This is the first thing to do when writing a composition. Otherwise, it will directly lead to "the article is not on topic" and "a thousand words written will lead to thousands of miles of digression." How can I examine the question well? According to the form of common composition topics, they can generally be divided into two categories: proposition composition and material composition. To examine the topic of a propositional composition is to examine the specific requirements of the given article title, to review the intention of the topic, to clarify the requirements outside the topic, and to determine the "title". Through reviewing the questions, clarify the content scope, time range, quantity range, person range, location range, etc. of the composition. Cannot exceed the given range. When reviewing the topic of material composition, we must mainly grasp it from two aspects: first, it must be "inseparable" from the ideological content of the material, and second, it must be "inseparable" from the requirements of the composition form.

1． Propositional composition

Let’s first focus on the topic review of propositional composition and what things should be paid attention to.

Determine the content scope

For some topics, stipulate the writing content. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, you must determine the scope of content specified in the topic: if you are describing a person, what person should be remembered; if you are describing a narrative, what things should be described; if you are describing a scene, what scene should be described; if you are describing an object, what should be described, etc.

Wonderful exercises

Interesting stories from childhood

Childhood is a pure land without weeds or dirt, and a clear and unobstructed sky. The innocence and sweetness flowing here will always make people have unforgettable memories.

I remember when I was 4 years old, my superstitious grandma told me: "If you cut off the hair on your arms, you will become a madman." After hearing this, I was naive and curious, and my hands were itchy. , I always wanted to give it a try, but I was afraid that my family and relatives would worry about me. But I didn’t try it, so I kept thinking about it. The more I thought about it, the more I wanted to try.

So, I am going to try it right away. I took out the terrible scissors and slowly approached a hair on my left arm with my trembling right hand. Just as I was about to cut, I stopped again. I thought to myself: "If I really become a lunatic, will I be like a rat crossing the street and everyone will shout and beat me? Will my father, mother and grandma no longer love this silly child?" The more I thought about it, the more frightened I became. I hesitated for a long time before cutting off the hair on my arms. As soon as I finished cutting, I got into the bed without caring about anything and fell asleep without even realizing it. When I woke up, I found that I was still the same me, a normal little girl. So, regardless of everything, I happily jumped to my grandma and said coquettishly: "Grandma, grandma! I cut off a hair on my arm today, but I didn't become a madman!" After hearing this, grandma smiled. , touched my little head and said nothing.

This interesting childhood incident has remained in the floodgates of my memory. But as I grow older, I understand: You must believe in science and not superstition in everything.

Wonderful Clicks

①The young author describes the story of cutting arm hair through memories. This incident not only happened in childhood, but it was also very interesting and met the requirements of the article title.

②The process of the matter is clearly explained, and the psychological description of the characters is vivid and realistic.

③The end points out the truth learned from it and deepens the theme of the article.

Determine the time range

Some questions stipulate the writing range in terms of time. Therefore, the composition must reflect events within the specified time frame.

Wonderful exercises

When the teacher is not there

"Ding Ling——", the bell rang for morning reading class, but the teacher did not come. Attend class. As the monitor on duty, I looked anxiously in the direction where the teacher came from.

Suddenly, hurried footsteps came from the corridor, followed by a loud "Report!" I looked back and saw that it was Zhang Qing, the Chinese teacher's neighbor. I saw her face turned red, and she said out of breath: "Oh no, the Chinese teacher - she is sick - can't come to class." After hearing this, I felt like a mess. What to do? The classmates also started talking about each other, and the class was "boiling".

My brain was running rapidly: "What should I do now that the teacher is not here? Today I am the monitor on duty and should be in charge of the class. Now... yes, that's it!" So, I I cleared my throat, walked quickly to the podium, and said loudly, "Students, please be quiet now!" Everyone stopped talking immediately, and all 55 pairs of eyes in the class looked at me. I stood on the podium and directed everyone like a little teacher.

"Xiaofen, come and read!" "What's the lesson?" "Lesson 17." So, the students started reading loudly, and suddenly the sound of books in the classroom was loud.

Although the class has temporarily settled down, I am still extremely anxious. Because after the morning reading class, there is the morning exercise class. Without a teacher to lead the class, I am afraid that the students will be in chaos. The time was coming soon, and I was stamping my feet anxiously. Why hasn’t the teacher come yet? The bell rang, and I had to bite the bullet and say to everyone: "Students, the teacher is not here today. I will lead the morning exercise class. I hope everyone will attend this class in an orderly manner." "Yes!" The students answered in unison. Even so, I was still worried, for fear that something would happen. But my worries are unnecessary - the students abide by the discipline, the team is neat, and the movements are consistent, it is better than when the teacher was there! A stone in my heart finally fell to the ground.

When I took the team back to the classroom, I found that the teacher was already waiting for us. There was a happy smile on the teacher's face, and I felt happy from the bottom of my heart.

Wonderful clicks

① The question is answered accurately and the time range is "when the teacher is away".

②The structure is clear and clearly describes the two things that "I" boldly and appropriately handled when the teacher was away - morning reading and morning exercises.

③The narrative is appropriate, and the characters’ psychological activities and events are real and natural.

Determine the quantity range

Some essay topics stipulate the quantity of selected materials. When reviewing the topic, you must be careful not to choose a topic that exceeds the scope. If you choose too many materials, not only will it not work, but it will make mistakes.

Wonderful exercises

An incident that happened after the exam

The midterm exam was over. Teacher Meng asked me and squadron leader Li Haixia to grade math papers in the office . He took out his own paper and marked the standard answers one by one. In the end, the total score was 98 points. My heart feels sweet. But when I think about it, if I grade my own papers, others will definitely say this and that when they find out. So, I asked Li Haixia to review it for me. Li Haixia looked it over and said, "Yes, it's 98 points. It seems that you are number one in the class. It's really not easy!" I said, "It hasn't been approved yet. Maybe there are people who can answer better than me!" ” But I was secretly happy. Humph, if I wasn't first place, how could I be the math class representative?

I continued to correct while humming a song, and suddenly I found that one paper scored 99 points. When I looked at the name, I saw it was Li Shihua, the representative of the Chinese class! I really didn't believe my eyes - Li Shihua was better at Chinese than me, but he couldn't beat me in math every time. Why did he get to my head this time? I opened my eyes wide, looked at the standard answers, and rechecked each question one by one, not even missing a decimal point. But I really can’t find any place where I can deduct points anymore. I secretly thought to myself: A math class representative who usually scores first in the class unexpectedly failed the Chinese class representative this time. It’s so embarrassing. How will teachers and classmates treat me in the future? Thinking of this, I was heartbroken and deducted 2 points from one answer, changing Li Shihua's total score to 97 points. I thought to myself, I just won’t let you surpass me!

After doing this, I felt uneasy for some reason. My face felt hot, my head broke out in cold sweat, and the hand holding the pen trembled. Li Haixia is still correcting attentively. I looked over and saw her putting a bright red "X" on a scrawled number. I said, "You were too harsh in your approval. The number is correct, but it was not written clearly." As I said that, I opened the paper and saw that it was Li Haixia's.

At this time, I felt my face burning even more intensely, and I didn’t dare to look directly at Li Haixia, for fear that she would notice my embarrassment. I quickly turned over Li Shihua's paper and changed the score from 97 to 99. Then I breathed a sigh of relief, and the stone in my heart finally fell to the ground...

Wonderful clicks

①The title of this essay stipulates that you must write "one thing" after the exam "Thing", therefore, the author only chose one thing to write about.

②The story of what happened is written vividly and vividly, enough to reflect the author's psychological process from "vanity" to changing "vanity", and the language expression is true and vivid.

Determine the range of persons

Some essay questions stipulate the persons for writing. When reviewing the questions, you must determine the range of persons according to the requirements and make it clear whether you are writing about yourself or someone else. Which should be used? If it is in the first person, never use the second or third person.

Wonderful exercises

My deskmate

"Unlucky, so unlucky!" At the beginning of the new semester, the head teacher transferred a boy who was very poor in studies to Come next to me, sit with me. I was really angry at that time because he couldn't do anything, so I hated him and wanted to stay away from him all the time.

His name is Mao Hongwei. He has a round head and looks silly. Every morning when I come to school, this "annoying guy" is already in his seat. When he sees me coming, he smiles and says, "Wu Yao, you're here!" "However, I didn't appreciate it and always gave him a fierce look. Many times, I threw the waste paper with ink on his desk. He never said anything, he just smiled at me honestly and said The waste paper was thrown into the trash can. So, I pretended not to see what the teacher wrote on the blackboard, so I stood up and deliberately pushed towards him, often pushing him to the ground and causing his butt to bloom. I still smiled nonchalantly and got up from the ground.

Last Wednesday, at the end of the third period, a classmate asked me to explain a question to him. When I finished explaining the question, I walked towards my seat. , the teacher was already handing out homework books. There were two notebooks, one good and one bad, on our table. Mao Hongwei was sitting in his seat. I wanted to run over and grab the good notebook, but I was afraid that my classmates would laugh at me, so I had to. I thought I was unlucky and thought: A nuisance like him would definitely snatch away a good book. But the situation was exactly the opposite. Mao Hongwei's behavior surprised me. I saw that he tore the book into pieces without hesitation. He took the "bad" notebook and wrote his name, then put the intact notebook on my desk. What a surprising move! His behavior made me feel ashamed and made my heart pound. Jumping hard. You know, this is not a simple action, it contains a kind of sincere emotion and embodies a noble quality.

My deskmate, he really impressed me. ! Compared with him, I look so small. Although he can't get the ideal score in the exam paper and publish excellent articles in the essay selection, I can see from his behavior that he has a shining mind. < /p>

Wonderful clicks

①In the article, "I am me, he is he", the use of personal pronouns is accurate and meets the requirements of the title.

②Use "I" and "I". The contrast between "him" and "him" highlights the selfishness of "me" and the value of "him". It is very contagious and persuasive.

Determine the scope of the location

Some questions require This requires us to grasp the location of the incident in accordance with the requirements of the topic when reviewing the topic, and cannot take what happened on the playground into the wild.

Wonderful exercises

Song and dance party in the kitchen

One night, I was sleeping in bed. Suddenly, the sound of "ding dong, ding dong" in the kitchen woke me up. I got dressed and quietly came to the kitchen door. , opened the door a small crack. Through the crack of the door, I saw pots, chopsticks, spoons, and bowls having a grand singing and dancing party. Unexpectedly, the director turned out to be Mr. Guozi, and even more unexpectedly, the table became the stage of this grand party. .

"Now, the party officially begins," the host Miss Spoon said, "First, Miss Chopsticks and Mr. Wan'er will perform a dance - tango dance. "That couple danced really well. They held their heads high and their chests high. They danced really well and received rounds of applause from the audience.

Miss Spoon came to the stage and did He made a beautiful appearance and said: "Now, let's ask Mr. Cup to tell everyone a story. "Mr. Cup tells it vividly and deserves to be called the "King of Stories."

"Next, is the cooking performance of Mr. Pot and Little Shovel! "said the host. Pot and shovel are the best cooking brothers and sisters. They made braised pork, green vegetables, etc. for the audience to taste. After tasting the delicious dishes, the host said: "Let's break up with singing! ”

At this time, the night is already deep, and it’s time for me to go back to sleep. I didn’t expect that the elves in the kitchen are so versatile.

Wonderful clicks

< p>①This is an anthropomorphic fairy tale, which is very interesting. It can be seen that "dreams" can also be turned into compositions!

②The author uses fairy tales to inspire imagination and delight the soul. < /p>

③The "place" is concentrated and reasonable. The "kitchen" is the theater, and the "pots, bowls, spoons" and so on are the actors; these "actors" are most suitable for acting in the "kitchen".

Determine the "Title Eye"

The "Title Eye" is the key word in the composition title. It is the core of the meaning of the composition title and the focus of the specific content to be reflected in the composition.

You must grasp the key when studying and doing things. This principle is used in composition, which is to grasp the key of the "question eye".

Wonderful exercises

An interesting thing

Every Spring Festival, my father has to grit his teeth and go to the barber shop to be "generous". This year's Spring Festival is coming soon, and my mother bought a complete set of hairdressing equipment out of anger, preparing to be "self-reliant".

When my father came back, my mother and I sang along and treated him hard and soft: from the high price of haircuts outside to the importance of every penny saved to the economic development of the family. With our sharp tongue, we finally defeated Dad. My mother and I pushed him onto the chair, and my father raised his head and sighed: "Okay, let's go for it!" He was quite heroic in facing danger.

Amidst the "click" sound of mother's scissors, father's hair was cut off in circles. At this time, my mother said: "You are backing your head, it is too unfashionable, change it to 'partiality'!" "Okay!" Dad agreed. After a while, my mother said to herself: "How about changing the 'board size'?" Dad looked helpless and said with a wry smile: "It doesn't matter, it's just a bald gourd!"

"The cut is over!" Mom yelled. When I saw the shape of my father’s head, poof! The water I just drank in my mouth spurted out. I squatted on the ground laughing so hard that I couldn't breathe. Dad's head felt like a piece of watermelon rind had been buckled, and it was crooked. While looking in the mirror, my father caressed his pitiful hair with great treasure, and said jokingly: "This time, let me lead a new trend in hairstyles." Mom muttered to the side: "It's because the scissors are not very easy to use. Besides, It's not the same as shearing sheep." I suppressed my laughter and hurriedly said: "Okay, okay, it's a good opening, the first customer is free..."

Exciting clicks

①The exercise is about a very common thing - mother giving father a haircut, but it expresses the joyful atmosphere of a harmonious family.

② "Fun" is reflected in: Dad's "heroic" spirit, helplessness about the bald head, and simple and humorous language. These are all derived from the author's careful observation of daily life.

③Through this article, we can realize that as long as we observe carefully and experience with our hearts, we can extract "interesting" things from many ordinary things in daily life.

Determine the meaning of metaphor

Metaphor is a metaphor, which is a commonly used rhetorical method. This rhetorical method helps illustrate the problem vividly. Many of the composition questions we usually see use this rhetorical method. Therefore, it is very important to understand the metaphorical meaning of the title. For example, in the title "An Unforgettable Scene", the "scene" should refer to the performance on the stage. But it has a metaphorical meaning and can be used to illustrate a glimpse, a shot, a scene, etc. in life. Therefore, before composing, you must first determine its metaphorical meaning to increase the connotation of the article.

Wonderful exercise

An unforgettable scene

That was last year. At noon on a Sunday, my grandma took me to play on the street. When we came home, we were waiting for the bus at the Renmin South Road Bus Station.

With a "pop" sound, an uncle spit. Thick strands of phlegm hung on the flower beds on the roadside, which made everyone feel very uncomfortable. At this time, an old lady on duty came up and said: "Young man, you have violated the city's health management regulations. Please wipe up your spit and pay a fine of 5 yuan." The uncle tilted his neck and said: " Who spit? Did you see me spit?" The old lady said patiently, "Everyone saw it!" But the uncle refused to admit it and even quarreled with the old lady. Suddenly, the noise stopped, and I followed everyone's gaze and saw a little boy carefully wiping the phlegm stains with a piece of paper. He was about four or five years old, with a red face, wearing a grass-green military uniform, and a small toy pistol on his waist. People were stunned. After the little boy finished wiping, he crossed the slow lane and threw the paper into the garbage bin. Then, he walked up to the old lady and said one word at a time: "Grandma, I don't have any money. Can I give you this gun?" The old lady stroked his head and said, "Good boy, you didn't spit." "Why do you want your toy gun?" The little boy said, "My father spit, and I paid for him."

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The uncle's face turned red. He hurriedly took out five yuan from his suit pocket, stuffed it into the old woman's hand, turned around, took the little boy and hurried away, disappearing into the crowd. ...

Wonderful clicks

①The "scene" reflected by the author in the composition is a real shot in real life and something that happened on a specific occasion. This is an exasperating and thought-provoking thing, and it captures the metaphor of the title very well.

② This "scene" reflects a scene of "father and son confrontation" - - The vulgar father is ashamed in front of the childlike child. It reveals the problem in a compact and vivid way, making this "scene" appear meaningful and valuable.

2. Material composition

What we talked about above is about the review of propositional compositions. I hope that the children can have a good grasp of them. Here, we will briefly talk about the review of material compositions. I will summarize them in two aspects. There are two methods.

1) "Inseparable" method

This method requires that the center of the exercise and the ideological content of the material should be "inseparable". When rewriting, amplifying, abbreviating, rewriting, continuing, imitating, etc. a narrative, you must understand the six elements of time, place, person, event, cause, and result, as well as the central idea of ??the material. Only in this way can you write. What an article that meets the requirements.

Wonderful exercise

Expansion of "Swallowing Jujubes"

Original text:

A young man bought it. I bought a bunch of fruits, including pears and dates, and sat on the roadside to eat them. An old man saw them and said, "Young man, don't eat too many pears. Although these are good for your teeth, eating too much will damage your spleen."

The young man asked: "What about dates?"

The old man said: "Jujube is good for the spleen, but unfortunately it hurts the teeth, so we can't eat too much."

The young man thought for a while and said, "That's easy. I'll eat the pear and chew it with my teeth without swallowing it. As for the date, I'll swallow it whole without chewing it with my teeth." ”

Extension:

This is a fruit harvest season. In the bustling market, there are red apples, yellow pears, purple-red grapes, lantern-like Persimmons... The vendors were shouting and selling, and it was very lively.

A young man came in from the entrance of the market. He was wearing a green robe and a bun on his head. Guazi has a pair of bright eyes on his face, a high nose, and a small mouth under his nose. The young man is holding a cloth bag in his hand and swaying it from left to right as he walks. , bought two kilograms of pears at a pear stall; seeing that the dates at another stall were also good, he bought a few more kilograms of dates, and then sat under a tree on the roadside and ate them with relish. /p>

After a while, he had eaten a pound of pears and half a dozen dates. At this time, an old man over sixty years old came from a distance, with a bronze face covered with wrinkles and deep eyes. His eyes sunk deeply into his eyes. He stroked his white beard and asked the young man: "Young man, what are you eating?" The young man raised his head and looked at him, and said with a smile: "Old man, I am eating pears and dates." It tastes really good. Would you like to try it too? "Oh, boy, I won't eat it." But I have to remind you, don't eat too many pears. Although these are good for your teeth, eating too much will damage your spleen!" the old man advised sincerely.

The young man was confused. , and asked: "Pear hurts the spleen, but what about dates?"

The old man thought for a while and said to him: "Although jujube does not hurt the spleen, you cannot eat too much. It will hurt your teeth!"

The young man thought for a while and said: “Old man, that’s easy to handle. When I eat pears, I can chew them with my teeth without swallowing them, which will not hurt my spleen. For dates, I can swallow them whole without chewing them with my teeth. In this way, neither the spleen nor the teeth will be hurt.

The old man waved his hands repeatedly and said, "No, no, that's not how to eat fruit." There is always a pattern in everything. If you do as you say, you might get something wrong. ”

Wonderful clicks

①The original text is less than 200 words, and this expanded text is more than 500 words, about three times the original text.

②The author is based on The content of the original text imagines the environment at that time and the appearance, language, and demeanor of the two people, and the description is vivid and specific.

③ While highlighting the center of the original text, the writing is consistent and can be said to be "inseparable".

2) "Tight to the point" method

This method requires that the writing should reflect the requirements of the composition form in every aspect and be "tight to the point". In material composition, some require the material to be changed in style, some require changing the person, some require changing the order of the narrative, and so on. When reviewing the topic, you should pay attention to every detail of the composition requirements. They must be "perfectly consistent", otherwise it will be easy to go off topic.

Wonderful exercise

Rewrite of "Gift to Wang Lun"

Original poem:

Li Bai was about to go on a boat when he suddenly heard singing on the shore. .

The water in Peach Blossom Pond is a thousand feet deep, not as deep as Wang Lun’s love for me.

Rewrite:

Today, the weather is exceptionally sunny, with white clouds floating in the blue sky, and the sun hanging high in the sky. Everything looks so beautiful.

Last night, my friend Wang Lun and I drank, sang, and talked late into the night. You know, we have been close friends for many years! But Jing County is not a place where I will stay for a long time. I plan to say goodbye today. For this reason, I had booked a boat the day before and repeatedly asked Wang Lun not to come see me off, so as not to be sad.

I got on the boat and was about to sail when I suddenly heard rhythmic singing from the shore. I looked back and saw Wang Lun standing by the Peach Blossom Pond, singing a song to see me off. Ah, didn’t you agree last night not to let him send me off? Wang Lun's friendship for me is really deeper than the water in Peach Blossom Pond!

With tears in my eyes, I waved goodbye to Wang Lun. Alas, we say goodbye today. I wonder when we will see each other again.

Wonderful Clicks

① The exercise rewrites the original poem into a complete narrative in the first person.

②The theme of the rewritten article is consistent with the original poem, which can be said to be "perfectly accurate".

③Enrich the content of the original poem through reasonable imagination and enhance the readability of the article.