I can't wait to come to the orchard. What a colorful world this is! Teacher Qiu sprinkled colorful pigments in the orchard. Look! She gave the red apple, which was big and red, as if smiling at us like a cute little doll. She gave the yellow to the pear again. The pears in Huang Chengcheng are really beautiful! Its branches are like the braids of a pear doll, and it can be proud.
Start picking fruit. I saw Xiaogang suddenly climb to the apple tree, tore off a big red apple and tried to throw it into the bamboo basket below, but the smell of the apple made him drool. He couldn't help biting the apple and said, "This apple is so sweet! This orchard is really a first-class orchard! " Then he climbed the tree and picked it up. Xiaoqing is short and thin. She ran to the gardener's uncle's office and borrowed a ladder, and then asked several staff (uncles) to help lift the ladder to the pear tree. She climbed up the ladder as quickly as a little monkey and began to pick it up. Shout to Liang Liang below: "Catch Liang Liang"! Say that finish, just picked a pear and threw it in the bright direction. ...
There is an old ginkgo tree next to the orchard. Yellow ginkgo leaves are like handfuls of small fans, fanning away the summer heat. There is also a tall maple tree next to the ginkgo tree. Red maple leaves, like stamps, float around, bringing the coolness of autumn. Suddenly, a cool autumn wind blew, and ginkgo trees and maple trees fell one after another, like a colorful sea of flowers. Xiaohong saw it and ran to it. She picked up a big red maple leaf and said, "What a beautiful leaf! If only I went back and used it as a bookmark! " As soon as the voice fell, these beautiful leaves attracted many students.
Autumn brings a bumper harvest to the earth. Autumn brings joy to farmers' uncles. Autumn brings happiness to children. Autumn brings coolness to people. Autumn is really a good season! I love autumn!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article is about the narrative of scenery. The topics, words and quips at the beginning painted a beautiful picture of Qiu Jingtu for us, which laid a good foundation for the later development. The beauty of Autumn Orchard is vividly written by using rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. Praise the beauty of autumn.
The orchard is thriving in autumn, lovely in spring, with lush green leaves, blooming flowers and lush grass. Hot summer is also very interesting. The old man enjoys the cool under the tree and the children play in the water. The scenery in winter is equally charming, with goose feathers and heavy snow, the world is white, the earth is covered with silver, gorgeous ice sculptures and exciting skiing, which makes people unforgettable for a long time! However, what I like best is the autumn when fruits and vegetables are everywhere, especially the orchard in autumn!
Autumn is a colorful season and also a harvest season.
The orchard in autumn is full of vitality. Orange-red oranges are like small lanterns, swaying in the breeze, with a smile on their faces; Apple's general's red face finally showed a smile; The big and round pomegranate shows a row of teeth replaced by crystal silver, which is very cute; Huang Chengcheng, golden pineapples are arranged in an orderly way like pearls. How beautiful! Persimmons are big, fiery red, as delicate as handicrafts, and soft to bite. My Sweetie's persimmons are more delicious than peaches. ...
Go into the orchard and take a closer look! The red apple is like a shy little girl, afraid to speak. The eggplant ran gracefully, and its mouth cracked at the hour. Oranges and persimmons lit up the whole orchard with lanterns. The orchard is beautiful, flying like fireflies. Banana pear can't sleep, and it's stuffy golden. Round purple grapes are like mothers holding their children. Take a bite of a sweet and fragrant peach, and you will be full of praise and say, "Ah! How sweet! Great! Delicious! " Jujube, plump and thick, bent branches, the color changed from green to red, blushing, blushing!
The scenery of the orchard in autumn is particularly beautiful, and the lovely fruit dolls are also cultivated by the uncle of the fruit farmer himself. The fog gradually dispersed, the sun slowly rose to the blue sky, and everything in the orchard was in the light. Against the cool autumn wind, I reluctantly walked out of the orchard.
I like the unique and intoxicating orchard in autumn! I like the unique and intoxicating orchard in autumn!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article about scenery is good at meticulous description and delicate description. "Orange-red oranges, like little lanterns, swaying in the breeze with a smile on their faces" look like little gouache, which is really gentle and pleasant, taking care of each other from beginning to end, making the structure of the article complete.
Grandpa's Orchard During the summer vacation, my father took me to visit my grandparents in the country. As soon as I entered the door, my grandfather gave me a yellow and red peach. I took a bite. How sweet! After eating one, I kept shouting, "One more, one more." Grandpa smiled and said, "Yes, yes, I planted this myself, and there are many more!" " "After listening to my grandpa, how much I want to go to the orchard.
After a while, grandpa will go to pesticide the fruit trees. I said to my grandfather, "Grandpa, can I go to fight pesticides with you?" Grandpa readily agreed. After a while, grandpa came out of the room with a big mask on his mouth, a sprayer on his back and a bucket in his hand. Oh! What a style! Like a diver ready to go.
Like a cheerful bird, I followed my grandfather to the orchard. The scent of fruit wafted from his face. I seem to have come to Guo Hua in the Monkey King. The plants are covered with pale yellow peaches, the branches are bent and bear countless fruits, and some branches are supported by wooden sticks! At this time, a "ho" came to my ears, and grandpa began to pesticide the fruit trees. Grandpa shouted: "it's too hot, go and stay in the arbor!" " "At this time, I feel that the orchard is like a big steamer and I can't breathe. Hearing grandpa's cry, I immediately ran into the arbor. However, grandpa still shuttles back and forth in the orchard under the scorching sun. He holds a spray bar in his left hand and keeps pumping and spraying drugs in his right hand. I looked at grandpa's back and thought: Without grandpa's hard work, how could this orchard be full of fruit fragrance?
After lunch, I sent a meal to grandpa. On the way, I saw a familiar figure bending over and weeding carefully under the fruit trees in the scorching sun.
In the afternoon, my father and I are preparing to go home. My grandfather filled my schoolbag with peaches when we got on the bus. When the bus started, I was holding a big bag of peaches, and there was always a picture of my grandfather weeding in the orchard. I took a bite of a peach and it was so sweet to my heart.
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This article describing scenery is good at meticulous description and delicate description. For example, "the plants are covered with pale yellow peaches, the branches are bent by countless fruits, and some branches are supported by wooden sticks", which makes the article complete in structure and can be called a masterpiece.
Beautiful Shaping Orchard Shaping Park is a beautiful park.
When you enter the park, the gate faces two rows of long stone ladders. Go down the stone ladders and you will arrive at the square. The square is very wide and has become a good place for people to exercise. Every morning, many citizens come here to dance and fight. In front of the square is a stage, surrounded by children's favorite amusement facilities: thrilling pirate ship, exciting space flying car, super swing, and my favorite bumper car. Every holiday, it becomes a sea of joy for children.
Cross the square to the sculpture area of the park. Shaping Park was once called the window of Chongqing. There are world miniature landscape buildings such as Notre Dame de Paris, Angkor Wat, Leaning Tower of Pisa, Statue of Liberty and Sydney Opera House in the park. But it's not what it used to be. Most of the once world landscape buildings have been fragmented and covered with moss, and gradually disappeared in the tree-lined green forest, replaced by trees and flowers. In spring, beautiful flowers are in full bloom, pink peach blossoms and white pear blossoms ... they are competing for beauty. When you come here, you seem to have entered a colorful sea of flowers. When summer comes here, it loses the heat outside and immediately enters a cool world. At this time, many tourists enjoy the cool and play chess here.
Continue to go inside, and you will reach the depths of Shaping Park. There is a beautiful artificial lake here. There are many ships moored beside the artificial lake. Every holiday, the artificial lake is full of boats. There are many willows by the lake. Every spring, they grow long braids, as elegant as girls who are dressing up. There is a jumping stone bridge on the shore. I couldn't walk it when I was a child, but now it has become one of my favorite bridges. There is a lotus pond on the left side of the bridge. From January to June, the lotus flowers are blooming, fragrant and beautiful! Breeze blowing, ripples on the lake, shining in the sun, like a pile of glittering gold.
Shaping Park is really a beautiful big park!
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
This landscape prose describes the scenery in a wandering order, with coherent thinking and smooth writing. Shaping Park is a beautiful park. Shaping Park is really a beautiful big park! Echoing from beginning to end, the structure is rigorous. It's good exercise.
Honor Room Orchard At about 3 pm on the 9th, when the sun was shining, all the students in our class, led by their teachers, came to the newly-built honor room and witnessed the honors won by teachers and students of all ages for our school. I also feasted my eyes in the honor room. When I first entered the honor room, the students could not hide their inner excitement, like a full-fledged curious baby. When they look at it, their eyes sparkle with excitement and admiration, and they look forward to it. After I carefully visited the trophies of "Great Sports Culture" and "Great Art Pattern", I wandered alone in front of a beautiful and unique wooden shelf. The wooden shelf is filled with many awards and honors, large and small. On the wall behind the wooden bookshelf, there is also a row of exquisite color pictures, which are mounted in exquisite wooden frames, telling us four small aspects with refined and concise words, and arousing readers' imagination with exquisite pictures. It's really illustrated! On the glass wall on the left side of the wooden frame, there are rows of medals, some of which are dusty, some are illegible, and some are even rusty. In the big glass cabinet on the right side of the wooden frame, there is a photo of the campus expansion. There is a tall and magnificent building in the photo, which is our new teaching building. Its style is very similar to ours now, and the background is blue and clear, which seems to indicate the infinite future of Xiao Si. In front of the teaching building, there is a large green lawn with beautiful flowers beside it. In this spring, it is enjoying its beauty. Suddenly, I heard a "ah" and caught my attention. I followed the sound and saw a car full of fruit. Sunlight shields the golden light from the leaves and shines on the fruit. Bypassing a narrow cobblestone road, I came to the car and couldn't help exclaiming. There are all kinds of fruits on it, including watermelons, pumpkins, peaches, pomegranates and grapes ... Finally, I reluctantly returned to class. By visiting the honor room. In the ornamental orchard, you can see the glory of teachers and students in past dynasties and the hard-won trophies. At the same time, I am also asking myself: Do I win honor with sweat like teachers and students of all ages?
Teacher zw.Liuxue86.com commented:
It is indescribable, and the center is not prominent.