Don't commit "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not good for writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about life every day of your life, so that you can write a wonderful article.
Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you will often find it difficult to write.
I hope you can learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your observation ability of approval, and make great progress in your writing practice.
Third, if the meaning is high, the text will win the idea, which is to establish the center and intention of the article.
so what problems should the article pay attention to when formulating ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first essence of the article's conception. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the article's feelings and ideas are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration.
(2) Intention to be single-minded "Writing matters are more expensive than single-mindedness. Specialization makes perfect, and dispersion is stupid.
"No matter how complicated things are, the theme cannot be dispersed.
if an article wants to explain both this problem and that point of view, it is bound to be ambiguous if it rambles.
In fact, if you want to cover everything, you will definitely not meet in place. Besides, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if you express the center through several things, you should stick to the center, keep the goal consistent, and focus on the combination of materials and centers, so that all the power contained in materials can be directed at the center.
(3) The idea is to be novel. It is most forbidden to follow others, and the novel angle is the core of composition innovation.
The novelty of conception requires jumping out of the old box, not following the forward thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective, avoiding what others often write and writing what others have not written.
even the same writing object can always be cut in from many angles, as long as we break the stereotype of thinking, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from many angles and sides, or combine ... what kind of composition book to buy in the fourth grade of primary school
Composition topic A 1. Composition topic: Thank you: [1] Write who you thank. [2] Write a specific example to express your gratitude.
2. composition topic: I got into trouble. hint: write clearly what trouble you got into, how you got into trouble, your mood after getting into trouble, and what lessons you learned. 3. Composition topic: I overcame the hint: [1] Complete the topic.
on the horizontal line, you can write "difficulty", "timidity", "laziness", "dependence" and so on.
[2] focus on how you overcame it.
group b 1. composition topic: interesting tip: [1] complete the topic.
the horizontal line can be filled with "this class", "this event", "this activity" or someone, etc. [2] The key is to write "fun".
2. composition topic: nice tip: [1] complete the topic.
The horizontal line can be filled with "Dad", "Mom", "Grandma", "Teacher", "Neighbor" and so on; [2] Write down what is good about this person through specific examples.
3. composition topic: I like eating tips: [1] complete the topic.
Fill in "Watermelon", "Litchi", "Steamed Buns" and "Hairy Crab" on the horizontal line: [2] Write down the reasons why you like to eat, the process of eating, and especially your own feelings.
group c 1. composition topic: my weekend tip: [1] think about how your weekend is spent.
are you happy? Why? Are you unhappy? Why? [2] Write your true feelings and thoughts.
2. Composition topic: I'm really happy. Tip: [1] Complete the topic, and fill in "I got a hundred points", "I won the first prize", "I was praised" and "I traveled" on the horizontal line. [2] Write the reasons for happiness through specific examples and write your true feelings.
3. Topic: Civilization is around me. Tip: Write a civilized thing that happened around me, and the content should be true and specific.
group d 1. composition topic: I'm really happy. tip: [1] complete the topic, and fill in "I got a hundred points", "I won the first prize", "I was praised" and "I traveled" on the horizontal line. [2] Write the reasons for happiness through specific examples and write your true feelings.
2. composition topic: I got into trouble. hint: write clearly what trouble you got into, how you got into trouble, your mood after getting into trouble, and what lessons you learned. 3. Composition topic: Nice tip: [1] Complete the topic.
The horizontal line can be filled with "Dad", "Mom", "Grandma", "Teacher", "Neighbor" and so on; [2] Write down what is good about this person through specific examples.
1. Write a natural landscape. Every text in this group is like a magnificent picture, which makes us feel that nature is so wonderful.
someone once said that beauty is not lacking in the world, but the eyes that find it are lacking.
Yes, the cliff abyss and the sea of clouds with strange rocks are of course magical, and ordinary things such as wind, rain, lightning, flowers, birds, insects and fish are also amazing.
let's talk about the natural wonders we know.
to explain the strangeness of wonders, you can also talk about how such wonders were formed.
Students who listen can ask questions, make supplements and discuss topics of common interest.
On the basis of oral communication, write an exercise around a natural landscape that you have visited or learned.
You can write about famous tourist attractions or the scenery around you.
before you write, imagine what is the main highlight and what order you should write it in.
I hope that through your exercises, readers can imagine the picture and feel the wonder of nature.
2. Observe the diary. What have you observed recently? How to observe? What's new? What interesting things happened during the observation? Think back carefully and write down what you want to tell others most.
choose your own topic.
If you insist on writing observation diaries during continuous observation, you can choose a few diaries that you are satisfied with, carefully modify them and make them into an exercise. The topic can be Observation Diaries * Rules, and you should pay attention to the format of the diaries.
3. Write a fairy tale. Choose several animals or several objects, take them as the protagonists, imagine what might happen between them, and write a story.
You can also write the story of your puppet.
4. Write about your favorite animals: arrogant white goose, eccentric cat, loving and conscientious hen ... In the writer's pen, small animals are lifelike.
you must also want to talk about your favorite animals, right? Then try it.
Let me talk about what animals I want to talk about most. I want to say that the same animal forms a group and talk about the characteristics of this animal respectively.
You can talk about its appearance and temper, as well as how it eats, plays and rests.
then representatives from each group will report in class.
on the basis of oral communication, write about your favorite animals.
write down the characteristics of animals and express your true feelings.
After completing the first draft, students who write about the same animal communicate with each other, learn from each other's strengths, put forward suggestions for revision, and then revise their own exercises.